"Beat her, and beat her to death?"

Lin Jie didn't believe it at all, and said with a smile: "Miao Miao, you two eat and sleep together, closer than sisters, you really want me to beat her like this?"

"It's too reluctant, brother, don't be reluctant. ”

Lin Miao said indignantly: "She knew that I would definitely be angry, so she used the excuse that school was about to start, and she wanted to go back to accompany her father, and she went home early this morning." ”

Seeing that Lin Miao seemed to be really angry, Lin Jie set his eyes on Zhang Xiaoxiao and silently asked what was going on.

Zhang Xiaoxiao smiled and said, "The one written by Kemeng was published on the Internet, and the person based on Miao Miao wrote a little ...... How to put it, it's a little unpleasant. ”

"Applejack, just take a look at it yourself. ”

So that's what happened.

Lin Jie said a little disappreciatively: "But that little girl in the dream is just a high school student, what can she write, it's very good to be able to write a story clearly." ”

"As for the character description, it must be very bad, Miao Miao, you don't have to be angry, it is estimated that she wrote it, and few people read it at all. ”

"Hmph, let's see for yourself first!"

Lin Miao stuffed the laptop in his hand into Lin Jie's arms and ran upstairs in a huff.

Seeing this, Zhang Xiaoxiao also covered her mouth and yawned, saying, "I'm going to sleep too." Applejack, I have to admit that Mengmeng, a little girl, still has some writing talent. ”

"Applejack, don't go to bed too late, remember to rest early. ”

After another admonition, Zhang Xiaoxiao also went upstairs.

Lin Jie sat on the sofa, turned on the computer, the screen lit up, and what appeared in front of him was a page, called "Never Leave", the author is I love Pikachu.

At the same time, he noted that there were already dozens of comments on this one.

Lin Jie looked through it, and most of the comments were compliments such as "awesomely written", "really good", and "this is the best short story I've read this year".

This reminded him that An Kemeng faced his disbelief and retorted that he would let netizens evaluate the quality.

"Is this girl really okay?"

With suspicion, Lin Jie adjusted his body posture, leaned comfortably on the back of the sofa, and began to read the first chapter with some scrutiny......

The story begins at the airport.

The protagonist in the article is named Lin Anran, a handsome young doctor.

Together with his girlfriend Han Yuxin, he accompanied his sister Lin Qingqing, who had just graduated from high school, and took his pet dog Lele to Zhuhai, western Sichuan Province for a graduation trip.

"The name of this character is really worthy of being a girl author. ”

Lin Jie criticized and continued to read.

I have to say that An Kemeng's storytelling skills are good, and the things he writes are quite attractive, which makes Lin Jie fall into it unconsciously......

What An Kemeng wrote was not a copy of the actual situation at all, but a lot of revisions.

This allowed Lin Jie to not only be able to substitute, but also not to think of the actual situation at the time and play the play, and completely read the article written by An Kemeng as an original.

While Lin Anran and the three were waiting at the airport, they also happened to meet Han Yuxin's best friend and her boyfriend, who were also going to Zhuhai.

In this way, five people, two men and three women, with a dog, began this extraordinary trip.

Ankemon's description skills are quite good, the beautiful scenery, food, and ethnic customs of Zhuhai are all written quite wonderfully, which makes people want to go to Zhuhai to experience it immediately.

In the narration, Lin Anran and others, who played here, spent quite a few days.

In this part, some problems between several people were also pointed out, Lin Anran was obsessed with medical skills, busy with work, and neglected his girlfriend and sister, which caused them to be a little dissatisfied.

Han Yuxin's best friend, in fact, her favorite person is Lin Anran, and the so-called chance encounter was just designed by her.

My best friend's boyfriend was vaguely aware of this, and he was hostile to Lin Anran.

After three days like a dream, Lin Anran and the others began to hike.

When camping at night, because of Lin Qingqing's insistence, everyone camped by the river.

Unexpected sudden, midnight earthquakes, and floods also came unexpectedly.

An Kemon's description of everyone in distress can be said to be quite wonderful, which makes people suspense from time to time.

And the dangers encountered were one after another, and the actual encounter of Lin Jie and others that night was nothing compared to Zhong.

At the same time, in danger after danger, everyone's heart and hidden thoughts are exposed.

Lin Anran will never abandon his girlfriend and sister, but his best friend's boyfriend chose to escape first when he encountered a serious danger......

Lin Jie couldn't stop watching, and he didn't see the end until he realized that the time was already three o'clock in the morning.

After reading the full text, Lin Jie understood why Lin Miao was so angry.

In this, Lin Qingqing is portrayed as a self-centered beautiful girl, and there are two distresses caused by her willfulness.

