Gu Youliuxia Hui sat still, Wang Hao thought that he couldn't reach that realm, but after seeing Zhenbai's peaceful eyes, the impetuousness in his heart disappeared incredibly, leaving only a faint warmth.

In the face of the temptation in front of him, between the beast and the beast, Wang Hao finally failed to choose to become a wolf, so he quietly appreciated the manuscript in his hand.

……

Five minutes passed, and after quietly reading the original manuscript of Mashiro, Wang Hao's face became weird, and he finally understood why as a world-class painter of Shiina Mashiro, the submission would be returned.

"You should know why. ”

Putting down the manuscript, Wang Hao asked straightforwardly, believing that Shiina Mashiro himself knew this problem.

"Well, sure enough, the plot is boring......"

Nodding in frustration, just as Wang Hao thought, Shiina Mashiro himself already knew the reason, and he had submitted many times from the beginning to the present, but none of them could pass, and Iida Ayano also raised this kind of question.

Although Shiina Mashiro lacks common sense, he still has his own opinion in his heart, and even a genius will have the same place as ordinary people.

"The plot is really boring, it can be said that it is a completely brainless plot, there are so many things that people don't understand, it can make readers crazy. ”

Wang Hao said bluntly, since he decided to teach Mahaku to learn comics, he should clearly point out the flaws to the other party.

"Hmmm......"

Shiina Mahaku only said this, and his mood was obviously a lot lower, although it was unbearable to criticize a girl like this, using white lies would only make Mahaku go further and further down the wrong path, so Wang Hao decided to tell the truth.

"First of all, let's talk about the style of painting.,You shape every character too perfectly.,Hardly you can find a flaw.,The appearance of a passer-by can be comparable to the protagonist.,The most important thing is that the character is too peaceful!Not only the male protagonist has a peaceful personality.,Other characters, including the character of the male protagonist's rival character, are popular.,Although it's just a comic.,But relying on this setting where all the characters have the same personality,It's really boring.。 ”

The character of the protagonist of the comic is too important, no matter what the characters in the comics, they all have their own unique personalities, such as optimism, black belly, tsundere, hot blood, etc., it is the unique personality that gives the characters the soul, so that readers can more clearly understand the essence of the comics.

However, Shiina Mashiro's manga has a setting that is impossible to see in other manga, and all the characters have the same personality, which is impossible to reflect the strong personal charm of the manga characters.

After a pause in his tone, he got up from the chair, Wang Hao walked to the bed on the other side and sat down, just facing each other to look directly at Shiina Mashiro, and continued to speak.

"And then there's the most important plot.,The content of your comics is simply despising everyone!Finally, a rival in love appeared.,Why did you disappear inexplicably after just appearing?Even that cute pet dog didn't let go.,Is it because it's the pet of a rival in love?!And please don't underestimate love.,How can there be such a smooth and unimaginable love in the world.,Even if it's fictional, it's impossible!"

Wang Hao said what he wanted to say in one breath, and he also noticed that his tone was a little excited, but Zhenbai was so white in the plot that he disappointed him.

As a manga artist, Shiina Mashiro can be said to be not even a newcomer in other aspects except for the artist, if it is divided into four test papers, he will not hesitate to give the painter a perfect score of 100 points, as for the other three papers, there is absolutely no exception, all are zero points.

On average, it's about a good idea to keep an average of 60 points per subject as a just qualified manga artist.,And the average of Mahaku is only 25 points per subject.,These scores are all earned by drawing work.。

It really made him feel sorry for him, but Wang Hao didn't continue to criticize, after all, Zhenbai still lacks a lot of life experience in life, and it is almost a blank paper without the slightest trace.

"I'm sorry. ”

Shiina Mashiro's voice is still as flat as water, and it's hard to find the loss if you don't listen carefully.

But Wang Hao still noticed it, and sighed softly, it seems that what he said just now was a bit too much.

"Don't worry about the aspects I raised just now, I will teach you slowly. ”

The reason why he said the shortcomings just now was that Wang Hao wanted to make Zhenbai clear about his flaws as a cartoonist, but it seems that he had noticed these a long time ago, and he was very pleased with the attitude of not refuting them.

On the other hand, after all, Shiina Mashiro is a genius painter, but he doesn't have a trace of arrogance.

"Then please Hao teach me how to shape the character, and how to create the plot, please!"

Mashiro raised his lowered little head, and there was a serious look on his little face, and he pleaded seriously.

"Well, even if you say that all of a sudden......"

Wang Hao said with some embarrassment, the teaching just now really has to be implemented, he doesn't know where to start for a while, and it is obviously impossible to suddenly let Zhenbai recover his common sense.

All cartoonists have come step by step, and Wang Hao can't achieve success without paying, he has modified five centimeters per second and Dragon Ball, and from the beginning of setting the goal of creating a two-dimensional empire, he began to work hard silently.

For example, there are a lot of related materials in the room, all of which are related books such as games, comics, and anime, and he will often look through them when he has time, and now he has also come into contact with a lot of new knowledge.

The topic is a bit far away, but the meaning I want to express is that I have to rely on the accumulated efforts to slowly get closer to the goal.

Many people in the comics industry who are now respected as 'teachers' basically started as other people's manga assistants, and they worked for several years, and gradually learned various knowledge before trying to make their debut.

Wait a minute...... Manga Assistant?!

"I now have a work that is very suitable for Mashiro, it is the work I am creating, the name is "Five Centimeters per Second", your painting style fully meets the requirements, just draw according to the plot development above, so that you can accumulate some experience!

Wang Hao clapped his hands excitedly, the background picture of second five created by Zhenbai last time, the beautiful and touching peerless painting style has made him unforgettable.

At first, he didn't think about giving the second five comics, because it was difficult to show the touching in the novel in the way of pictures at a speed of five centimeters per second, especially as a comic, and the painting style of the cartoonist was required to the extreme, so he gave up this idea, or didn't think about it at all.

But "Five Centimeters per Second" seems to be a work tailor-made for Shiina Mashiro, the peerless painting style with the depressing plot, Wang Hao's eyes have already seen the ending......