Time flies quickly, and in the blink of an eye, a week has passed since Wang Xiu came to be his new wife's assistant, and Wang Xiu's rhetoric on that day seems to be just an illusion. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

Wang Xiu has been doing his job as an assistant these days, and he hasn't said 'big words' anymore.

But a lot of things happened in this week, Wang Xiu was learning and observing his new wife's painting skills while also fulfilling what should have been done by the highest guide - let the new wife further transform and progress!

Even if it's a genius cartoonist,There will be some big problems when it's serialized for the first time.,The story of the first three words of the new wife's [CROW] is very handsome.,The protagonist of the plot is full of momentum.,But the first word was the first place.,The second word became fourth.,To the third word,,Slightly rebounded.,But after four or five words,The handsomeness and momentum of the comic plot are seen more.,There's always some aesthetic fatigue.。 This will affect the serialization grade.

In the original plot, it was for the highest reason that Fukuda and them had a plot discussion in the fifth episode of the follow-up, and many good suggestions were put forward, such as, the protagonist's strength and fun are two different things. For example, to make comics easier to understand. The pace of the story development is more fluctuating, and there are more interesting supporting characters, etc. Fukuda also suggested that the story of [CROW] has no unique spirit so far, only handsome. It's even more blunt to say that the new wife doesn't have the consciousness of being a cartoonist.,To think about the reader.,If you want to draw a story that you think is interesting.,You go to draw the same people.,The first thing you have to consider as a cartoonist is to please the reader...... Words like that.

It's not that his new wife can't listen to the guidance and lessons, he listened to these opinions, and because of the highest advice, the new wife corrected the problem of not drawing storyboards!

Wang Xiu basically completed the highest half of the task, yes, only half, what he completed was the transformation and progress of his new wife, but the other half gave up and completed it without persuading his new wife to draw a storyboard like the highest!

On this day, Yujiro Hattori, the editor of the new wife, brought the results of the fifth episode of the new wife's manga - the second place in the JUMP questionnaire!

The new wife and the editor Yujiro Hattori chatted alone for a long time, and when the editor left, after the new wife returned to the house, she unusually did not draw a manga for the first time, but took a paintbrush and poked and poked on the manuscript paper......

The new wife looks like this, and the three of them feel that something is wrong when they see it.

Nakai said very strangely: "What's wrong with the new wife, teacher? Isn't the second place in the fifth episode very good? The second place, why don't you seem to be happy?"

Fukuda took a paintbrush and put the tip of his pen against the slightly slid brim of his hat on his forehead, a picture of me who had already seen through everything: "Cut, Mr. Nakai, don't you understand? The new wife is not happy, she has improved so much, but she only got second, he is not satisfied." ”

"Yes, if I'm not mistaken, Mr. Yujiro must have said something else to his new wife. Wang Xiu glanced at his new wife and guessed something.

"Huh?" Nakai was stunned, but he didn't understand what it meant.

"Well, at this time, you should let Teacher Wang Xiu go out and ask your new wife what she is worried about. ”

"No problem. Wang Xiu agreed with a smile, stood up and walked to his new wife, and asked directly:

"New wife, Mr. Yujiro said something to you, can you tell us?"

The new wife was lying on the work table with some boneless soft body, the paintbrush in her hand was still unconsciously poking on the paper, and after hearing the question, she turned her head to look at Wang Xiu, and said in a slightly low tone:

"Teacher Yacheng Mumeye is right.,The first place in the JUMP serial is not as easy as imagined.,This time the second place,More than 20 votes away from the first.,Mr. Yujiro said,If I can listen to his first storyboard and discuss the plot with him,This time the first place is no problem......"

"Oh, I see, that's what Mr. Yujiro said, new wife, it seems that you really want to win the first place. ”

"Of course, it's a lot of fun to be the number one serializer on JUMP, first place!

Fukuda laughed and said: "Mr. Yujiro is right, if you can draw a storyboard first, and discuss it with him, this fifth episode of the comic, at least you can draw more rhythm and tension, after all, he is the editor of JUMP, I don't know how many manga editors I've read, new wife, you should have listened to him a long time ago, and drew the storyboard first." ”

Nakai co-wrote: "Yes, yes, drawing comics without storyboards, how can this work, no matter how powerful and genius the new wife teacher is, after all, he is a rookie cartoonist, and it is already incredible that the first serialized comic can have such a result!"

The new wife's face was still drooping, with a hint of emotion on her face: "Really? Do you really have to draw a storyboard? But drawing a storyboard is equivalent to drawing the same thing twice, which will reduce my enthusiasm, and I have to discuss the plot or something, I prefer the characters to move on their own." ”

Fukuda said again frantically: "New wife,I said it last time,As a cartoonist,The first thing to consider is to please readers.,Draw what readers want to see.,Draw what they think is interesting.,Mr. Yujiro is the editor.,He can discuss the plot with you.,It will definitely make your comics more perfect.,As long as you do this,It's possible to make your comics more interesting.,In that case, with your new wife's comic talent,The first place must be no problem...... Oh yes, you're a future adversary, why am I starting to remind you again, bastard!"

It's like a broken can, Fukuda said again: "All in all, don't be happy to paint alone, but consider the reader's mood to paint!"

"Oh, is the reader's mood? It seems that I really want to draw a storyboard first.,Discuss the plot with Mr. Yujiro......" The new wife has a little more spirit, and it seems that it has been decided.

But...... At this time, a disdainful voice came over without concealment, it was Wang Xiu's voice.

He clasped his hands around him, held his head high and sneered, "Huh! ”

"What?!Senior Wang Xiu, what do you mean by this, what kind of mortal wisdom! What I said is all for the new wife's comics. Don't think you're already a serialized cartoonist, so arrogant!!" Futian was shocked by Wang Xiu's mortal wisdom, his face turned black with anger, and he yelled at Wang Xiu.

"Well, Futian, don't be so angry, Teacher Wang Xiu may have other opinions, let's hear what he has to say first. "Nakai is a good man, holding Fukuda, and doing the work of a peacemaker.

"What? Didn't I say that you are mortal wisdom? Didn't you say last time that the current level of genius of the new wife can only be regarded as a stage of 'making editors who have read a lot of comics think that she is a genius', and she can't be considered a real genius cartoonist, right?"