The document Fang Min sent to Su Jing was only 10,000 words, so it only took Su Jing five or six minutes to read it.

Rubbing his face and rubbing his somewhat dry eyes, Su Jing knocked out a message.

"Since you let me see it, I have to evaluate it seriously. ”

Su Jing suddenly felt a little tricky.

Fang Min seemed to be asking Su Jing to evaluate, but in fact, if Su Jing didn't handle it well, it would be a bit dangerous.

Su Jing also knew that what Fang Min wanted in his heart was to humbly ask for advice, but no matter which author, no matter how much he had the psychology of humbly asking for advice, he would be more or less uncomfortable in the face of other people's corrections.

This has nothing to do with personality issues, nor does it have anything to do with character issues, this is just a subconscious reference in the heart, and there are too few people who really put aside all their arrogance to ask for advice.

But Su Jing didn't want to see Fang Min being hit by reality because of this strange psychological reason, so Fang Min's shortcomings, he had to bring it up tactfully.

If you're not careful, you're likely to get Missy.

"Lao Fang, I am pointing it out with the most objective attitude, in order to avoid some unnecessary situations, I have to show you something first. ”

After Su Jing sent another message, he clicked on the writer's assistant and came to the subscription details.

At present, the average subscription is more than 30,000 and close to 40,000, and yesterday's subscription was more than 120,000.

The latest chapter is more than 37,000 postscripts.

This data, in the whole starting point, is being serialized in the new book, not to mention the top five, the top ten is a must.

However, on the best-selling list, Su Jing's new book is really the first.

One reason is that the subscription is high, and the other, and the most important reason, is that Su Jing's daily update volume is too large.

I took a screenshot of this picture, and then I went back to the writer's information page and took a screenshot again.

Then return to QQ.

First of all, Su Jing edited a piece of information first.

"Lao Fang, I'm very serious now, because I still hope that you can get some results at the starting point, and what I send out next is not to show off, just to let you know that I am qualified to give you advice. ”

Taking a deep breath, Su Jing sent the two screenshots just now.

And only then began to give his opinion.

"First of all, the title of the book is good, it is more suitable for the starting point, and the name is also very interesting. ”

"And then there's about the content. ”

"It's a good start, and if you're just writing for the first time, it's a scary indication of your talent. The cool points are arranged very reasonably, but the first chapter still has a little shortcomings. ”

"Maybe because you're just starting to write, so in terms of pen power, there will be immaturity, so in the first chapter, your sense of substitution is not very strong. ”

"This point is very critical, the explosion of cool points is based on the sense of substitution, if there is no sense of substitution, the whole article looks tasteless, the taste is like chewing wax, just like watching middle school students write narratives. ”

"Of course, Lao Fang, you haven't reached this level yet, but compared to your cool point arrangement, your sense of substitution is relatively poor. ”

"You can explain more about the protagonist's current situation, and at the same time, focus a little more on the psychological description of the protagonist, and it is best to arrange the resistance and coolness a little harder, so that it will be much better. ”

"In the second and third chapters, there are basically no big problems, but in the fourth chapter, your problems are exposed. ”

"After the first wave of cool points, you don't get the rhythm right, and it makes me look a little tired from the reader's point of view, so you should intersperse some small cool points in between, or arrange a slightly larger resistance. ”

"After that, I haven't seen it either, so I can't give too many opinions, at present, your problem is not very big, just pay attention. ”

After typing hundreds of words of advice in one breath, Su Jing's fingers were a little tired.

It was almost six o'clock in the morning, but it was still dark outside.

But to Su Jing's surprise, the phone suddenly vibrate!

"Ding Ding Dong ......"

The special concern prompt sounded, and Fang Min replied to the message!

Su Jing hurriedly looked at his phone, only to find that Fang Min only sent one: "............"

A long ellipsis.

Su Jing knew that Fang Min needed to slow down.

In addition to the subscription that can surprise Fang Min, the main thunder point is actually the pen name "Lao Fang".

After all, Fang Min just said yesterday that her favorite author is Lao Fang.

It's like, one day you suddenly find out that a very good friend next to you is usually very ordinary, and he suddenly tells you that he is a big star!

Such contrasts are often unbelievable.

Although Su Jing is not a big star, the effect is actually not much worse.

"Ding Ding Dong ......"

