Under review......

"Breaking the Sky" has entered the review status since it was created.

After the new book is uploaded, it needs to pass the background review of the website before it can be displayed on the website to meet readers.

This audit does not mean the specific quality of the audit book, but whether the content of the audit book is plagiarized or whether there is any violation of pornography and black.

Therefore, under normal circumstances, as long as it is an original work, no matter how badly written, as long as it does not involve violating content, it is still easy to pass the review.

While waiting for review, Wang Hao flipped through his post in the comment area of "Demon God Scepter", and there were as many as two or three hundred comments on his own spray below, but the content of these comments was similar, nothing new, nothing new, nothing new, nothing more than some cynicism and fragrant "greetings".

It can be seen that these people are really fans of "cute sister old devil".

A pack of licking dogs!!

Wang Hao took the cigarette that was still on the computer case and lit it, and opened the document of "Breaking the Sky" while swallowing the clouds and spitting smoke.

Now, this book is his own work, and Wang Hao, the author, has to take a look at it, otherwise, he doesn't even know what he "wrote", which would be too funny.

Speaking of which, Wang Hao is also an old bookworm, when he was in high school, someone in the class made a book "How Hooligans Are Made", which caused a sensation among the boys in the class, and Wang Hao has also gnawed on online novels since then, and it has been five or six years in a flash, therefore, as a senior reader of online novels, he still has a basic judgment ability for the quality of online articles.

[The power of the fight, three stages!]

……

Wang Hao opened the first chapter of "Breaking the Sky", as an old bookworm, he had already cultivated the skill of one glance and ten lines, and the smoke on his fingertips was only half lit, and the first chapter had already been finished.

"Well, the writing is good, and the story seems to be quite interesting. ”

Wang Hao gave an evaluation in his heart and continued to look back......

Chapters 2, 3, 4......

The story at the beginning is very smooth, paved and narrated, and done in one go.

When I saw the seventh chapter, the story ushered in its first outbreak......

["Miss Nalan, for the sake of the old man Nalan, Xiao Yan advises you a few words, thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't bully the poor young man!" Xiao Yan said coldly, making De Nalan Yanran's delicate body tremble slightly. 】

it!

Awesome~!

What a sentence "don't bully the poor boy"!!

Seeing this paragraph, Wang Hao's eyes couldn't help but light up, and he was amazed.

Yes~!

However, because his attention was all on the book, Wang Hao ignored the cigarette caught in his fingertips, and he slapped the desk hard, and the burned cigarette butt broke off and fell on the back of his hand, and he screamed badly.

Wang Hao subconsciously shook his hand, and when the cigarette butt fell, a string of ash also fell......

This book is going to be on fire!!

Wang Hao sighed silently.

For an online novel, the first 20,000 or 30,000 words are often the most important, as the so-called "crested pig's belly leopard tail", if the opening can catch the reader's eye, then the book is half the success.

And the beginning of "Breaking the Sky" obviously meets the standard of "crested", judging by the eyesight of Wang Hao, an old bookworm, this book already has the potential of a fire book.

I heard that those gods who write online novels are thieves who make money, and they can even make hundreds of thousands or even hundreds of thousands a month, could it be, Masaka???

Lao Tzu is also going to become a god of online literature??

I heard that the gods of online literature are all clubs, tender models, and big health care ......

Could it be, Masaka???

Wowhaha......

Thinking of this, Wang Hao couldn't help but laugh out loud.

"Lao Wang, you are smiling at a young man!"

Just when Wang Hao was yearning for the beautiful life of the god of online literature, a man's disgusting scolding came from the upper bunk.

A small curly hair permed with tin foil, poked his head off the top bunk, this little curly hair is called Yu Bo, last night I went out with my girlfriend to talk about my life, and after returning to the bedroom today, I lay on the bed and didn't get down, obviously, I was awakened by Wang Hao's laughter at this time.

"Hehe, buddy is going to be on fire!" Wang Hao responded with a smile.

"What's the matter, tonight's "Rule of Law in Progress" has you?" Yu Bo said with a sigh of relief.

"Get out~!" Wang Hao rolled his eyes.

"That's to take Xu Muhui down??"

Xu Muhui is the goddess of Wang Hao, and is recognized as the flower of the Department of Social Public Resource Management.

"Not yet. ”

"However, it should be soon...... Wang Hao waved his hand casually, if he really became a god of online literature, and he got hundreds of thousands of manuscript fee income a month, it is estimated that it will be really a show, after all, girls like men with more money and more than 100 million.

"Come on, if you can really take Xu Muhui down, buddy will take care of your little raincoat for a year!"

"Really?"

"It must be true! It's more real than a pearl~!"

"Okay, then you can save money quickly!"

"Damn~!"

Yu Bo gave his middle finger up, and then fell back into bed.

"Brother Bo, there is a good saying, thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't bully young people into poverty!

Wang Hao is now learning and selling.

"I'll go, what kind of words, it's really sour!" Yu Bo responded from the bed.

Wang Hao smiled, didn't explain, refreshed the webpage easily, and received the notice of review of "Breaking the Sky".

[Dear author, your work "Breaking the Sky" has passed the review. 】

It's been reviewed!

It's time to take off!!

Wang Hao was overjoyed, and quickly switched to the background data page of "Breaking the Sky", there are already 4 favorites.

Proof that at least four people have seen the book.

There is a collection just after the review, and the cliff is going to be on fire!

Wang Hao's heart is even more beautiful, and when he clicked on the reading homepage of "Breaking the Sky", he found that he had not only gained four collections, but also more than a dozen book reviews.

"This product is really open!"

"Sit and wait for the streets, sit and wait for the eunuchs!"

"This is what you call a book?"

"What kind of garbage is written! What kind of fighting power? Fight your sister!"

"At this level, it's embarrassing to compare with the old demon god?

"The protagonist is called anti-inflammatory, does the author have any incurable diseases?"

"It's just this garbage book, what kind of demon slaying preaching are you talking about?

"Dead troll, you really dare to open a book, from today on, Lao Tzu will spray you a hundred times a day, don't ban if you have the ability!"

“……”

All the book reviews are all scolding, and apparently, these people came from the post that sprayed "Demon God Scepter" by themselves.

Looking at the scolding on the screen, Wang Hao just smiled lightly, and tapped the keyboard quickly with his ten fingers, and soon a post titled "Disobedience to the War" came out......

The water of the Yangtze River, the back waves push the front waves, in the world, a generation of new people replace the old;

No one is always a great god, and no one is always on the street;

Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi;

Demon slayer preached, right now!!

Dissatisfied, come to war!!

……