33. On-site proposition composition

The three teachers in the conference room glanced at each other, and Huang Juemin smiled: "Very confident." ”

Li Xiang: "When the year is bad, if there is food at home, there will be no panic in my heart." Although I am not having a good time now, with my ability, I don't need to panic about the future. Moreover, I can sit here today, sitting in front of the three teachers, and I believe that in the hearts of the three teachers, they think the same thing about me. ”

Huang Juemin said: "It's good to have self-confidence, we really appreciate you, and we have an in-depth understanding of your usual performance, so we gave you this opportunity." This is the Faculty of Letters, so I will pay more attention to your language, and your college entrance examination essay, that is, this "Kaleidoscope", got a full score, which shows that your writing ability is very strong, and it is even more rare to have ideas and thoughts, can you tell us what you thought when you wrote this "Kaleidoscope"?"

The title of the college entrance examination essay is about an old man who fell on the side of the road, and people watched, some thought they should be helped, and some thought they should not be helped...... Candidates are asked to write an essay from the perspective of their choice from this material.

Li Xiang wrote "Kaleidoscope", the kind of kaleidoscope is the kind of children playing, looking in with their eyes, they can see a kaleidoscopic variety of different scenes. "The old man fell on the side of the road" is like a kaleidoscope, from which you can get a glimpse of the changeability of human nature and the complexity of society, not only the people passing by, but also the "group of elderly people who have fallen".

After listening to Li Xiang's introduction, Huang Juemin's face did not fluctuate, and he couldn't see his joy or anger.

Then the three of them asked some questions one after another, which should have been prepared a long time ago, and the three of them took turns to ask questions.

Huang Juemin is the vice dean of the Faculty of Arts, and the other two around him are the director of the admissions office and the other is the associate dean of the School of Foreign Languages.

The vice president of the School of Foreign Languages even communicated with Li Xiang in spoken English.

This situation lasted for an hour, and after the three of them exchanged words and discussed for a while, the vice president of the School of Foreign Languages left, leaving only Huang Juemin and the director of admissions.

Huang Juemin said: "The last question, the person who drove into you a week ago has been sentenced, do you know?"

"Yes. ”

A week ago, the verdict in the "608 case" was announced, and the suspect was sentenced to death for intentional homicide and endangering public safety. The other side appealed, so it is still struggling.

This is just a lingering breath, the possibility of appealing to the judgment is almost non-existent, the case is clear, the evidence is strong, and there is no possibility of a reversal.

Huang Juemin: "I believe you also understand the other party's situation. ”

Li Xiang nodded.

"Do you hate him?"

Li Xiang nodded: "Of course I hate." ”

Huang Juemin said: "There must be pity for hateful people, and of course, it can also be said to be ridiculous. He thinks that society is unfair to him, which makes him unable to fulfill his ambitions, so he hates society. Now, I'll give you ......"

He looked at the clock on the wall, and it was half past ten in the morning.

"I'll give you an hour and a half now, you write an essay based on the case that happened to you, according to the standards of the college entrance examination, the number of words cannot be less than 800 words, the angle is optional, and the topic is optional. ”

"Good. Li Xiang replied cleanly, now writing the proposition composition, in his vision last night.

"It's pen and paper. Huang Juemin handed the pen and paper to Li Xiang and said, "Then you write here quietly, let's go out, and I'll get the composition at 12 o'clock." ”

Li Xiang nodded.

Huang Juemin saw that Li Xiang had already begun to think, so he said to the director of the admissions office: "Lao Zhou, then go to my office and sit down first, and I will trouble you later." ”

Lao Zhou waved his hand with a smile: "It's not troublesome." ”

The two went out, and before closing the door, Huang Juemin said again: "On the way, you can go to the toilet, turn right out of this door, and go to the end." Well, don't bother you. ”

After the two left, the door was also closed, and the conference room was suddenly unusually quiet, and then the humming sound of air conditioning became more and more obvious. The bright summer sun peeks out of the window, and outside the window is a lake, sparkling, with the breeze blowing the rippling water and waterfowl flying on the water. Looking into the distance, on the other side of the lake, there are ant-like students walking in the sun, and from time to time there are green electric sightseeing cars passing by, which are full of students who do not want to walk in the sun.