The protagonist Lin Anran was even seriously injured in his right hand for her.

Lin Jie also understood why this short story was praised by everyone.

In addition to the rendering, the description is very good, the description of the distress that night is also thrilling and fascinating, the response of several people, and the description of human nature is also quite in place, not abrupt.

Especially in the final climax, it is extraordinarily tragic and tear-jerking.

During a landslide, Han Yuxin was unfortunately crushed by a stone.

In the case of stones rolling down from time to time, Lin Anran had to amputate Han Yuxin, although his right hand was already injured, he was still gritting his teeth and persevering......

However, an aftershock hit, and a boulder standing next to it was about to slowly fall.

Han Yuxin shouted for Lin Anran to escape, but Lin Anran was unmoved, and operated on her without distractions......

When it was dangerous, Lin Qingqing, that best friend, and best friend's boyfriend resisted the boulder with their bodies......

When Lin Anran saved the heart of the cold rain, Lin Qingqing, her best friend, and her best friend's boyfriend were crushed by the boulder and couldn't get out.

At this time, there were rocks rolling down again......

Between life and death, her best friend's boyfriend shouted "I love you", which stimulated her physical potential, and one person carried the boulder, creating an opportunity for Lin Qingqing and her best friend to escape at the cost of his own life......

Lin Jie was somewhat convinced.

Oh yes, this Ankemon is really sensational and touching.

This girl really has a talent for writing......

After eight o'clock in the morning, Lin Jie got up.

At this time, Lin Miao had already gone out to work, and Zhang Xiaoxiao also took Lele to the park for a walk and exercise.

As for Qin Gang, because he was busy preparing for marriage, Lin Jie took his vacation today and the weekend.

Lin Jie went online through his mobile phone and checked that article, and found that there were hundreds of comments, many of which were long-form reviews and were highly evaluated.

He didn't bother to eat breakfast and dialed Enkemon's phone.

As soon as it was connected, An Kemeng's eager question came: "Brother Jie, have you read mine, how do you feel about what you wrote?"

"Yours, I read it all night last night. ”

"As for how to write ......"

Lin Jie paused for a moment, and praised without hesitation: "Just like medical skills are to me, you are very talented in writing, and your writing is really good." ”

"It's just that your adaptation of fiction is a little too outrageous, right?"

An Kemon's smug and happy laughter came from the phone, and then the voice came out, "Thank you for the compliment, I'm flattered, hehe." ”

"Although there are more adaptations, the core of the story has not changed, that is, 'never abandon', the characters and plot have changed a lot, mainly to serve this core. ”

"Brother Jie, I also have a documentary version here, which is recorded in strict accordance with the facts, which is the material accumulated for writing your biography in the future. ”

"You think long-term!"

Lin Jie snorted and asked again: "Kemeng, didn't you say before that you wanted that hateful person to write it in, and you also want to write him to death? ”

An Kemeng smiled and said, "That bad guy is dead, and I think it would be a bit too much to step on him again." ”

"At the end of the book, I suddenly wanted to write a tragic story, and I handled it like that. ”

"Brother Jie, are you moved? When I wrote it at the time, I was in tears. ”

Lin Jie paused for a moment and admitted: "It's a little touched. ”

"Kemeng, I found that you wrote, it's really good, you can consider making a career out of it. ”

"My career ambition is still to be a doctor, and writing is just my hobby. ”

An Kemeng said seriously: "Brother Jie, I have been practicing the movements you taught me to exercise the flexibility of my hands, and I have not been lazy for a day." ”

Lin Jie sighed and did not continue to persuade.

This is Ankemon's own choice, and it is naturally based on her wishes.

He didn't forget Lin Miao's attitude last night, and admonished: "Kemeng, I can remind you that Miao Miao is angry, and you want me to beat you hard." You'd better think of a way to let Miao Miao extinguish the fire. ”

An Kemeng's voice said timidly, "I didn't mean to, I wrote that character like that when I wrote." Also, my sister also has a lot of opinions, because I wrote one of her legs, woo woo ......"

She pleaded in a pitiful voice: "Brother Jie, you can help me." ”

Lin Jie laughed and said, "I won't help you, you can solve the trouble you caused yourself......

After breakfast, Lin Jie, who was sleep-deprived, was too lazy to go to medical school again.

He thought of a workaround, which was to open a video directly in the study and have a one-on-one video conversation with the students who were lined up this morning.

After experimenting, Lin Jie felt that this method was very convenient, and the effect was unexpectedly good.

It may be possible to adopt it more often in the future.

Just as Lin Jie was on the phone with the second student, Zhang Xiaoxiao knocked on the door and said with a complicated face: "Ajie, a person who looks very similar to you is here, he should be your half-brother." ”

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