"Huh, do you also read old spinning books?"

Li Jinghan couldn't help but ask softly.

"Me?" Su Jing turned to look at Li Jinghan, a little crying and laughing.

This is my own book, can I not read it?

"Yes, I read Lao Fang's book, it's pretty good. ”

Li Jinghan seemed to like Su Jing's new book very much, and when she heard that Su Jing also read it, she suddenly became a little excited.

"yes, yes, this book is very good, especially his first chapter, which is very well set up!"

Su Jing was a little surprised, but then he figured it out again.

In the same class, they are all majoring in online literature, and they will naturally learn other people's writing methods while reading novels.

"Chapter 1?

Li Jinghan became a little proud: "When I saw the first chapter, I guessed Lao Fang's intention. ”

"If you look at his first chapter, his first sentence is to start with a novel that is on fire, and the reader will definitely be drawn to him. ”

Then Lao Fang arranged for the protagonist to switch scenes in the novel, which not only revealed what the protagonist was doing, but also left a little suspense, arousing the reader's desire to read on. ”

"Constantly switching novel scenes, every time the protagonist is not satisfied, this is resistance, when the protagonist switches to his satisfaction, the reader will also be satisfied. ”

"At this time, when the novel is expanded, and when the protagonist enters the fantasy world, Lao Fang uses the same method to expand the resistance and cool points, and the golden three chapters are very well grasped! ”

Hearing Li Jinghan's "tirade", Su Jing couldn't help but be a little stunned.

What Li Jinghan said was naturally in Su Jing's consideration.

The golden three chapters are very important, and there is no doubt that Su Jing has done a very good job, not perfect, but among all the novels at the beginning, it can be regarded as superior.

But being able to analyze most of his intentions so clearly shows that the other party's writing ability is not bad.

Su Jing smiled: "There is one thing you didn't mention, or rather, there is a little problem. ”

Li Jinghan said: "What didn't you say?"

Li Jinghan thinks that she has studied the first three chapters of Lao Fang very thoroughly, so she can't disdain Su Jing's statement, but she can't say that she attaches great importance to it.

Su Jing pointed out the novel and showed it to Li Jinghan: "Look, I'...... Cough...... Lao Fang's first three chapters are indeed well grasped, but his most exciting thing is not the first three chapters. ”

Li Jinghan was a little puzzled: "What do you mean?"

Su Jing smiled and said: "The three golden chapters are indeed very important, but Lao Fang believes that no matter how good the first three chapters are, if the plot does not cause readers to be refreshed for too long, readers are likely to abandon the book." ”

"How do you know that Lao Fang thinks so? Lao Fang doesn't seem to have said that, right? At least I've read all his books, and the book friend group was also in when he first founded it. ”

Li Jinghan was a little skeptical, although she was relatively simple, she also hated boys who liked to pretend to be brainless.

What's more, with the help of pretending to be a tool, the other party is still the author he admires.

Su Jing smiled: "Lao Fang really didn't say it, but didn't you notice it? Lao Fang took out the first wave of small climaxes in the fourth chapter after the third chapter of gold, and at this time this book has basically circled the reader." ”

"Chapters 4 to 7, Lao Fang let the protagonist complete the first wave of small climaxes by pretending to be forced, and it is not suitable to continue the climax at this time, Lao Fang is very smart, and he takes out the gold finger to replace the boredom that the tricky reader may have, so as to expand the cool points of some gold fingers, to further lock the reader. ”

After the golden finger, the protagonist will explore the use of the golden finger, and at this time the reader's heart has been suspended, but it doesn't take long for Lao Fang to hit the reader's heart again with a big climax. ”

This big climax is completely centered on the cool points brought by the golden finger, so it is not abrupt at all, but makes the reader feel refreshed again and again. ”

But Lao Fang did not simply turn the novel into a cool article, after being cool, although there is a bit of cliché here, but Lao Fang wrote it reasonably, and there is no problem with logic at all. ”

So here Lao Fang arranges a big enemy for the protagonist, which is a long-term contradiction, so it successfully hangs the reader's heart. ”

However, Lao Fang did not use the old-fashioned method to upgrade the protagonist, and the old-fashioned novel pays attention to the fact that the enemies arranged each time are slightly higher than the protagonist, which can not only put pressure on the protagonist, but also bring adventures to the protagonist. ”

Lao Fang got out of this low-level routine, he directly descended the consciousness of the big boss at the beginning, and for the first time, Lao Fang used the golden finger to skillfully swallow part of the consciousness of the big boss. ”

"It's a small cool point, and after a small cool point, it's a big resistance. ”

The big boss realized that he couldn't let the protagonist grow, so he took matters into his own hands and came directly to try to kill the protagonist. ”

However, the protagonist once again escaped with the help of Goldfinger, so the sniper of the big boss failed. And as soon as the protagonist escapes, the reader is comfortable. ”

"By the time I got here, the whole novel had reached more than 200,000 words. ”

"The whole prelude, Lao Fang uses 200,000 words to pave the way, the climax is layered on top of each other, ups and downs, as long as the readers click in, they will basically not abandon the book. ”

"Originally, a novel, between 10,000 and 50,000 words, is a high-risk period for readers to abandon the book, and if the author cannot successfully capture the reader's heart, it is not a successful book. ”

And Lao Fang has done a very good job, and the biggest highlight of this book is that he has achieved the greatest novelty in the world view and realm under the theme of fantasy, so that readers will basically not be bored. ”

Therefore, Lao Fang's most successful thing is not the grasp of the three golden chapters, but the grasp of the reader's grasp and the climax of the plot after the golden three chapters, which is very rare. ”

Su Jing said a lot of words in one breath, his mouth was a little dry, and he swallowed his saliva.

Li Jinghan was stunned at this moment, she thought that Su Jing would mention some subtle things at most, but she didn't expect him to analyze these things!

And after thinking about it carefully, Li Jinghan found that what Su Jing said and the results obtained by Lao Fang were consistent everywhere!

After a long time, Li Jinghan smiled bitterly.

I thought people like to pretend to be forced just now, but I didn't expect that people are real but like low-key bosses......

"Awesome......" Li Jinghan found that she could only use this word to describe Su Jing.

Su Jing smiled "haha": "It's okay, it's okay." ”

Just kidding, the new books are almost 20,000, why isn't it amazing?

Li Jinghan reacted at this time, and became a little curious.

His analysis is so good, he should be very good at writing books, right?

After all, compared with Su Jing, he is a layman's author, and he can reach an average of more than 3,000.

Isn't Su Jing even more powerful?

Li Jinghan couldn't help but ask Su Jing: "You are so powerful, you should have written online articles, right?