Thank you at the end of the book!

Report: The first order is 497, and the average order is even worse, and many of them will send a first order, among which there are about 30 or so first orders of some authors' friends, so there are actually less. The total subscription of five chapters is not as good as a friend's chapter, and the 13,000-word update is less than 100 yuan, and it is difficult for me to write 13,000 words a day while ensuring the quality.

That's just 10,000 collections.

Maybe many friends think that the number of words is too small to collect and not read, but this is only an ethereal possibility, not enough to believe, because I have already found the problem from myself.

First of all, thank you to the friends who subscribed to the tip yesterday, this result has not met the minimum expectations.

I've come to believe that this is a failed work. The editor was right to persuade me to open a new book sooner rather than later, and didn't want me to be so embarrassed now, but I didn't know what I was wrong at the time.

What is the problem with this book, the day before yesterday I thought about it all day, studied it for a long time, I knew what was wrong, summed up four big mistakes, one small error, a total of five mistakes.

1: The power system is too chaotic, because it deliberately seeks innovation, grasps the elements of fire, and has a big heart, so three power systems have been established, warriors, sequences, and bloodlines, and the three major power systems are completely rolled out at the beginning. The great gods didn't dare to write like that. For example, Tomato's Snow Eagle only appeared more power systems after a million words. And I, whose pen power is not as good as tomatoes, is so dead, causing some readers with high understanding to understand, and readers with poor understanding to say: MMP What is this thing, gone. Poor sense of substitution. That's how complicated it is.

2: The background environment is too chaotic and the sense of substitution is poor. Blockade and non-blockade areas, polarization of the two worlds, modern times are not modern, and the future is not future, which makes people feel weird, and they are so full that they make a distinction between the two worlds, resulting in a change of map as soon as it is put on the shelf. Of course, when I wrote this, I didn't expect it to be suddenly put on the shelves, in short, it was a failure;

3: Daily utensils are deliberately anti-routine, but not grounded, such as spiritual wit. This is what a teacher once said in class, don't think that routines are garbage, no routines are more garbage, anti-routines are too high, not grounded, more garbage, and people can't be substituted.

4: Character design, this is a mixed reputation, some people like it, some people don't like it, the front is not well controlled, and after using too much force, it will lead to a bunch of people who don't like it, and everyone can see that I want to write a protagonist who is usually fine, and when someone harms him, he is mentally qualitative, but it is disgusting if he is not controlled.

5: Goldfinger: There are flaws, and although I try my best to avoid omitting the attribute template, it is still suspected of the number of words.

The above five points are the biggest reasons why this book hit the streets.

Before, the author couldn't find a fault, and he was unwilling to put it on the shelves to see how deep and shallow the water was, and the reality was very slap in the face! I thought it was good and useless. Luckily, I found a mistake and I was able to avoid it in the next book.

That's all for the book. I can't write it, the number of words is too small to put on the shelf, although it is not my will, but it is also caused by my Taicai, and some people look at the small number of words and are unwilling to subscribe to my understanding.

So what kind of income is it to continue to write down this achievement, updating 6,000 words a day, about more than 1,000 yuan a month? The child's milk powder money is not enough, not to mention the recent recurrent illness of the child, which has cost a lot of money.

If you don't talk about income and dreams, it's a mang, and if you don't care about your family, it's even more mang to talk about your dreams. Writing this book, I rarely hold my children, because I am too busy, I wrote tens of thousands of words of outline and 160,000 words of waste manuscript in more than two months.

I am still full of guilt for the child, I was only born for a month and a half, and I rarely hugged her to read books.

I'm also a little ashamed of my eldest brother, and I've always supported it, but I'm a little bit unsuccessful.

Now, life will be even harder to write this book.

I need to be responsible for my family, so I became a demon. Sorry guys.

I can be a demon outside, and if I want to practice divine skills, I must do something first, and I have to do this.

Not at home.

Men are like this, laughing outside, tired when they go home, they can be sorry for others, they can't be sorry for their families, in fact, they just want to support a family.

It's not a miserable sale, I don't think I'm miserable, a book fails and comes back to the next one, and the above is emotion.

What you approve, let's take a look at it in the next book, it's still the same style, and the difference is the story.

If you don't approve of it, the rivers and lakes are far away, and they are cherished, thank you for spending about seven cents to subscribe to the six VIP chapters, and the high V is about five cents.

In fact, there are about seven chapters left behind, so I won't send them. Since it is cut, it will not make this money, and it will be a waste manuscript. Everyone, just read 150,000 words and an old man's emotion as seven cents.

If you want to scold after reading it, you will scold in the book review area.

The book has written an ending, and after applying for the book, I didn't directly cut it and simply didn't write the ending, but also tried to make the readers who chased the investment not lose, so I took some time to write an open-ended ending.

In fact, I emphasized many times at the end of the chapter before, don't chase the investment, don't chase the big money, but there are still several readers who are more confident than me. One of them directly invested 30,000 yuan, this big guy hasn't seen it before, I just saw him come to comment last night, and I saw twenty chapters there, I hope you won't lose, next time you can be sensible.

After completing the book, you will be rewarded for your investment.

There are a lot of people who initially invested in this book and have already got about a few dozen points of coins, and a few of them have earned more than 100 to 200 points of coins with a small amount of chasing money, and there are a few in the group, which can be regarded as a stop loss.

Although most of the investment friends did not come back to read the book, or simply put it away. Let's have a good conscience and avoid being scolded by you.

The new book may be released around Monday and Tuesday next week.

If you like it, you can come and take a look.,Don't raise it next time.,Help me pass the new book period.,Only if the new book period is as well developed as possible,Can you write long.,Like this time,,It's congenitally insufficient.。 If you like Jiajia style, you can also read and finish reading an old book.

Thank you!