Yang Xiuyuan sat down, he hadn't read this script, and after reading it, he always felt a little awkward.

Logically speaking, there are two lines.

Owner and dog.

But only one line is highlighted.

The master's line.

The owner's name is Yu Dong, who lost his legs in a car accident and lives with his younger brother and is taken care of by his younger brother and sister-in-law.

One day, my younger brother brought back a puppy, and the family didn't like puppies, but considering that it was better to leave it to Yu Dong to relieve his boredom, he kept it.

He would do some tinkering work, but he would have to stay at home, after all, no one would find a home to do for him.

So Yu Dong made a small cart and began to go to the market to set up stalls, using his hands instead of his feet.

As for the dog, he also followed all the way, and later developed to the point where the dog dragged Yu Dong out of the stall to collect the stall.

Where's the awkwardness?

In the end, the dog pulled Yu Dong out of the stall all the year round to collect the stall, it was a famous dog in the market, and someone wanted to buy it.

Will it be sold?

It's really sold, and my brother's family has an accident and is short of money.

So Yu Dong had no choice but to sell the dog for thousands of yuan to solve the difficulties of his younger brother's family.

In the end, the dog ran back by itself, but he was bitten by a stray dog while looking for food on the road, and he died the next day when he met Yu Dong.

Yang Xiuyuan felt that the pattern of the whole story was pulled down all of a sudden.

Forcibly touching.

"How?"

Yang Xiuyuan thought for a while and said: "It's not easy to say, the theme of the whole script is a bit messy, I want to show the loyalty of the dog, and I want to rely on the emotional sublimation between Dong and his brother's family, but the two themes are conflicting, and the ending is forcibly touching." ”

Qu Xiuyi said with a smile: "There are still people who say that the story is simple." ”

"What they say is simple should not mean that the story is simple, you may think that the story is low-level, this story is a typical low-cost literary film, and the key shooting difficulty is not small, thankless. ”

Qu Xiuyi nodded: "When I bought this script, I valued the line of dog and owner, but the whole setting is a bit too routine." ”

"Then how are you going to change it?" Yang Xiuyuan asked.

"I have an idea, what if I just keep the line between the dog and the owner, and put it on with another story background?"

"What's the story?"

"Awesome. Qu Xiuyi opened several web pages after speaking, which were full of stories and some reports about Bangbang.

"Isn't this story from Yuzhou, Bangbang is also a characteristic industry in the city of Yuzhou, how about I add a line of Bangbang Army?"

Yang Xiuyuan looked at Qu Xiuyi in a daze, he had this idea in the moment just now.

Because he is a native of Yuzhou, when he was a child, he watched TV series about the theme of bangbang, which is the memory of the entire people of Yuzhou, or the main city of Yuzhou is picked up by the bangbangs with their shoulders.

Yuzhou is mountainous, and the transportation was not developed at first, and most of them relied on the transportation of sticks.

Later, due to the development of the city, the industry of Bangbang gradually disappeared in the city of Yuzhou.

If you can inlay the line of bangbang into the movie, the meaning of the whole movie will immediately rise to a higher level.

"What about the setting?" asked Yang Xiuyuan.

Qu Xiuyi opened another document, which was the script that Qu Xiuyi changed herself.

Yang Xiuyuan was very curious and very serious about watching.

In terms of setting, Qu Xiuyi eliminated the line of his younger brother and added a few characters, all of which are great.

But this part of the plot that was written is reasonable and plump, why?

There is interaction.

Yu Dong set up a stall in the market, and there was a group of awesome friends guarding beside him, and he had a very warm interaction with the dogs.

For example, in one of the scenes, Yu Dong went up the slope, and the dog pulled Yu Dong, which was very difficult.

There was a new Bang Bang to help but was stopped by another Bang Bang next to him and said it was okay and it was the best dog.

There are a lot of details, and people don't have faces, what about the previous script?

There are not too many descriptions of the bazaar, and the most important plot should be the plot of the dog dragging Yu Dong out of the stall to close the stall, but the plot of the original script was passed by one stroke, and it was suddenly given how many years later.

The change of Qu Xiuyi is to highlight the plot between the East Out of the stall and the dog, and weaken the miscellaneous things behind it.

"What are you laughing at? Qu Xiuyi asked slightly worriedly.

Yang Xiuyuan shook his head: "Great, what about the back?

"I'm still checking the information, the most important thing about this kind of film is the truth, I don't know the lives of the bangbangs, if you want to write the interactive drama alive, you may have to find the real bangbang to understand the situation. ”

"You ask me, I'm from Yuzhou, I know it's great. ”

Qu Xiuyi looked at Yang Xiuyuan suspiciously: "Do you know the life of the bangs?"

Yang Xiuyuan nodded: "Of course, how is this film improving the theme? Bangbang is already a nominal industry, you can put the loneliness of this profession into it, for example, Yu Dong died of illness, but the dog still sticks to it, dragging Yu Dong's board car to the market every day, we are changing a detail, many Bangbang has a board car, and Yu Dong's board car is sent by Bangbang." ”

"The dog drags the cart to the market every day, and the market closes and drags the cart back, this is the same, what does it change? The city is developing, after Yu Dong died, Bangbang will take care of the dog, but the city no longer needs Bangbang, one after another left, until all the Bangbang who knew the dog left the industry, and another ten years later, Bangbang, who had the best relationship with Yu Dong, came back, the whole Yuzhou has become a super developed city, there is no Bangbang, and there is no need for Bangbang, he came to remember, go to the residence of the year, go to the place where he worked back then, and talk about the changes here and there. ”

"And, of course, the bazaar, the bazaar is still there, and the dog is still lying in front of the cart, standing in the stall, but the dog is old, and Twilight is gone. ”

"Bang Bang has an emotional breakdown and the story ends. ”

Qu Xiuyi was substituted by Yang Xiuyuan's description, and she could even imagine a picture.

Walking into the bazaar, on the familiar stall back then, old friends and others are gone, I am old, and the city has changed.

But the dog is still there, still guarding the cart and the stall.

seems to be still guarding his career as a bangbang back then, at that time, Yuzhou City was indispensable, because Yuzhou City needed them.

But now it is not needed, it can't keep up with the times.

When he is about to grow old, when he is about to go to see those old friends who are gone, the dog is still holding on.

is still waiting for its owner, and it will be ten years of waiting.

This picture made Bang Bang Lao cry.

One sentence: "Are you still waiting for an old friend?"

Then dust to dust to dust.

Qu Xiuyi came back to his senses, his eyes were red, and he looked at Yang Xiuyuan: "It's so good." ”

Yang Xiuyuan hugged Qu Xiuyi's shoulder, his thoughts drifted away, and said: "I have already thought of a few awesome characters, Henan, Lao Gan, Lao Jin.... Each of them has a reason not to be awesome, and every one of them is real. ”