Chapter 246: Jingmei is also beautiful
When Qin Zixi first started to write poems with a pen, he thought: I don't know anything about poetry, and I can write a short practice pen.
As for the lyrics, I've listened to so many lyrics from my friends, and I usually think about the smooth lyrics of my friends, and I'm so slippery, and I'll definitely slide out a song today, don't worry!
Qin Zixi thought about it and came up with a word and a lyric. Although he was really a little embarrassed, he still completed the task.
At this moment, it was Qin Zixi's turn to recite his poems and lyrics, and he stood up and said: "I also wrote a poem, entitled "Pounding Lianzi Mountaineering".
"Hmm...... The word "meal" is a flat sound, and the word "rice" is a sound of a voice, and in a general sense, the words "meal" and "rice" can sometimes be used universally, right?"
A circle of friends nodded in confusion.
Qin Zixi looked at everyone and said, "You all nodded and admitted, okay, I'll start reading." He reads:
"Pounding Exercises: Mountaineering"
Eat a picnic and sit on the green hills.
It's rare to be so idle.
It's so pleasant to climb with friends,
I'm afraid of the Psalms!
As soon as Qin Zixi finished reading, everyone applauded and laughed, saying: "Good words, good words, really funny words!"
Qin Zixi looked at everyone and said a little awkwardly: "What? What are you talking about? What are the good words for amusement? The word amusing was come up with by you, and when I wrote it, I was so embarrassed that I was sweating all over! I was still amused!"
"I'm really afraid of this writing poems, filling in words or something. The original intention of writing this poem is that it is sincere, not amused. If you want to say amusement, it is also poetry that is teasing me Qin Zixi!
"This poem amuses me, and makes me think all the time, Ping, how many words a sentence, which rhyme to press! Ouch, it makes me dizzy, how can I still have the heart to amuse! Okay, I can just pass this poem, don't complain, please listen to my lyrics. β
Qin Zixi took the paper with the lyrics written on it and said: "The name of my lyrics is "The scenery is delicious and the beauty is also beautiful". β
After Qin Zixi finished saying the title of the song, he took a breath and was about to recite the lyrics, Wen Jiemei muttered: "Beautiful beauty, beautiful feet!"
"You write a poem, you recite it refreshingly, and you're still there too, and it's endless!
"Now you read a lyric, and you're there again! I just listen to you, and I will let you scatter the two lines of poetry that people just came up with!
In fact, Wen Jiemei's voice was very small when she said this, but it still affected Qin Zixi.
Qin Zixi took out the anger that was raised, looked at Wen Jiemei and said, "You, look at you, don't disturb it! Originally, the lyrics I wrote were not very satisfactory in my heart, so I paused again...... Alas, it's okay. After he finished speaking, he looked at the lyrics and prepared to read them.
Yang Yilin was really a little embarrassed to see Qin Zixi, he smiled and said: "Who made your song title the same as your facial features, so much beauty, don't talk nonsense, read it to everyone!"
These casual conversations of these three people, a group of friends didn't care, so that Zhang Benliang, who came from outside, listened to it in his heart and saw it in his eyes......
Qin Zixi immediately glanced at Yang Yilin, and said, "Cut! Interrupt!" and immediately recited:
"The scenery is delicious and the beauty is also beautiful"
Pieces of hillside horizontal ridges and vertical ridges, a verdant ridge thousand grass fragrant.
Tourist buses are connected to long queues, and groups of tourists are laughing and flowers.
Ah, the mountains of China, the countryside and the countryside, you show the beauty of the vast territory of China.
The local customs of the farmhouses, the beautiful smiling faces are simple and sincere.
A plate of wild vegetables is delicious and hearty, and a bowl of chai eggs is fragrant and hot.
Ah, Shenzhou Ridge, the farmer's favor, you sincerely greet the **** distinguished guests and friends.
Qin Zixi finished reciting. Song Yi felt that the lyrics written by Qin Zixi were simple and elegant.
When Song Yi applauded Qin Zixi with everyone, he was so happy that his hands hurt. She was clapping, and suddenly remembered that it was time for her to recite, and she hurried to prepare.
Song Yi stood up and said, "It's my turn, I don't write well, it's not a poem, don't laugh at me." Although the poem I wrote is not a serious poem, there is also a title called "Leshan", please listen. β
Song Yi recited:
Leshan
On a sunny day above your head,
Step on the green mountain.
Sitting on the flat ground friends,
Everyone recites the Psalms.
After listening to Song Yi's recitation, the friends applauded and said, "Good!
Yang Yilin said: "Okay! Song Yi's poem is very well written, and it is very realistic. This is what is written about us, everyone applauds!"
There was a round of applause.
Song Yi saw that everyone applauded her, she smiled, and said in her heart: I wrote this poem that is not a poem, and it was ushered in applause, well, it was fun! β
Song Yi recited:
Spring Scene in the Mountains
The mountains and fields in March are so clear, and the flowers in the grass are colorful.
The geese call the warbler in the sky, and the branches of the magpie sing, and the river is wide and long, and the mountains and forests are clear and clear.
