As for the notice of particular importance, the revision contents are attached!
You read that right, I changed the forty-three chapters to twenty-three chapters, deleted the content of the twenty chapters in one go, and reduced almost 50,000 words, so that the plot reached an unprecedented sense of compactness!
The main changes are as follows:
First, the scene in the Demon Fox Cave was removed, and all the plots took place in the mountain temple, which means that the protagonist got the ancient certificate of the Taoist sect in the mountain temple and entered the Taoist Palace.
Second, I have made some enhancements to the answer to the Dao Palace, and I feel that it is more wonderful than the first version, if you want to see it, you can read it again.
Third, there is no plot of Huangpiling, but the Liupin Opera Master is still the same, appearing in front of the Mountain God Gate.
The final plot is classified to the previous origin.,Or back to the latest chapter of the plot updated yesterday.,It's equivalent to no changes in the plot.,Just compressed the content.,So,It doesn't affect the later viewing!
Two points to note are:
1. The plot between Wei Yu and the protagonist has been modified a little, that is, Wei Yu now doesn't know that the protagonist is a fake night watchman, and only thinks that the protagonist is a real night watchman, and he is also a five-rank lamp master, and she also knows the identity of the protagonist as a Taoist heir.
Second, the role of the little white fox was removed, and the life experience of the little white fox was not written again, and she did not transform again, whether she will write it in the future or not, let's talk about it later.
Finally, to say, to make such a change, I personally think it is necessary, I just want to make the work more perfect, squeeze out the excess water in it, and try to bring it to the current rhythm in the future, as for whether it can be successful, I think it is okay, anyway, I look at the new version, and I feel more than before!
PS: If you have time, you can re-glance at the previous content, if you really don't have time, continue to look down, as long as you pay attention to the two points I said, it will not have an impact!
There will be an update today, and in the case of ensuring continuous change, the shrinkage treatment has been carried out, which is still good!
"The King Called Me to Vigil" is a particularly important notice, and the revised content is attached! I hit it by hand, please wait a moment,
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