Gu Xiaoni flipped through the readers' comments, some found her mistakes, some discussed unreasonable plots, and some were purely black for the sake of black, and some were black for the sake of bars.

In the article, the heroine lives in the neighborhood next door to the male protagonist, and the city where they are located is a small county town on the 18th line. Seeing this background, Gong Jing spoke.

"How could a rich writer live in a small county town on the 18th tier and have already gone to a big city to live a good life. ”

When Gu Xiaoni saw the comments, she felt like she was going to vomit blood, the bar essence is the bar essence, this is just an ordinary background setting, who said that if a person makes money, he must go to a big city to buy a house, isn't it okay to live a peaceful life in a small city?

In addition to this, there are other weird reviews.

The intimate scene of the hero and heroine, looking at the sky full of stars on the mountain full of fireflies, the two people are holding hands on the hillside, and at this moment, the bars come out to speak again.

"There are so many mosquitoes in the mountains, so you are not afraid of being bitten by mosquitoes?"

"Everywhere you can see the stars in the sky now, it's all air pollution. ”

Gu Xiaoni was speechless.

After all, a novel is a novel, and there will be some fictional elements in it, if even the scenery is more realistic, then can fantasy and supernatural still have a way to live?

The above strange comments, Gu Xiaoni didn't see them. Because the other comments were all bad reviews, after reading them, Gu Xiaoni felt uncomfortable.

"The setting is good, but someone actually blows the writing well, I think the writing is the biggest failure of this book, an embarrassing batch. It is recommended to take a look at "Time is Waiting for You" to see what is called pen power. ”

"At the beginning, I was imitating "The Rest of My Life with Him", the imitation was nondescript, relying on a unique introduction, and attracting people with curiosity? ”

"Reading novels is to make a good picture, your pace is so slow, others are right to persuade you to quit, and if you are not happy to read it, you have to see that you are not happy. ”

"The protagonist's IQ is not online, it's just a little white text, the character is so broken, a lot of things are kneaded together indiscriminately, and an idiot will write such an article. ”

When it comes to writing, she really needs to improve. She admits it, but it's not embarrassing, right?

She looked good, and Master also thought it was okay.

As for the beginning of the imitation of this point.,Please,Each of her plot points was designed by her and Lao Ying.,At the beginning of this book,It's the female protagonist reading the book written by the male protagonist.,And then I received an email from the wrong male owner.,Use a misunderstanding to cause the plot.,This is a common technique of romance.,Is this also an imitation?

The cookie-cutter "domineering president falls in love with me" can also be regarded as an imitation.

Everyone's feelings about rhythm are different. Some people like to be fast-paced, some people like to be slow-paced, and if you don't feel good about it, don't look at it, don't make yourself unhappy.

Finally, the protagonist's IQ is not online.

Romance texts are the world of silly white sweetness and strong women, and silly white sweet is one of the standard configurations of romance texts.

The background is messy, and it's even more nonsense.

All the background setting plots are approved by the diamond writers, how can you make such a low-level mistake as cluttered backgrounds.

Calling her an idiot and can't bear it.

She opened the mobile app and was ready to fight back.

After typing a bunch of excuses in the dialog box, she hesitated when she was about to press the send button.

In her ear, there was a little man who said, "The reader is God, and you can't be disrespectful to God." ”

Take a deep breath and get in the mood. Gu Xiaoni silently recited in her heart: The reader is God, and we must respect God and love God.

So, I saw such a funny and ridiculous comment. The only way for Gu Xiaoni to deal with it is not to fight back, but to delete.

Out of sight, out of mind. The book is written by himself, and others can follow him, and do whatever they want. Anyway, gossip can't hurt her body.

She thought so, but she ignored one thing.

Words can't hurt her body, but they can hurt her heart.

During the period of encountering bad reviews, Gu Xiaoni became inferior and sensitive from full of confidence.

Quietly, her self-confidence was corroded, weathered, and turned into glass, which would turn into a pile of splinters at the slightest touch.

Like plump leaves, cracked by the cold wind and dryness, they turn yellow, they become broken, and they crumble on the dead trunk.

On the first day, she received a bad review, ignored it directly, and deleted it.

The next day, she began to review her book to see if there was really a problem.

On the fifth day, gradually, she began to feel as if something was really wrong with her, but she couldn't tell what was wrong.

On the seventh day, she began to doubt herself, writing articles absent-mindedly, feeling as if she was writing wrong.

She told Master about it, and Master just said that they were jealous of her good grades, so they came to hack her and told her not to take it to heart.

But how could she not take this to heart?

If one person says it, it's fine, but two people, three people, a group of people, all say the same thing at the same time, are they still jealous of her?

It's because she really doesn't write well that they find a chance to complain!

The dog owner finally came back, because of work, Ying Zeyu stayed for a few more days, and when he returned to Lingshui City, it was already fourteen days after Lulu was taken away by Gu Xiaoni.