The breeze blows lightly from the valley of the woods, and the clear stream bends around the ditch.
The vast fertile fields outside the mountains are green and lush, and the Pingchuan River is endless to the east.
Such a beautiful field, a beautiful scene, a fragrant wildflower, a good voice of the warbler.
The green mountains and forests, the beautiful mountains, and the long river are running boats.
Ah......h
The mountains and fields are bright and the sky is blue, and the scenery is beautiful and the nature is beautifulββ
Our Chinese people are prosperous!
After reciting it, Song Yi said: "I have to explain that the Zhaigou in my lyrics is the meaning of Xiaozhai Village and Taohuagou Village, which are all villages." β
In the applause, Lin Jing first praised and said: "Song Yi, you always say that you can't compose poems, and you also say that it feels too embarrassing to write lyrics, your lyrics are very well written, very beautiful."
"And your poem "Leshan", your four lines of poetry, written neatly and neatly. If I had to write this poem and the lyrics you wrote today, I would have to put a lot of effort into it.
"When you wrote "Leshan", if you could be more careful and scrutinize the plain, your poems would be better. However, if you write a new poem, you don't have to think about the number of words, as long as the writing has depth, connotation, and meaning, it is very good. β
Song Yi replied: "It's better to write about the battle, but it's not easy to master." In the future, I don't write poetry or lyrics, so I will learn from Xiaowen and learn to write new poems. β
Wen Jiemei continued: "Do you think that the new poem will make your pen tip free, and let you write as you wish? Tell you, after a hundred years of practice, I still can't write the new poem with the subtle and profound strokes, and the kind of new poem that is deep in meaning, full of emotion, and intriguing to seek the flavor of the new poem!"
Zheng Xiaowen smiled and said: "Song Yi, if you want to write new poems, then don't follow me to learn, and my writing level is not good."
"Writing poems, writing lyrics, and rhythms to follow. That new poem, you look at what others write like a bulk snack, it's very ordinary. But for you to eat, you have to have a high level of eating to get the taste of what it tastes like in the depths.
"If you want to write a new poem, first of all, the text must be subtle, the content must be deep, and the poem must reach a certain level. Many new poems look very interesting and beautiful, which makes people want to go deep into them to understand and find out the deep connotation of the poems.
"Like these, to be honest, I can't reach that high level of writing, I don't have a high level, how can I teach you. β
When Song Yi heard this, he said: "Ouch, the new poem is not just a few long and short sentences, it turns out that the new poem is also so difficult to write?
Song Yi frowned when he said this, and said in a very low voice: "It's so difficult to write anything, don't let me be anxious, if I'm in a hurry, I don't want to write anything!"
Lin Jing said: "Song Yi, think about it, even if it is a new poem, since the name of the new poem is a poem, it must be different from the vernacular." But if you're inspired, the verse slips ......"
Wen Jiemei shouted from the side: "Hey, hey, you applaud again, talk again, just say a few words, the voice is still so high, so loud." The more you chirp, the more chaotic it is, the more I can't think of words, I can't complete the task, I don't play, I want to go home!"
Lin Jing picked up and said, "Yo, yo, look at your girly appearance, Song Yi's tasks have been completed, what are you still yelling there, think about it!"
Yang Yilin spoke: "Hey, everyone, listen, now Su Chen's group is preparing for our group to chant poems, and Jiemei is preparing for our group." β
After Yang Yilin finished speaking, he said to Wen Jiemei again, "Jiemei, you calm down and write, think carefully, as long as you can come up with a head, the poetry sentences, the lyrics and sentences, you can follow your train of thought, and line up in strings." Try it, and you'll definitely work!"
Wen Jiemei didn't answer, she nodded in her heart and wrote down on the paper seriously.
Su Chen stood up and said, "I also made a poem, and the word card is: Huanxi Sha." The title is: Sheep. She recited:
Huanxi Sand Sheep
The sunshine is high and the grass is rug,
Green mountains and green mountains walk the flock.
It looks like snow and clouds in the distance.
~ ~ ~
A full soul runs a steep path,
The long whip sounded and bleated.
The day west return road into the chaimen.
After Su Chen finished reciting, Yang Yilin applauded happily and excitedly shouted: "Good words! Good words!
"Jiemei, look at Su Chen, isn't there a group of sheep grazing on the mountain, just this point, a little bit of small scenery, Su Chen can think of writing such good poems, I believe that you will write good poems if you think about it." β
After Yang Yilin finished speaking, he comforted and encouraged Wen Jiemei, saying: "Jiemei, you have walked all the way to see the mountains and seen so many scenes. If you think about it, you can write good poetry!"
Su Chen saw Yang Yilin praising her, and she hurriedly said, "Thank you Director Yang for your praise and encouragement!"
Lin Jing admired Su Chen's poem very much, she said: "Su Chen, your poem, the word 'look' used in the front run, put the word 'look' there, it's also very good!"
Su Chen smiled and said, "That place, I thought of a few words, but it didn't feel appropriate. The word 'look' is in the 'cold' rhyme of the old four tones, and the modern new four tones, the word 'look' also has a flat rhyme, so I used it. β