A little whining from the sun
It has been more than 200 days since I officially put pen to paper in April.
The number of words is about the same, and a full 137w words are written.
Set sail for 37w, reunite again for 17w, idol 83w.
If you read my book from the very beginning, you should know that when I first broke up, it was a frequent occurrence.
At that time, Codeword had a passion for expressing what he wrote to everyone.
I'm not a fan of the hy circle.,When I wrote the first book, I even had to look up information while writing.。。
The search is still the most basic information.
There is no outline, there is no setting, and the plot began to collapse after the book was written almost 40w words.
Because I don't know how to write it later, and I don't know what to write.
I never write a book that is simply a daily life, but must have a main thread throughout the whole text.
I didn't set sail, so I couldn't write anymore.
However, this book is enough for a pure newbie to satisfy me.
After that, I want to use the readership of my first book to formally calm down and write it well.
This is the story of reuniting Lim Yi and Taeyeon.
It's a pity that it's not like words.
I'm a person who lacks a sense of identity.
If no one likes it, I'm not motivated.
I think the character outline of the reunion is the most brilliant one I have set so far, Lin Yi, Park Xiujing, Lin Dongxu and even Zheng Jiang's personalities are very distinct.
But it can't be helped, readers don't like it.
Ye Lan's story is actually just a small brain hole for me.
That's not the case in the first story.
If one day, Kim Taeyeon suddenly travels through and travels to the world with Ye Lan, and Ye Lan in this world is very misunderstood, Kim Taeyeon's original world Ye Lan was whitewashed very early, and then Kim Taeyeon took her sisters to find Ye Lan and wash it white.
But I think that no one will have much impression of Ye Lan when written like this.
In order to deepen the impression of Ye Lan in everyone's hearts, there was a foreshadowing of more than 700,000 words in front of him.
It can be said that Ye Lan was misunderstood and left the team, which I had decided from before the book was opened.
I've discussed this with book friends before.
If it is not handled well, everyone's personality will collapse.
And it turns out that I really didn't handle it well, and the contradictions are normal in my eyes, but they are too abrupt in your eyes.
If you want to mock me about this, I'll just lie down and laugh at me.
Many people talk about water in this idol book, and they say that it is like a diary because all the plots in the front are paving the way for the conflicts in the back.
At the very beginning, that is, when Ye Lan and her sisters did not debut, I really didn't feel water, and no one said that I wrote about water.
And I really think the first time I started water was the first variety show I participated in before Ye Lan's debut, and the girl went to school.
I don't write variety shows well, and the only variety show I like is runningman.
It can be said that the girl went to school and started to make up for it when I wrote it.
Those who are familiar with this variety show can also see that the plot is almost exactly the same as the variety show, because I compare it word by word.
Afterwards.. I felt the water myself and began to chop.
It was also the first time that a book friend said that I was water, and I happily admitted it, and promised to speed up the plot.
The second time he was said about water, it was after Ye Lan picked her feet in the dormitory.
It's really hard to have a main line.
Everyone is here for the little sisters, and few people care about the life or death of your protagonist.
If you're a fan, you'd gladly accept it, but I'm not.
I want everyone to see Ye Lan's life and really feel every bit of Ye Lan.
When I started abusing it for the first time, many people said that they felt sorry for Ye Lan, which made me very satisfied.
At least I know that everyone really likes Ye Lan and feels sorry for this distressing girl.
Of course, I feel sorry for my daughter.
Ye Bao's mother loves you.
That's when everyone started talking about water for the third time.
It's a little uncomfortable, because I really don't feel water during this period, this is a very important time for Ye Lan's mentality to change, from living for her sisters all the time to really thinking about herself.
Abuse, wonderful can't be wonderful all the time.
Everyone thinks that Shui just wants to see Ye Lan and her sisters reunite and recognize each other sooner, whether they forgive them or not.
This is the development of the main line.
I also took into account that this is going to happen sooner or later.
But how do you spend the time in between?
Do you have a brush?
If you don't write about the time without them in detail, how can you highlight the difficulty of reuniting later?
I have already written about Ye Lan's own daily life very quickly, and the original setting will make Ye Lan feel sorry for herself for a while.
That is, hypocrisy for a while.
But I thought about it for a while or deleted it to speed up Ye Lan's life.
It took me three chapters to push the timeline back for half a year.
Yang Tianwang Mengjie's appearance just didn't want Ye Lan to live a lonely life.
If you don't. Ye Lan may be crazy.
I actually like to talk to you about the plot, and as long as I don't deviate from the main line, I will take it.
At the beginning of the conflict, I was afraid that everyone would misunderstand, so I explained some details to everyone in the group over and over again.
Fortunately, there are not many people who abandon books, which makes me breathe a sigh of relief.
I can't guarantee anything else, but the ending of this book will definitely be he, which I can still affirm.
said these things because I saw Xiao Qi's long comment.
I go to bed at one o'clock in the morning every day because I have to see everyone's comments on the latest chapters.
Although I don't necessarily reply, I will generally reply to comments that have doubts about the plot, and you can go and flip through the previous chapters.
But last night I was a little uncomfortable.
Let me be a little hypocritical.
Personally, I think I'm quite diligent in the hy circle.
Since the book was opened in early July, I've taken a day off.
So let me complain a little bit.
The update still needs to be updated.
I will accelerate the next plot and daily life appropriately.
I hope you will bear with me a little longer.
You'll have what you want to see later, and without me, I'll find a way to make it appear less abrupt.