75. Discuss the plot (ask for collections, ask for recommendation votes!)
Xu Shi stayed at Wang Lixin's side for two days and appeased Xiaohong, after which he returned to the Hengdian courtyard.
By the end of November, the official promotional video of the movie "Excalibur" also began to be promoted on a large scale, which caused a lot of discussion on the Internet.
Among them, the most heated discussion is the play part, judging from some promotional materials, the fight scene of this movie is indeed more exciting to watch, but the more this is the case, the more bottomless many viewers are in their hearts.
They are afraid that all the wonderful parts are put in the promotional video, so that after watching the promotional video, it is equivalent to watching the whole movie, and they have not encountered such a thing once or twice.
Similarly, because of publicity, the foursome of Xu Mingjie and Xu Xiaoxiao also became popular again, especially Xu Mingjie's two brothers and sisters.
When Cheng Guochao was promoting the movie, he was full of praise for Xu Mingjie's acting skills, and let everyone wait and see, Xu Mingjie's contrast in the play will definitely satisfy everyone.
And Xu Xiaoxiao is because of the sword dance, she will often shoot some short videos and put them on the APP, and now she has millions of fans.
During this time, due to the play, she picked up the sword dance handed over to her by Xu Shi again, but she didn't expect it to be so popular on the Internet, and the number of fans also skyrocketed for a while.
Even with Xu Shi, he became famous again, first of all, his identity, Xu Mingjie and Xu Xiaoxiao's uncle, which naturally brought him some attention.
And because he is the action director of this play, according to Cheng Guochao's words, all the action scenes in the play are designed by Xu Shi, which is very exciting.
Some netizens ridiculed that this movie should be a family drama, and the whole family is basically on it.
Originally, this was just a joke, but who knew that someone soon broke the news that Xu Shi's niece also participated in the play, although it was only a group performance, but there were also a two-second shot.
This makes everyone even more excited, and they all say that this movie was invested by Xu Mingjie's family.
There is also Cheng Guochao mysteriously saying that Xu Shi's cameo role in the play is absolutely exciting, and the fighting part is even more hearty.
However, Xu Shi only paid attention to it a little, and did not pay attention to this, and he is now focusing on the script.
On this day, he ushered in five people here, these five people are screenwriters found by Xu Shituo Cheng Guochao and Wang Lixin, although they are basically not famous in the circle, their level is still very good, and they have also participated in the compilation and revision of many scripts, but they do not have the right to authorship.
"Several, I'm going to trouble you all in the next period of time, and I would like to thank you first. Xu Shi said.
"Mr. Xu is polite, these are what we should do, after all, we have all received money, and we are very satisfied with the remuneration. Wu Ji said with a smile.
"Yes, fifteen thousand, half a month, this price is a lot of people want to rush to come, we will naturally do our best. Zheng Ping also said.
Although 15,000 doesn't look like much, it is already very good for screenwriters who don't have much fame for the time being, and it's only half a month.
Xu Shidao: "Then I won't waste time, let's take a look at the story, and I hope you will give more opinions." ”
The five of them took the script handed over by Xu Shi, found a place to sit down and read it carefully.
After reading the whole story, several people looked at each other and were a little surprised, this story seemed really good to them, both the story line and the content in it were remarkable, and there was a little bit of literary film flavor in it.
Then several people began to communicate, and Xu Shi also participated in it and listened to their opinions.
The day passed like this, lunch and dinner were brought by the hotel, and they stayed in a hotel not far from here.
Now Xu Shi doesn't need to save this money, after all, now that he has investment, he can still afford to spend this money.
The next day, the five of them came to Xu Shi, but this time they were not in a hurry to work, after the five of them looked at each other, Wu Ji stepped forward and said: "Mr. Xu, we discussed this script for another night last night, and found a little problem, I want to communicate with you, you see?"
Xu Shi immediately beckoned them to sit down, and then said, "You say, this is a good thing, I hope you can give more opinions, this is really not a polite word." ”
Wu Ji felt the sincerity in Xu Shi's words, and he relaxed a lot, and they didn't have a short time to do this business.
Sometimes they take the job and say that it is good to let them adapt, but in fact, they just ask them to add and subtract, design some lines, put forward some opinions, and change some story lines, which will be opposed by others.
Wu Ji pondered his sentence and said: "That's the case, we discussed it again yesterday, and Feng Yuxiu was a little abrupt when he changed.
