Chapter 129: Xu Sanduo

The full text of a script is 80,000 words, more than 100 pages, and Wang Xiaobai spent half an hour reading 20,000 or 30,000 words.

During this period, the blue dragon sat on the sofa as if sitting on pins and needles.

Although he is much older than Wang Xiaobai, there are some things that cannot be decided by age, and in front of this top domestic screenwriter and cutting-edge director, he has no confidence at all, and he is as obedient as a student.

After another ten minutes, Wang Xiaobai put down the script, and Lan Long immediately sat up straight, ready to listen to his teachings at any time.

Wang Xiaobai sorted out the vocabulary and said: "The script is not bad on the whole, the rhythm and plot are very in line with the aesthetics of the current TV series, there is no big problem." ”

When the blue dragon heard this, he suddenly felt a little confident.

But immediately, Wang Xiaobai said: "But I can't vote for this script." ”

"For ...... Why?" Lan Long was puzzled, and said a little eagerly: "Didn't you approve the script and say that it was good, and there was no big problem?"

"It's just because it's not too big a problem, it's the biggest problem. Wang Xiaobai said.

Lan Long didn't understand this somewhat contradictory sentence at all, Wang Xiaobai continued: "This script of yours is a military theme, which shows the comradeship, the love of soldiers, and the heroic feelings of defending the country. It can be said that you have all the elements that these more mainstream military-themed scripts on the market should have. But don't you think that in this way, there is no difference between your script and those military TV dramas on the market? ”

These words made the blue dragon fall into deep thought.

This script took him two years to polish, and he poured too much effort into it, and he repeatedly revised every section in it, even the lines, no less than ten times. In order to ensure that investors like it, he deliberately fused a variety of elements together, thinking that this could become the biggest selling point, but he didn't expect it to be denied by Wang Xiaobai because the homogenization was too serious.

He was a little frustrated, but he didn't refute Wang Xiaobai's confidence, because he himself agreed with this.

He stood up, picked up the script, and said, "Sorry for the interruption, I hope I can write the script you want next time." ”

He turned around to leave, but Wang Xiaobai stopped him: "Wait." ”

"What's wrong?"

Wang Xiaobai said: "Although your script is poor, but your writing ability is very strong, I just have a script to write, but I don't have time, can you stay and help me write it?"

The blue dragon was stunned and didn't answer.

He's here to find investment, not to be a screenwriter.

Wang Xiaobai continued: "This is a military TV series that is different from all previous military themes, I will provide an outline of the overall story, and you are responsible for filling in the script according to my will." ”

"You want me to stay and be a gunslinger?" said the blue dragon.

"No, the script belongs to us and you have a second authorship. ”

The first author, of course, is the provider of Wang Xiaobai's story outline.

Lan Long really wanted to turn around and leave, although he had just joined the ranks of screenwriters, he was also a well-known writer, a member of the National Writers Association, and used people as guns, which was a bit insulting to him.

But for some reason, he blurted out, "Can I listen to your story outline?"

He really wanted to hear Wang Xiaobai's script, what was so special about it, and whether it could really create a new category of military-themed TV series.

Actually, most of them are a little unconvinced, and they want to call the board.

Wang Xiaobai said: "Of course you can, the story is roughly like this, there is a young man in a remote rural area who is not favored by others, his name is Xu Sanduo......"

Wang Xiaobai slowly told the synopsis of "Soldier Assault", which was nothing eye-catching at first, and could even be said to be very ordinary, just a fool who was bullied.

But with the development of the plot, especially when he heard that Xu Sanduo entered the third and fifth classes, and began to build roads under the ridicule, incomprehension, and anger of everyone, a special "qi" arose in his heart. He was moved by Xu Sanduo's stupid stubbornness, and the old man in his forties actually had a feeling of blood boiling.

He also heard that Xu Sanduo was ridiculed by the company commander because his grades were not up to standard in the Seventh Steel Company, he was punished by the company commander, he was angry by Wu Liuyi, and he was cared for by the squad leader in every way, he felt angry for Xu Sanduo, helpless, and helpless. It wasn't until Xu Sanduo did 333 abdominal windings to prove himself and become the backbone and elite of the whole company, the whole regiment, and even the whole division, that his blood boiled again.

