From the day "The Great Witch" was launched, to now, it has been three months and seven days.

Thank you to all the friends who have been with Xiaoye during this time!

Actually, there are a lot of things I want to say, but Xiaoye is always like this, once it comes to his mood, he will habitually keep silent.

Emotions aside, Xiao Xie just wants to talk about books.

There are a lot of shortcomings, the pace is not fast enough, the protagonist is not cool enough, and so on.

Including, the current plot.

has friends giving evil opinions, this kind of interspersed montage-style narrative technique is not suitable for online articles.

Well, actually, the little evil knows it in his heart.

And, the villain who suddenly came out at the moment is too abrupt.

Suddenly jumped from the small level of the individual to the big picture, and the jump was too big.

Yes.

On the one hand, the foreshadowing is not clear enough, and on the other hand, this is the story to be told next.

In a complete and good story, there are not only protagonists, but also supporting characters, and tricks.

As a result, the cult devotes chapters to their storylines.

In addition, the story line of "The Great Witch" is not single, it is multiple lines at the same time. This will unfold slowly after that.

About Zhang Yue of the [Arrest Division], the forbidden sacrifices, the battle of Bowan investigated by Sui Xing and Old Man Teng...

These all happened at the same time during the growth of the main character.

Barefoot is not afraid to wear shoes. The little evil is originally stupid and transparent, and he can afford to try and lose.

Even if this kind of style that is not suitable for appearing on the Internet has a strong persuasion effect, Xiaoyi still wants to give it a try.

Maybe it's a sand sculpture in his bones. I know how to write an online article, but no.

However, evil is not really because of personality. It's really love.

Love codewords, love to build a world in your own way, and explain a story.

Rather than using a model that someone else has studied thoroughly, to tell a similar or seemingly happy story.

PS: I just want someone to see this book, and there are book lovers who really like this story.

I don't cry poor, and I'm not a poor ghost myself, but I can still eat steamed buns.

However, there are still gains and losses. That motionless data shatters once at a glance.

I was still sick in the past two days, and I was a little impetuous, so I decided to take a two-day break and consume the manuscript first.

Wash and sleep, and good night everyone!

I wish you all a good dream, and you all have a dream in your dream.

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