The phone rang again with a particularly concerned voice.

"Su Jing, you ...... It can't be a picture found on the Internet. ”

After reading this sentence, Su Jing expressed his understanding.

This kind of thing, no matter who puts it on, will be surprised, let alone Fang Min.

"Wait a minute, look at the latest chapter of Lao Fang. ”

After speaking, Su Jing clicked on the writer's assistant, clicked to create a new chapter, and then edited a sentence.

"Now you believe it, right?"

Click Send Now.

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Fang Min was wearing pajamas, sitting on the bed, holding his mobile phone in his hand.

The lights were turned on by her, because since the incident in her junior year of high school, she had to turn the lights on at night.

The wide open light clearly illuminated Fang Min's beauty, and at the same time illuminated the dark circles in her eyes.

Trying online writing was an idea she had a long time ago, otherwise she wouldn't have participated in any online literature training classes in her senior year of high school.

But the real action has been in recent times.

Usually, she reads it on the Internet, accumulates experience, and then looks at the experiences posted by those street fighters, as well as the various posts in Fengkong.

Although many of them are more one-sided, it is undeniable that those are really of great help to newcomers.

After Fang Min read those tutorials, he had a clear understanding of many of the passages.

Especially the most popular "Dou Po Analysis" in the tutorial, the analysis in it made Fang Min feel very good.

Of course, Dou Po is about to be analyzed, but there are many methods in it, maybe Potato didn't expect it at the time, but those words and sentences can have a really good effect.

So even if Fang Min tried it for the first time, he also had a certain level.

Talent is one thing, the key is that she can understand.

Otherwise, no matter how talented you are, you won't have much achievement.

In the past few days, she has been busy with the whole network, but it was her first time staying up until two o'clock last night.

After sending it at two o'clock last night, she went to sleep directly, but this morning she woke up inexplicably, and she couldn't sleep at all.

In the case of no choice, she can only play with her mobile phone.

What surprised her was that Su Jing got up so early.

However, what surprised her even more was that Su Jing actually said that he was Lao Fang!

Compared with this news, Su Jing's guidance and suggestions to Fang Min are not so important.

At this time, Fang Min's heart was turbulent, setting off a monstrous wave: he can't really be Lao Fang, right?

At this time, Fang Min already faintly felt in his heart that Su Jing might really be an old man.

Tone is a reason, in fact, the most important thing is Su Jing's last sentence.

With an uncalm mind, Fang Min clicked on the starting point to read.

Slender and slender fingers, swipe a few times on the screen to let the page refresh and refresh.

Soon. An update prompt pops up in the background.

The latest chapter of the old spinning new book, untitled.

By this time, Fang Min had already believed in it for seven or eight points in his heart, but this kind of thing was really not immortal in the heart of the Yellow River!

She clicked on Lao Fang's new book.

"Now you believe it, right?"

When he really saw this sentence, Fang Min finally believed it completely.

And then there's that kind of magical psychology.

The main one is actually an accident.

Proper accident!

A boy who has been chasing himself for some years turned out to be the great god of the starting point!

The kind that earns hundreds of thousands of dollars a month!

It really surprised and surprised Fang Min again.

Immediately, a strange feeling appeared in Fang Min's heart.

If you experience it carefully, you can find that it is a kind of sweetness.

Whether you like it or not, you have been chased by a person for more than four years, and half of the time you have been snubbed by yourself.

There will be a sweet feeling no matter what.

It's said that I like the feeling of being loved by someone, but it's actually quite one-sided.

Because to say that Fang Min didn't feel anything about Su Jing, it was impossible, and even what she didn't notice was that even if the other party wasn't by her side, she was used to the feeling that the other party was everywhere in her life.

Say good morning and good night every day, and you must bless him during the New Year's holidays, and take a look at his recent situation from time to time...... Wait a minute.

All of these gave Fang Min a feeling of habit.

After slowing down for a long time and calming down the turbulent waves in his heart, Fang Min clicked on the QQ contact Su Jing, and the slender jade finger knocked out a sentence on it.

"I really don't know what to say. ”

…………

"I really don't know what to say. ”

Seeing this news, Su Jing also understood Fang Min's inner feelings at this time.

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Temporary change, because of the lack of money, so mix a subsistence, the end of the 30th will not change.