This story, he wants to write, even if it is to use it as a gun for others!

Wang Xiaobai didn't finish all the stories of Xu Sanduo in one go, and only talked about capturing Yuan Lang of Brigade A alive, so he paused.

He took a sip of tea, moistened his dry throat, and said, "This story is a soldier's story." ”

"A soldier's story?"

The blue dragon repeated.

Wang Xiaobai nodded slightly, and said with a smile: "Have you noticed that the ancestors were very particular when they made words, just like the word 'soldier' is particularly interesting." Two legs, holding up a hill. ”

This sentence made Lan Long fall into thought, and only after a while did he say: "Just like Xu Sanduo? An individual who seems to be incompetent and cowardly, is great because of responsibility?"

Wang Xiaobai nodded deeply, this understanding is too correct.

Xu Sanduo is a very ordinary soldier, but the qi in his body is too infectious.

"I wrote this script. I don't want a second author, as long as you're willing to let me write this story. Blue Dragon said.

Wang Xiaobai said: "Okay, then what I said before, do you roughly remember it?"

"Remember, I can start writing at any time. ”

Wang Xiaobai said: "Okay, wait a minute, I'll call two people for you." ”

Subsequently, he made a phone call to Xue Ning: "Xiao Xue, bring our screenwriter contract here, is the baby in the company?" ”

After a while, Xue Ning came with the contract, but Wang Baobao hadn't arrived yet.

Wang Xiaobai handed the screenwriting contract to Lan Long and said: "This is our screenwriter's contract, you can take it back and take a look, if there is no problem, sign it, and then we will start work as soon as possible." ”

"Okay. Blue Dragon put the contract away.

Knock knock.

Then, someone knocked on the door, Wang Baobao pushed the door open, poked out a head, with a smirk on his face, and said, "Big brother, you called me?"

Wang Xiaobai is quite helpless, he is about to become a star soon, and he is still like a country boy.

Wang Xiaobai beckoned to him and said, "Come in." ”

He came in with silly music, and as soon as he appeared, the blue dragon's eyes stayed on Wang Baobao's body, completely ignoring Xue Ning, a big beauty, which made Xue Ning quite vigilant.

This old man is not a good person at first glance, he is stalking, and his eyes light up when he sees the baby, so he can't be a, right?

No, you have to talk to the hostess...... Miss Murong reported the situation, and her rival was by her side.

Wang Baobao was also a little scared when he was watched, and instinctively avoided a little farther away.

Wang Xiaobai said: "Baby, let me introduce you, this is Teacher Lan Longlan, and he is a newly recruited screenwriter of our company." In the coming months, he'll write a script for a TV series, and you'll be the lead actor. ”

"I act in a TV series, but didn't you say that you won't let me act in a TV series, big brother?" Wang Baobao said in surprise.

Wang Xiaobai said: "When did I say that I won't let you act in a TV series." ”

"Last time I was filming "People in Embarrassment", you said that if someone asked me to play Nezha's TV series, I would kill him. Wang Baobao took his words as a golden rule.

Wang Xiaobai said: "This is different. ”

"What's different...... he muttered quietly, he didn't dare to blow up his hair, and the eldest brother said whatever he wanted.

Wang Xiaobai was too lazy to deal with him, and said, "Anyway, you remember it for me, and I will have more contact with Teacher Lan in the future." ”

"Big brother, I'm afraid ......"

He whispered.

"Afraid of what?"

He ...... He had a strange look in his eyes...... It's not like the good guys......"

"......" Wang Xiaobai is very helpless, isn't he clear about his conditions? Even if Blue Dragon is a, will he look up to you?

He gave a death order: "Shut up! I'll do whatever you want you to do." ”

Wang Baobao is very aggrieved, like Nezha who wants to cry.

Wang Xiaobai looked at Lan Long and said, "Teacher Lan, how about I introduce you to this person to play Xu Sanduo?"

"It's just amazing, this doesn't have to be acted at all, this is Xu Sanduo!"

Lan Long sighed, it's really more popular than people, this own condition, don't play a fool or something, I'm completely sorry for the ancestor to appreciate the meal.

"Then you communicate more, I don't care. ”

"Big brother......" Wang Baobao cried aggrievedly.

I call you big brother, please stop messing with Nezha, okay?