In the past few days, readers have reacted that the writing is not good-looking and boring, and they have withdrawn from the collection...... So the flower cat is also anxious these days.,Thinking a lot.,I was going to overturn the original outline.,After going to school.,Rewrite and hit a second-generation transfer officer who doesn't like the protagonist.,But after writing for a long time.,And then deleted.。 Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

The flower cat really can't write it, it's completely unreasonable!

The contradiction between Li Yunliang and Zhang Yu is the first unhappiness caused by Zhang Yu's poor study, how can the teacher of a key high school like a scumbag in the class. followed Li Yunliang during military training, because his nephew and Zhang Yu had another dispute, followed by Ge Wenhui and Zhang Yu fighting, Li Yunliang and Zhang Yu betting, and the dispute over the management of the performance...... Li Yunliang's position of power in the class has been challenged by Zhang Yu again and again, until now it has reached the point where they cannot tolerate each other.

This is very logical!

So now if I want to rewrite a brain-dead second-generation official or a rich second-generation, if Zhang Yu is not pleasing to the eye, then I have to re-pave these contradictions, otherwise I will not be able to write it! If there are not enough contradictions, how can someone suddenly look at you unpleasantly. It's just weird!

Everyone has also seen the plot of losing the ring I wrote, in fact, this is the loss of the ring, I am writing a plot of righteousness and bravery, heroes saving beauty. In order to be different from other people's beauty savings, in order to be reasonable, I went through a lot of foreshadowing to solve various problems and possibilities that arose in the middle. In fact, it's okay not to lose the ring! At the beginning, Huang Dali could just play hooligan in the hotel, and Zhang Yu could still be a hero to save the beauty! beat him violently, and then he became Zhang Yu's little brother, and he became Zhang Yu's first dogleg No. 1.

Why didn't I write it like that, first, it's too cheesy, and almost all of the starting points are written like this...... The second is to write the hooligan IQ too low, now many hooligans are CPPCC members, and they have a lot of money, how can there be such stupid hooligans in the world.

In the final analysis, it is still my personal problem, what to write, it must be reasonable, it does not conform to the logical causal relationship, I can't move the pen at all, and I can't pass this level myself.

After much deliberation, I decided to stick to my style and return to the original outline...... There is no such thing as perfection in life, just like writing a book. Let's write the outline in more detail, organize the series of outfits and slap in the face, and strive to be coherent in one go, from the beginning to the end, so be it this time!

As for this outline, I prepared it many years ago, and this time I started writing, and after many revisions and adjustments in details, it can be said that I have spent a lot of effort, and it is also a wish of mine for many years, hoping to complete this story. So I'll stick to it!Style,I'll also reveal in advance,Most of them are based on ordinary life.,There's no excessive face-slapping plot.,If you only like to see the style of slapping faces.,I can only say sorry.。

If you like to watch it, you can watch it, if you don't like it, you can't help it, and it's limited at the next level...... Thank you for the friends who are still enduring the style of the cat pen and thank you.

Let's end the nagging, let's Xiao Zhang appear again, and the story continues......

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Zhang Yu hugged Su Qianqian, and naturally smelled a very comfortable fragrance, but he also saw that the other party's face was getting redder, pouted and smiled, and changed the hug to support...... Su Qianqian breathed a sigh of relief, continued to support Zhang Yu, and felt that the numbness in her legs disappeared, so she moved, came to the bedside, and looked at Tan Xiaonan.

Tan Xiaonan was lying on the bed and didn't know what to do, one side of his cheek was red, and it seemed that he had been beaten by the hooligan just now, otherwise he wouldn't be awake now.

"Xiao Nan, Xiao Nan!" Su Qianqian looked anxious, shook Tan Xiaonan's body, and saw that she still didn't react at all, and she had no idea in her heart. I had to turn my head to look at Zhang Yu, and said anxiously: "Zhang Yu, she can't have anything to do, right? Why didn't she react at all." ”

Zhang Yu also came to the side of the bed, looked at it carefully, and said, "Can't you breathe......? Go get some cold water!"

Su Qianqian nodded, quickly found a clean basin in the house, turned on the faucet, took some water, and brought it over.

Zhang Yu dipped his hand in the basin of water, then patted Tan Xiaonan's face, and then pinched her again...... Zhang Yu slapped Tan Xiaonan with water several times, and pinched it for a long time, and suddenly felt Tan Xiaonan's body move before stopping. Then he patted her face again and said, "Tan Xiaonan, Tan Xiaonan, wake up, go to school, get up quickly." Don't sleep!"

Tan Xiaonan slowly opened his eyes, his expression was still a little confused, he looked at Zhang Yu in a daze, and blinked...... Immediately with an "ah" sound, the conditioned reflex gave Zhang Yu a loud slap in the face, and Zhang Yu was confused?

"Oh I'm going! you're de...... You're crazy, you!" Zhang Yu immediately became angry and opened his mouth to scold, so angry that he was so angry.

