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In these two chapters, can you calm down and calm down.
An ordinary person is reborn, get the golden finger, there is always a process of growth, in this process there is always to meet the old people in the past life, I try to simulate the reasonable character and plot at the same time, so that the storyline remains interesting, readable, and refreshing.
Here are some explanations for the recent episode:
Min Ting is a class girl who fell in love with the rich second generation in high school.
The protagonist has heard that she was maintained in her previous life, and she is the RBQ of the rich and handsome, and the protagonist is also very uncomfortable. On the one hand, who hasn't been in high school to YY the pretty girl in the class?On the other hand, when the protagonist is reborn and knows what will happen to her in the future, what will the protagonist think?
Save her? Change the trajectory of her life? So the protagonist has to see how her nature is, is it worth saving? What if people are "free and adventurous" by nature......? How to save, be nice to her, give her money, let her have no worries about food and clothing, and become the canary of the protagonist.
The protagonist himself has also thought about it, what if people want to fly out of the cage and fly into the sky?
Therefore, the protagonist wants to take his time, after all, this is just the beginning, and there are many years to come.
The protagonist has a crush on her, in high school. So now that she is reborn and has a golden finger, she is a little cheap verbally and physically, knowing that she loves vanity and likes famous brands, so I give her something good and tease her, what's wrong?
Is it scum, cheap, playing with people, and dark
In the thirteenth chapter, the protagonist asks Min Ting to go to his house to get a mobile phone, Min Ting goes, thinking that the protagonist is going to do something else with her, but the protagonist doesn't, just joking: "Didn't you say it during the day, I'll give you a mobile phone when I learn to bark a puppy."
Is there anything wrong with the plot and writing here? Is this disrespectful and playing with people? It's not that you haven't seen what you want to see, you haven't seen the drive, and you're annoyed and angry?
Isn't it good to take your time?
The main character uses the word "puppy" instead of "dog".
Didn't the protagonist say, "If you want a mobile phone, learn how to bark a dog?"
Are these two statements the same? I think "puppy" is a kind-hearted joke of children.
Learn to bark ...... It's a harsh statement.
Learn to bark a puppy...... Is it excessive.
In the last two chapters, the two drove to Shanghai, the protagonist was for the signature baker, and Min Ting was for the party, the two listened to songs in the car all the way, the protagonist asked her to sing, and said that she would give her a salary increase, and she sang.
It's not a joke.
The protagonist gives her a Rolex worth 100,000 dollars, joking that "it's for someone else, not yours". I want to use this plot to deduce whether Min Ting is worth "changing the trajectory of her life".
Over here...... It was said to be playing with people again.
Then, all the way to the sunset, driving to listen to the song, the two stopped the car at dusk, and it came naturally, as the author, I felt that it was quite sweet there, and both of them were quite happy and happy.
Here, the protagonist has become what some book friends call a "scumbag, pervert".
The protagonist takes a blood and thinks a lot about it.
But the protagonist is not scum, because on the street, he goes to buy medicine, and the inner activity is that the distance between the pharmacy and the hotel has become very long. Because he had thought in his heart, is it okay not to take medicine? to be born, to be together? or whatever? After all, maybe it will be a life, right?
Because of these activities, that road is long.
The protagonist is not the kind of straight man who is grinning and goes directly to buy medicine for others to eat.
Here, the protagonist behaves like this, but he becomes a "scumbag" again.
Isn't it reasonable to take medicine without mentioning this stubble, and explain the past?
The protagonist wakes up in the morning and thinks a lot about Min Ting's past and present life next to her, and there are some pitiful descriptions of her, which shows that the protagonist is thinking seriously, not playing with people casually.
The protagonist seems to be serious with Min Ting, but the first thing people open their eyes is: "That watch, I want it?"
The logic of reality is that the two of them just had a sweet time yesterday.
It's like you and your blind date just had a sweet time last night, and she opened her eyes in the morning and said, "I want the dress I liked yesterday, buy it for me!"
What kind of mood do you have? (The metaphor is not very appropriate)
The protagonist gives her the watch, and then gives her another 20,000 yuan to buy clothes to wear and go to the birthday party.
The protagonist then drives back to Harbour City by himself, where blood is sprayed again, saying that he threw people away.
It's thrown away, but the protagonist has logic and a reason.
I couldn't stand being sprayed by the group, I came back and changed a plot, in fact, I wrote a plot of more than 100,000 words later.
Because I sprayed a lot, I came back to change it, and I came out with a "cornucopia of goodwill" props.
In the name of the system, let the protagonist and Min Ting come into contact.
I wrote about six chapters of the plot, but I just sent two chapters, and I was sprayed by the group again, saying: "Diaphragm, lick the dog, lick the green tea bitch, cheap, scum"
In fact, although the plot has been changed, if you read it, the author feels that this plot is not poisonous, which is good. What is certain is that the author did not treat her badly this time, but he did not kneel and lick either.
In doing tasks, kneeling and licking, and being serious about her, the balance between the three is well mastered by the author. It's all already written, and it's waiting to be sent out now.
So, just wait until you finish watching this plot, and if you don't like it then, spray it again.
The lesson is that I will read the book reviews of book friends in the future, but I will not easily change the outline, and maybe what has been written, just follow my own ideas step by step.
Finally, these two days in the six frequency, the recommended votes are powerful, but the collection is general, ask for votes, ask for all.
About this plot, there are still buddies who support me, the author is very moved, and I hope the follow-up plot can give you a fight.
In fact, I originally wrote a 3,000-word explanation in one go, all about the front, Ji Wei, Zheng Xue, Zhanmei, and Zhou Xinya. The author is defending the protagonist, he is not a scumbag, nor is he dark, and he is not a cheap licking dog. ALTHOUGH THIS SEEMS TO BE THE CASE ON THE SURFACE, THE ATMOSPHERE OF THE WHOLE BOOK WILL HOLD HIM UP AND MAKE HIM A QUALIFIED SUPERMAN.
I hope this explanation is a reassuring pill.,I won't eat shi if I read it.,The current chapter eats something smelly.,That's not shi.,Don't doubt it.,That's at most durian or tofu.,It's really not shi.。
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I was spurted with blood today, but now I haven't coded a word well