Back at Ling Shui's home, he made an appointment with Gu Xiaoni to meet at a milk tea shop at the gate of the Jinxiu Jiangshan Community, and asked her to bring the dog back by the way.

Gu Xiaoni is on the evening shift, and she is only free in the morning. So the two of them made an appointment in the morning.

At ten o'clock in the morning, shortly after the bubble tea shop opened, a man in black short-sleeved pushed the door and entered the house and ordered two cups of milk tea. Waiting for Gu Xiaoni in the store.

Gu Xiaoni got up early, washed up briefly, led the puppy, took the dog food, and came to the milk tea shop.

When he saw Gu Xiaoni again, her haggard appearance made Ying Zeyu chuckle in his heart and be surprised.

Why...... She looked so haggard.

The dark circles under her eyes deepened a little, like a brush dipped in black ink, and drew a circle around her eyes.

His hair was as yellow as winter straw, draped haphazardly behind him, and knotted in a mess.

Her eyes are a little swollen, the last time I saw her, her eyes were bright, but this time there is no sense of agility and elegance, and there is more melancholy and anxiety about life.

The skin is sallow, and you can see it at a glance, and I usually stay up late.

She yawned, walked up to him, and sat down.

"This is the milk tea I bought for you, thank you for taking care of Lulu during this time. ”

His eyes fell on Lulu, who pounced on him, and at this moment, he felt that Lulu was not a dog, but a pig......

Gu Xiaoni gave it fragrant and spicy food every day during this time, and Lulu's directly gained weight.

"You give it more to eat later. ”

Yawned lazily, the sky was gloomy today, there was no blue sky, no white clouds, only gray clouds floating in the sky, like her voice, gray and dull.

She looked gloomily at the busy traffic outside the window, her mind was not on the hot milk tea at all, but he heard that girls like to drink milk tea, so he bought milk tea for her.

I don't even drink milk tea, and I look very sad, what happened?

"What's wrong with you, how do you look unhappy. ”

"Nothing. Ay. ”

Gu Xiaoni sighed deeply, took the milk tea, said goodbye, and went home.

Ying Zeyu, who was sitting in the seat, looked at the thin figure in the distance through the transparent floor-to-ceiling window, and sent her a red envelope of 200 yuan in WeChat, which is considered this time, thank her for taking care of Lulu.

Returning home with Lulu, he begins to read her book.

She said that in her book, many people scolded her, and even took screenshots and sent them to him, and now when he looks at it, the comments have been deleted cleanly. Those bizarre statements and attacking comments are all gone.

In addition, she also wrote such a paragraph on Weibo.

"I don't know if I'm on the right path, but someone showed me that I could make it. But now a different voice has emerged. I began to doubt my decisions, I began to doubt my efforts, I began to doubt everything about me. Every day in front of the computer, I can feel endless pressure, like a monster, constantly carving me up, devouring me, tearing me apart, tearing me apart. I'm going crazy. ”

This was Gu Xiaoni's inner voice.

Ying Zeyu quietly focused on her on Weibo, if Weibo has access records, then Gu Xiaoni will see Lao Ying frequently visiting her Weibo.

It's a pity that there is no access record for Weibo.

Looking at this question, Ying Zeyu realized the seriousness of the matter.

He immediately sent a message asking Gu Xiaoni to suspend today's code word work, and he wanted to talk to Gu Xiaoni.

He couldn't watch Gu Xiaoni driven crazy by boundless verbal violence.

Open the APP, and Xiaoni's book has a new review.

After clicking on it, a line of rude text broke into Ying Zeyu's sight.

"It's written like such rubbish, don't come out and be embarrassed, okay?"

Ying Zeyu sneered, clicked on the person's avatar, and found that it was a new account that had not been registered for a long time. In total, only two people have been left with a message.

One is five meters, and the other is Gu Xiaoni.

This number is under the five-meter book, and the blowing is all rainbow farts, and when you click into the five-meter book, you can see that the shit written is not as good.

Let's take a look at the words she left for Gu Xiaoni. Ying Zeyu understood.

Hehe, such an obvious blackness, Gu Xiaoni can't even see it?

What does she usually have in her head? and she is still sad about the criticism of such a person?

Wumi should be ashamed, he is not as strong as others, so he is playing tricks behind his back, wanting to hit Gu Xiaoni, and he doesn't want to see who her master is.

It depends on the owner to beat the dog, and he is about to ride on his apprentice's head for five meters, can he bear it?

Before, because he was busy, he didn't understand this matter carefully, and after a cursory look at the message Gu Xiaoni sent him, he thought it was brainless, so he didn't think about it deeply. Now that I find out that it was deliberate, then don't blame him for being polite.

Bullying the apprentices of diamond writers, some people don't want to be good.