Chapter 104: A Trip Home
"Hahaha, just kidding, but seriously, you can stay at home for two days when you go home tomorrow, and see if you can still dream of changing the environment?
Tong Yao nodded, promising to push open the door and catch the last train.
After eating in the evening, Tong Yao scalded her foot, and then began to lie down and cultivate sleep.
I don't know how long it took, but she heard the woman's voice in a daze.
"Coming?"
When she opened her eyes, Tong Yao secretly scolded for drinking more than a pound of yellow soup for nothing today, and this woman would really appear!
I don't know if Zhang Xiangu's mana is not enough, or if this woman is too deep.
"Sit down! Today I'll tell you about the poison of online texts. ”
"Poison spots?"
"Sit down, don't be afraid, didn't I tell you everything? If I don't scare you, you can't get out of here, do you want to stay with me for the rest of your life?"
"That'...... What if outsiders call me? I think Zheng Jia woke me up on the first day. ”
"That's fine, but you don't want to be woken up every day, do you?"
"But don't wake me up in the middle of the night, right?"
"The first two times were accidents and I was in a bad mood. ”
"Uh......"
Tong Yao was speechless, and said in her heart that you have the final say......
She pulled the stool to the side again, and then sat down with a smirk.
"Master, what was the poison point you just mentioned?"
"Poison point, that is, those things can't appear in online novels, if these things appear, then at least readers will scold you for several years, or readers will directly abandon the book and not read it, your grades will fall off a cliff, and your income will drop sharply!!"
"Is it so serious?"
"Of course, for example, for example, a certain TV series you watched a few years ago, Xiaolongnu was beaten by Yin Zhiping...... How many fans who like this show are heartbroken and cursed by this episode? Similar to this kind of episode, it is called a poison point!!"
Tong Yao nodded, and was about to ask what the poison points in the online novel were, but before she could speak, the woman spoke first.
"There are a lot of poisonous points in online novels, which can be roughly summed up as the ones that readers don't like. For example, the male protagonist is green, the male protagonist is too soft and cowardly, abusing the master, harem, low intelligence, indecision, virgin and so on. ”
"Master, excuse me...... Can you make it clearer? There are a lot of words I haven't heard before......"
"Okay, I'll talk about the green hat first, the male protagonist's daughter-in-law cheats on such a bridge, as long as it's a normal person, I will feel aggrieved after seeing it, because a good book, the reader will be substituted for it, the reader is the protagonist, the protagonist is too weak, and the reader will empathize!
The abuser is bullied by the supporting role, as a newcomer, if you write that the protagonist is bullied, try to flip and slap your face as quickly as possible, so that it will create a sense of coolness, but if you keep arranging the protagonist to be bullied, the reader will be very heartwarming to watch.
A harem is a book in which the protagonist takes in many women......"
"Master, this ...... Don't all men like to read these kinds of novels?"
"Yes, men love to read these kinds of novels, and these kinds of novels will be easy to get results, but ...... Forget it, we'll talk about this topic later when we have time, and let's talk about the problem of poison points today. ”
The woman thought for a while, but didn't tell Tong Yao the answer directly, and then pulled back to the previous topic and said.
"Let's talk about low intelligence, low intelligence is that the protagonist's IQ is not enough from the text, of course, it is likely that the author's IQ is not enough. ”
"Oh...... And what about the? What does that mean?"
"Our Lady: That man is so pitiful, I'm going to help. Holy: That man is so pathetic, you have to help him. In the story of the creation of online novels, remember that you must not let the protagonist be a, especially to help people at the expense of the protagonist's interests, if you really want to help others, then at least you have to find an excuse for the protagonist to help. ”
……
This night, the woman was not scaring Tong Yao, and finally when it was dawn, the woman reached out and flicked Tong Yao's forehead, Tong Yao's head hurt, and the whole person instantly sobered up.
She sat up from the bed and touched her head, the pain was still there, and she couldn't help but sigh.
"You're awake, you don't have nightmares at night, do you?"
Zheng Jia sat behind the computer and asked with a smile, Tong Yao said perfunctory, and said that it seemed that she didn't wake up screaming today, Zheng Jia thought she didn't have a nightmare.
After getting up, she packed up her things, said hello to Zheng Jia, and took the car home by herself.
When she got into the car, she smiled wryly.
I said that now that I have graduated from college, I still think that I will go to school, and I plan to go home during the summer and winter vacations, and now I am a freelancer, and I can go home if I want to, and I don't need to ask anyone for leave.
It's just that the economy is relatively tight.
Counting the days, tomorrow and this month will be over, and the last chapter of "The First Sword Maniac" will also be released tomorrow, so far, "The First Sword Maniac" will be completely finished.
And her new book, it seems that it is still far away, let alone writing a manuscript now, not even a single word, no, strictly speaking, she doesn't even know what to write.
Thinking about it, she fell asleep deeply, and when she got up, she had already arrived at the bus station in Tianyun County.
What made her curious was that she didn't dream of that woman this time.
After getting out of the car, she touched her pocket, she couldn't help but smile bitterly again, there was a total of three hundred and sixty-two yuan left in her pocket, sighed, she also put away the idea of slapping her swollen face and being fat, and she didn't dare to fight, and changed to the line car to the town.
When I arrived at the entrance of the village, I saw a lot of villagers standing on the village road, and a group of three or five was discussing something.
Her family is in a special situation, and she doesn't have any relatives in the village, so she doesn't need to greet people when she sees them.
Tong Yao walked towards home with her bag on her back, and when she was halfway there, she suddenly heard several women on the side of the road pointing at her, the sound was very loud, and she couldn't help it if she didn't want to listen.
"Phew, I thought the emperor was back, look at her virtue, exactly like her widow's mother. ”
"That's it, when her mother saw people, she said that her daughter was studying well, but now?
"I heard she's a writer now and has published a book. ”
"Fart writer, look at her ancestral grave with the writer's smoke? Oh no, she doesn't even have an ancestral grave!"
"Can she still be a writer?"
"Yes, yes, when you are a writer, your tail is not in the sky?"
……
Hearing these discussions, Tong Yao's heart was unwavering, because over the years, she had heard ten times more vicious words, she just slowed down slightly, and then walked home without moving.