The mobile phone in Li Xiang's pocket suddenly vibrated and pulled back his mind.

Before he entered the conference room, he had put his phone on silent and didn't answer the phone, and then stopped himself.

Although no one supervised him at the scene, and Huang Juemin did not say that he was not allowed to look at his mobile phone, Huang Juemin said that he would write essays according to the standards of college entrance examination essays. Since the requirements for composition are in accordance with the standards of the college entrance examination, the discipline of the examination room should also be in accordance with the requirements of the college entrance examination.

Li Xiang still has this awareness, he doesn't want to cause gossip because he answers a phone call halfway.

How do I get started with this article?

Li thought about it and thought quickly.

Huang Juemin set this topic, which has advantages and disadvantages for him. The advantage lies in his personal experience and deep feelings, and the disadvantage is that he is a victim and is easily swayed by personal emotions and writes some resentful words.

During the period of recuperation, he had read many reports about this case, and he had an understanding of the incident, as well as the work and life of the suspect.

Taking advantage of this opportunity, Li wanted to look at the entire case from the beginning and try to look at the perpetrator calmly from the perspective of a bystander.

After thinking about it for about ten minutes, he began to write: "When it comes to possessions, people always think that it is a considerable amount of wealth. When we usually say that someone has a fortune, we admit that he has a lot of wealth, but we don't believe that an egg can be regarded as a piece of wealth! However, Zhuangzi has long said that there are people who 'seek wealth by seeing eggs', so we should not underestimate the wealth of an egg. ”

At 12 o'clock, Huang Juemin and others appeared in the conference room on time, and Li Xiang had finished waiting for five minutes.

"Is it written?" asked Huang Juemin as he pulled out a chair and sat down.

Li Xiang handed him the blank paper full of words: "It's already written." ”

Huang Juemin looked down, the handwriting was a little grassy, the grass was beautiful, a whole side of white paper was written, he turned to the other side, and also wrote more than half of it, estimating that there were more than 1,000 words.

So many words are all handwritten, and the time is relatively tight in an hour and a half, and it is really impossible to write without cursive.

"Old Zhou, you look first. Huang Juemin said.

"You come, you come, I cooperate with you, and I can't read the composition. Lao Zhou waved his hand and didn't answer.

Huang Juemin was not reluctant, sat down, looked carefully, and saw that the title was "An Egg's Belongings".

The article tells a story, saying that a man got an egg, excitedly ran to his wife and said that he was rich, the wife asked where the money was, he took out the egg from his pocket to show his wife, saying that this is his belongings, but to really get rich still need to wait for ten years, ten years, eggs hatch chickens, chickens lay eggs, and so on, and finally accumulate wealth, ten years later, you can realize the dream of getting rich.

It's really a whimsical dream, but the first step in this dream of making a fortune is a kind of trick of stealing and cheating, because this egg is picked up by him, and the hen that hatches the eggs is also ready to borrow from his neighbor.

He wanted to get into the wrong, from an egg fantasy to the life of a monopoly ten years later because of this egg, his heart was so happy, he got carried away, and wanted to marry a beautiful little wife, but he annoyed the bad wife under the same roof, and in a fit of anger, she smashed the egg that contained the sweet dream on the ground.

Well, the dream is shattered.

Li Xiang wrote in the article: "His wealth accumulation plan is not based on reality at all, but replaces reality with utopian dreams, and replaces hard work with complaining about others. Only truly honest workers have always understood the truth that labor produces wealth, and can they get rid of all the ideas of making a fortune, and use their hard work to create wealth and realize their dreams in a down-to-earth manner. ”

The whole article does not mention that case and that person, but the theme is very pertinent, not limited to this one thing, but tells about such a group of people who dream of getting rich all day but do not work hard.

When they see an egg, they dream of becoming a rich man, and once their dreams are shattered by the cruel reality, they begin to complain about the heavens and others, full of negative energy, and hate everything around them, which leads to crime.

"Good. After reading it, Huang Juemin praised, "Lao Zhou, you can also take a look, the writing is good, and it has more profound meaning." ”