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In fact, I thought about it, the rhythm has collapsed a little from the moment I kissed Liu Jing vigorously on the first date, and then led to a series of uncontrollable follow-ups, because Liu Jing has accepted vigorous efforts since that time, and the subsequent tests have become unnecessary, and it is unreasonable to write it down.
Then there is the role of Huang Yao, originally her plot was not so short, and she would even join the protagonist group and travel together, well, the original idea of writing this character was a simple boss, but after the second appearance, Huang Yao's ending was changed and I wanted to be more heroines, but I wrote vigorously and Liu Jing progressed too fast, and directly stuck Huang Yao's going to stay.
At the same time, because of the progress of Liu Jing and Dali, there is no need for Sister Chen Nuo to come out, because they have already done Chen Nuo's things, originally I thought that Huang Yao's pressure made Liu Jing vigorously together, and Sister Chen Nuo asked Liu Jing and Huang Yao to kiss, but I wrote too many things, more than 200,000 things in a week, and about 400,000 in three months, then this article will not look good, and the book of 400,000 male and female protagonists together is too silly, I use the method of writing scripts to write novels, and I don't skip the content, it's really too delayed, because there are many things to write at each stage。
This book has collapsed by now, or there is nothing to write about, because there is no challenge after that, Liu Jing and Dali must have been smooth sailing, there is no test that can make Dali leave Liu Jing, and nothing can make Liu Jing leave Dali, because I skipped the setbacks and tests in the middle and directly accelerated them to be together, and the characters of these two people were originally perfect for each other.
No matter who comes out, Liu Jing still loves Dali the most, no matter what difficulties he encounters, Dali will still stay by Liu Jing's side.
I wrote it myself, because I haven't tried to write a novel in the form of a screenplay, this is still my first book, and I have no motivation to write it here, because the point of writing collapse is in 78 chapters, and it is impossible to delete and rechange it after it has been written, and the plot after that is not attractive to me.
Huang Yao is my favorite character in this book, because she was the first one I wrote and shed tears, and I wrote her as my first love, but now her ending is condemned to death by me.
Sister Chen Nuo, Chen Ran is also a very good character, anyway, I can spoil it if I don't write it, she is a woman with mental illness, she can see ghosts, and she also had a very terrifying experience when she was a child, so it is difficult for her to love, Liu Jing used to be the only person who could let her sleep peacefully, but she couldn't give Liu Jing what she wanted, Liu Jing wanted her to open her heart and come out, but Chen Ran couldn't do it, and then forced Liu Jing to leave.
The first meeting between the two of them was on a personal business trip in Liu Jing, Chen Ran would secretly look at Liu Jing in a place, after Liu Jing found out, she would run, run to a remote corner, when Liu Jing found her, she was like a wild man, with messy hairstyle, pale face, and bruises all over her body, Liu Jing would be heartbroken at that moment, because Chen Ran used to be a very strong woman in front of him, and after leaving Liu Jing, she was tortured like this by her own curse, Liu Jing must not be able to hold on, he will always accompany Chen Ran.
I've already thought about this character, but as I said before, the writing has collapsed, and there is no need for Sister Chen Ran to come out, and it will only look abrupt and poisonous when she comes out.
In addition, what do you say only to watch the love apartment, don't write these things sorry for the audience.
To be honest, I knew I wouldn't write about love apartments, I just wanted to give youth a perfect ending on the way to practice writing originality, not to rub the heat, not to mention that the popularity of this attraction will only scold me if I write it down according to my original outline.
I originally had three versions of the ending, the third version is the ending of the unfinished, Huang Yao's ribbon in the box is a pregnancy test paper, she was pregnant with Liu Jing's child, and after going abroad, she found out that the boy was on her shoulder in the group photo, because Huang Yao was also very chaotic at that time, and then returned to China to find Liu Jing, but Liu Jing went to find her, it was such a bloody and abusive misunderstanding, Liu Jing was disheartened after seeing the photo and simply did not return to China, traveling around, Huang Yao could not find him and had no choice but to fall, because she was too young at that time, there was no reason for a teenage girl to give birth to a child alone when she could not find a man。
But Huang Yao still loves Liu Jing, and even feels that she has beaten the child with Liu Jing, and she loves him even more with shame, if the progress of Dali and Liu Jing is not so fast, she and Liu Jing will not collapse after confessing to Liu Jing's personality and accepting her, because I think this is reasonable, but I have wronged Dali, this will be a point of scolding, and some people want to say that the title of the book is to write vigorously and write more heroines is to die, I know what the reader's reaction will be.
The second version is that Liu Jing and Dali have been calm, Zhang Yi'an and Yumo are together, Zhang Wei and Li Xiaoxing continue, and Zhao Haitang and Curry Sauce are together.
And the first edition, that is, with Chen Ran, is a pure pen scolding essay with many elements.
The progress of Dali and Liu Jing was too fast, causing the original outline and rhythm of the book to all collapse, plus the original I wanted to write was laborious and thankless under the skin of the same people, so it was broken.
Liu Jing's two novels blasphemy and champion, the former is a dream and the latter is love, and writing a dream is a god.
I want to write about love first, this book is about every one of my views on love, one is the beginning and end of my first love, one is the conquest of the queen character with a fragile side in my heart, one is to meet the perfect soul mate, three people correspond to the three kinds of love I yearn for, but now I can only write one, which makes me very dissatisfied and irritable, and I don't want to write.
I will still write about love first, and then open a book, or use similar characters, and even copy my own plot and lines, it doesn't matter, others can copy my book in the original text, can't my original author open a new book and copy himself?
Whether to change the number or not, I want to think... Forget it, don't change it, it's going to be open during this time, the love apartment won't be written, and the outline of the second edition will be sent out to give an explanation when the time comes.,
I'm still sorry.,Well.,Love apartment this same skin.,To put it arrogantly.,No need.,Now there's an idea in my head.,Open a new one.,Even if it's more tiring to create a role.,Because there's no ready-made person like Yifei who can use it.。
All say that I wrote a romance essay.... Actually, I don't know what romance is, I liked dragons very much in middle and high school, and dragons also have a lot of psychological and emotional descriptions, so it's very immersive.
If there is no ability system in the city to cultivate immortals, isn't it just falling in love, what else can I write, I can't write a slap in the face, and the protagonist can't hit anyone's face at the beginning, I can't write it.
The protagonist of the new book will not be so perfect, it is estimated that the company will be deleted, it is a simple big writer, and then there are some peculiar skills, it will be a little more funny and more down-to-earth.
Well, there's not much more to say.
I'll finish the book, and I'll end this week.