This abruptness is not in the ideological aspect, the transformation of thinking is already very good, but in the challenge of killing. ”
Wu Ji looked at Xu Shi as he spoke, and found that Xu Shi really listened carefully and did not show dissatisfaction, so he really put his mind at ease.
Xu Shi said thoughtfully: "According to what you say, there is indeed such a point, you continue to say, how should it be arranged?"
"That's right, the result of our discussion yesterday was to add one more person, and you also said in the script that it was sealed in the hundred schools of cultivation boxing, so the master naturally has more than one.
We would like to add a master who teaches the two sentences of Feng Yu Xiu, that is: martial arts is a killing skill!
Although Feng Yuxiu had a psychological obstacle and even disgust for learning martial arts after encountering these things, it is undeniable that he still loves martial arts deeply in his heart.
Therefore, becoming the number one in the world is also an obsession sealed in the heart of Xiu, and this obsession drives those two sentences, if you want to become the first in the world, you must defeat other martial arts masters.
And when I went to challenge, I remembered to take two sentences, Feng Yuxiu hadn't actually killed anyone before, so if you want to change all of a sudden, you need an opportunity, or to put it bluntly, you need to kill people and be firm.
And this person is the best person to teach Feng Yuxiu these two sentences, which can be regarded as a front and back echo, which is more interesting and can better express Feng Yuxiu's mood at the moment.
His mood was very conflicted, so many things had happened, his heart had begun to dislike the martial arts he was practicing, and even had the idea of destroying martial arts, but he loved martial arts so deeply.
At this time, such a person is also needed to help him complete a complete transformation of his mind.
So we want to arrange such a character to make a real transformation for Feng Yuxiu. ”
Xu Shi listened very carefully, he really didn't expect this before, there was no such excesses in the original script, Feng Yuxiu had already embarked on this road from the beginning, and there was not much change in his heart.
In fact, if you think about it, although Feng Yuxiu has a difficult life and his wife is seriously ill, he has never killed anyone before, so according to Wu Ji's thoughts, the change in heart will become more gentle.
Zheng Ping continued: "There is also the added character that can be recalled in the film, or presented when the police investigate the case. ”
"Also, I see that you set up two images of Feng Yuxiu in the script, one is a normal person, and the other is born with a disability in the legs and feet, what do you think about this?
Xu Shi has not actually made up his mind about this, if it is according to the original script, it must be a natural disability to be interesting, but if it is modified by him, this disability does not seem to be necessary.
Xu Shi did not answer him, but asked, "Tell me what you think." ”
Zheng Ping pondered his sentence and said: "That's the case, we are more inclined to this version of the disability, this aspect can reflect that Feng Yuxiu is sincere love for martial arts, and he can practice martial arts to the realm of congenital disabilities, so it is conceivable that his love for martial arts is extremely strong."
It can just form a contrast with the change of his heart later, and form a certain emotional impact with his desire to destroy the martial arts.
After all, in modern society, the difficulties suffered by the disabled are indeed much more than those of normal people.
And we also thought about it, so that it can also reflect the mentality of sealing in the cultivation before.
Perhaps Feng Yuxiu had suffered a lot of differential treatment because of his disability in the past, so that his psychology has always had a suppressed emotional accumulation.
It's just that it used to be because he had a wife who loved him as an adjustment, and he never broke out, and even dissolved a lot.
But what happened after that made this emotion explode all of a sudden, which can be regarded as paving the way for his transformation. ”
When Xu Shi heard him say this, he immediately felt as if it was very reasonable, not to mention, these professional screenwriters' grasp of the plot is really not comparable to him as a layman.
But before he could finish thinking carefully, someone over there said excitedly: "Actually, I have also thought about this, but my thinking point is a little different from yours. ”
When everyone's eyes were focused, the man coughed dryly and said, "Isn't this film called "One Man's Martial Arts"?
I thought before, according to the current script, it seems more appropriate to call it "The Last Martial Arts".
But last night I thought about it carefully, if I added another character, then the name "One Man's Martial Arts" would be very suitable. ”
Xu Shi was stunned, this is going to add people again?
But he didn't say much, just quietly listened to this person's speech, he felt that what this person said was right, according to the current plot, "The Last Martial Arts" is indeed more in line with the theme than "One Man's Martial Arts", so he wants to hear how this person changes.