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When I saw this book, I was really shocked. Pen Fun Pavilion wWw. biquge。 info
I really can't believe it's an essay written by a female author.
The opening is magnificent, the text is beautiful, the scriptures are cited, and the ambition of the Spring and Autumn Period of Great Chu began to be introduced, and then I saw that the memories of the heroine's rebirth were drawn from the death of another person, and I found that this kind of talk was also quite interesting, what about the death of the white dragon, not to mention whether it was good or bad, but there was a big break in the middle and almost wanted to abandon the plot, and it felt like the heroine was too aggrieved, especially the heroine was chased and killed, and almost died because she was afraid of the snake.
It wasn't until more than forty chapters that I finally began to explain the reason for the heroine's grievances for so long, but I still didn't feel cool enough, but I endured a few more chapters and looked down, and suddenly found that there was actually a lot of foreshadowing in front, but the author, your foreshadowing is too long!!
Foreshadowing 1. The little palace maid who died in the same way as the heroine became a helper later
Foreshadowing 2. The heroine is not invincible, she said at the beginning that she was afraid of snakes, and through the chase incident, she finally broke through the psychological barrier and began to fight back
Foreshadowing 3. The heroine poisoned the white dragon pool every night, creating a terrifying scene of the white dragon constantly eating people, so that the frightened King Chu finally made up his mind to kill the dragon
But the author, you write so slowly, although the chapters are still wonderful, it's really annoying to read.
But fortunately, you made me cool later.,Let Mi Zhao and the guards roll the sheets and be found The psychological demeanor of this chapter is contrasting.,It's very exciting.。
I feel that I can still write so cool with a slap in the face, and I read it in one go.
Killing dragons in the back, stealing snake meat, drinking, and visiting Chujing, the writing is also very hilarious.
It feels like you've suppressed me for fifty chapters, and finally made me cool for 30 chapters.
It's really cool to press to the extreme!
Then the back began to be cool all the way, until Princess Wu's trick "Please enter the urn" You shocked me again, and the bad guys can also write like this!
The earth-shattering reversal, I thought that Princess Wu was cleaned up like Mi Zhao.
But this Cheng Jia also surprised me, the previously unknown man actually planned a series of events in the back, and the male protagonist Ruo Ao Ziyan had no power to fight back.
Okay, at this point, I have to talk about what I think your book always makes me unexpected, when I thought Cheng Jia was the male protagonist, Ruo Ao Ziyan rose strongly again.
Is it really good to write like this? If two men who are so strong collide together.
Then after the civil strife of the Ruo Ao clan was resolved, the matter came again, the Triple Alliance.
Seeing this, do I really doubt again that this book was written by a female author?
Shouldn't you all write romances?
Quan Mou is so well written, isn't it really a man?
Then the heroine rose again, and it was really a mountain that was higher than a mountain.
A dismount, I really don't think Mihuang is a woman!
It's too manly, this is imposing!
Of course, seeing this, I have to talk about another reborn and abused: Rong Yu.
In fact, if this guy is changed to another novel, he will be a proper male protagonist.
In this book, the male first Ruo Ao Ziyan is the pride of the indigenous sky, the second male is through the hard work, and the female protagonist is ten years of swallowing Wu and fighting Chengming.
My God, the opponent is too strong, you can only cannon fodder, and all the gold and silver you make to open the way, create civil strife, and kill people with a knife can only be lost.
Of course, there are other very powerful characters, this Prince Qi, I like it too much.
used a Jin beauty for a Jin city in Handan.
This ability to pretend to be crazy and stupid is also rare in the world.
Speaking of which, we really have to wait.
Author, you're too slow to update.
Say yes plus more and more and more!
And the two most controversial characters in the book, Ruo Ao Ziyan and Cheng Jia.
I just want to know who's the good guy and who's the bad guy?
Or is it not under the rights, there are no absolute good guys and bad guys.
Will Cheng Jia make a shocking reversal and become the male lead?
Will Ao Ziyan become the ultimate boss?