"Okay, it's okay anyway, then I'll take my brothers to complain online......"

Seeing that everyone's enthusiasm was very high, Liang Zhennan agreed to come down, opened the Chinese Chinese website, and found a new book by the author with the pen name "Wang Ritian".

"Brothers, Wang Ritian's new book is this "Breaking the Sky", the old rules, starting from the title of the book, I think the title of this book is decent, at first glance, I know that this is a fantasy novel, but there are no characteristics, similar titles grab a lot of ...... on the fantasy channel"

"I have said countless times during the live broadcast before, the importance of the title of the book for a book, I will not repeat it here, then we look at the introduction, the title of the book is the first impression of a book to the reader, and the introduction is the second impression, many times, the title and introduction of a book directly determine the reader's desire to click on the book, I believe many of you are looking for a book to read, I believe that many of you are also ......like this when looking for a book to read"

Stinky Fool: That's true.

Kang Busy North Nose: I'm more direct, I don't order the title of the book if I'm not interested, and I don't even read the introduction.

My little sweetheart: Haha, I suspect that Brother Nan spied on my state of scrolling books!

Nobody is anyone's whom: I look for a book only if the title and synopsis are to my liking.

The audience watching the live broadcast spoke one after another.

"Let's take a look at the introduction of this book "Breaking the Sky": this is a world that belongs to the fighting spirit, there is no fancy and gorgeous magic, and there is just the fighting spirit that has multiplied to the peak!

The hierarchy of this book: Fighter, Fighter, Great Fighter, Fightling, Fighter, Fighter. ”

Liang Zhennan read the introduction of "Breaking the Sky", and then shook his head: "This introduction is not good, I said before, in fact, for fantasy works, it is taboo to put a grade design or something in the introduction, you think, readers haven't even read the book, and I see a large section of the setting in the introduction, how annoying!"

"In addition, even if you ignore this level setting, his introduction is too perfunctory, from this introduction we can only gain one information, that is, a thing called vindictiveness, there is no content about the protagonist, story or gold finger, if the author is a great god, the introduction can be written like this, because no matter how the introduction is written, readers will click in to read it, but if a newcomer writes a brief like this, it is death, at least, he missed an opportunity to let readers know about his book......"

Sen Sen listens to the clouds and looks at the sea: That's right, I hate the setting of the introduction the most.

June Fengyun: Yes, yes, it's super annoying, who wants to look at your settings!

Dapeng spreads its wings for 80,000 miles: this introduction is true, and there is no desire to click in.

"Let's take another look at the book review section and see what everyone else is saying......"

Liang Zhennan clicked on the book review area of "Breaking the Sky", and then couldn't help but exclaim: ", after sweeping so many new books, it's the first time I've seen a book in the book review area, all the negative comments, and none of the positive comments ......"

"It seems that the fans of the old devil are fierce enough!"

Leaning on the floor to listen to the rain: Hahaha, I'm the wild fan of the old devil, and my message.

The Wind Blows: This is the worst book review section I've ever seen.

Little Kitten Mimi: I feel sorry for the author for a second, and if you can keep writing in this case, it's also awesome.

Liang Zhennan: "Okay, let's not visit the book review, there is no reference value......

"Come on, read the book directly, the old rule, read the first ten chapters first, see the situation at the beginning and then decide whether to continue reading......"

[Chapter 1, The Fallen Genius]

[The Power of Fighting, 3rd Stage]

[Looking at the five big characters on the test magic stone tablet, which were shiny and even a little dazzling, the young man was expressionless, there was a touch of self-deprecation at the corner of his lips, and the clenched palm, because of the strength, caused the slightly sharp nails to pierce deeply into the palm, bringing bursts of pain......]

Liang Zhennan read the content of the first chapter quickly, because he often scans the list to test drugs, so, Liang Zhennan's reading speed is very fast, and he can do ten lines at a glance, and whenever he scans the book in the live broadcast, his speech speed will also speed up, which is also a link that the audience likes to watch.

Stems made from holes: The program of the Nange brand human flesh reader has been opened.

I'm your fan: Hahaha, here, here, five-fold accelerated Nange is here.

Who does the sky spare: Brother Nan's speed of speech is invincible.

Durex in billiards: Come on, come on, come ten times!

After Liang Zhennan turned on the high-speed reading mode, the barrage in the live broadcast room also flew, and a group of people followed.

About three minutes later.

Liang Zhennan finished the first chapter.

"Brothers, there is an unexpected discovery, this author is very powerful! at least, better than me!"

Jessica's little follower: Won't you?

Love to eat mangoes: Does it mean that this book is okay?

Poor Child: I read two chapters, and I feel that the writing is average!

The old man lost his car: the pen is better than Brother Nan's? Wouldn't it be too exaggerated?

At this moment, there are about three or four hundred viewers in the live broadcast room of "Brother Nan Chatting about Online Articles", everyone is waiting for Liang Zhennan to complain, but I didn't expect that after reading the first chapter, Liang Zhennan's first sentence turned out to be the author's pen power, which surprised everyone.

Liang Zhennan: "Actually, I said in the live broadcast before, pen power and writing are not the same thing, pen power does not mean how beautiful the writing is, the so-called pen power is to use the shortest and smoothest words to tell the story clearly, you go to see the classic novels of those great writers, few of them are written like the Red Mansion, they all use minimalist writing to portray a story or character." ”

"Speaking of this book, judging from the first chapter, the author's pen is very strong, and the rendering of emotions and environments is also very good, if the text can continue to maintain this level in the future, this book will not hit the street......"

"By the way, I would like to add that the setting of the opening plot of this book is also very good, although I haven't seen the back yet, but it should belong to a typical narrative technique of first suppressing and then rising. ”

"Come, let's look at chapter two. ”

[Chapter 2, Douqi Continent]

[The moon is like a silver plate, and the sky is full of stars.

On the top of the cliff, Xiao Yan was lying on the grass, holding a piece of grass in his mouth, chewing slightly, letting the faint bitterness spread in his mouth, raising a somewhat white palm, blocking his eyes, looking through the gaps between his fingers, looking at the huge silver moon in the sky......]

Liang began to read the second chapter, but his speech was a little slower than in the first chapter, as if because he had more content to digest.

"Very good, the advantage of pen power has continued, and the writing is very smooth, this author is definitely not a newcomer, without a million words of creative experience, he will never be able to write such a book, unless he is a genius!"

"Come, let's continue, it's a coherent plot, let's watch it in one go. ”

With that, Liang Zhennan began to read the third chapter......

After reading the third chapter, he didn't comment on it, but went straight to the fourth chapter, then the fifth chapter, and then the sixth chapter......

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