If Zhang Yu hadn't seen Tan Xiaonan as a chick, he would have been able to slap her hard at that time...... Damn! Didn't you become a life-saver in vain? I didn't get a good one, but I slapped him in the face.

"Zhang Yu!"

Tan Xiaonan really came to his senses at this time, and found that the person he hit was actually Zhang Yu. The expression was surprised...... What the hell happened? Why did Zhang Yu come! What about the hooligans?

Su Qianqian was also surprised...... Unexpectedly, after Tan Xiaonan came to his senses, he gave Zhang Yu a slap in the face for the first time, could it be that Tan Xiaonan likes to slap people?

With Tan Xiaonan's surprise, Su Qianqian hurriedly came over and began to tell her the whole story...... In the end, Tan Xiaonan figured out that he and Su Qianqian were saved by Zhang Yu. At this time, she was guilty, she didn't expect that other people's life-saving kindness had not been repaid, but she slapped the life-saving benefactor, how can there be such a person in the world who repays her kindness!

Tan Xiaonan hurriedly apologized to Zhang Yu, repeatedly explaining that he was confused, and hoped that Zhang Yu could forgive himself.

At this time, Zhang Yu hated iron but not steel, and said: "I said Comrade Tan Xiaonan! You old boss mistakes, you have to change it." You say that you have this kind of character, if you put it in society, wouldn't you want to smash the brand that our 12 classes are all high-quality talents? You're so choked!"

"Hehehe! Hahahahaha!" Tan Xiaonan and Su Qianqian also let go of their hearts, and they both laughed happily, although it was a little dangerous tonight, but in the end, they were both rescued, and this was also a day without danger.

After Tan Xiaonan and Su Qianqian were in a better mood, they got up to leave here, because it made them feel very uncomfortable.

Zhang Yu found a few ropes in the house and went out to trap Huang Dali's guys, like fat pigs in a slaughterhouse.

Zhang Yu took out the ring from Huang Dali's body and returned it to Tan Xiaonan.

Tan Xiaonan held her baby and cried bitterly...... The pent-up emotions these days have completely exploded. At the same time as the outbreak, he also played the true colors of Xiao Pepper, and kicked a few hooligans fiercely, especially Huang Dali's broken leg, which was bitten by Tan Xiaonan's little silver teeth, and he focused on taking care of it, making him keep begging for mercy and screaming.

Zhang Yu looked at it in a cold sweat, this is also in New China, if this is in the old society, with Tan Xiaonan's character, he would not have killed a few of them at that time.

Zhang Yu saw that it was almost there, pulled away Tan Xiaonan, who was excited, and took the two girls to the gate, picked up the schoolbags that were thrown aside, put them on their backs, and then opened the chain lock on the gate, pushed open the door, and left the abandoned parking lot together.

As soon as the three of them walked out of the door, a strong light came, making several people squint their eyes and see nothing.

Suddenly, a person rushed over and grabbed Zhang Yu's clothes. Zhang Yu reflexively, clasped the opponent's wrist with both hands, leaned down, and fell over the shoulder, throwing the opponent to the ground.

But only hearing what the man said, Zhang Yu immediately gave up the action of beating the other party: "Oh, I'll go! Stinky boy, you dare to attack the police." ”

Just when Zhang Yu was stunned, several policemen rushed up, accompanied by the screams of Tan Xiaonan and Su Qianqian, Zhang Yu was pressed to the ground and couldn't move.

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Zhang Yu sat weakly in the interrogation room of the police station, his injured arm wrapped around a triangle belt and hung around his neck. He was a little irritated by the light, and said, "Uncle policeman, you haven't asked enough! I've said it several times, I'm acting bravely, not fighting." ”

Across the table sat a middle-aged policeman in his forties...... He looked at Zhang Yu with a funny expression on his face, and said, "What are you kidding me? Do you have such a righteous and courageous act? Look at what you have beaten those four people, two of them were in shock, and one of them was seriously necrotic from kicking in the lower body." Another broke two legs and an arm. To put it mildly, you call it a serious injury, you know?"

Zhang Yu said distressedly: "Don't scare me, Uncle police! Do you think I want to! They have knives in their hands! And guns! If I don't do it harder, I'm going to die. ”

The middle-aged policeman said: "If you are left to do it yourself, then what else do you need the police to do! Why didn't you call the police at that time, and wait for the police to come." ”

Zhang Yu said: "The situation was urgent! I didn't have time to call the police." I'll do it later, won't my classmates let them spoil it!"

The middle-aged policeman sighed, took out a box of cigarettes from his pocket, took out one, put it to his mouth, lit it, took a puff, and said, "You kid is not honest! However, you also dare to die. Aren't you afraid of beating them all to death?

Zhang Yu said: "That's what they deserve! Besides, I am not yet 18 years old, and I belong to the stage of leniency or commutation. Even if I miss and kill them, the most I can do is defend too much. Coupled with righteousness and bravery, a suspended sentence is the limit. Besides, this kind of adultery. The garbage of lewd women dies one less one! ”