A few items were deleted today...... Posts that are more rampage......

Friends who have flipped through the circle of book friends should know, as long as the words are not too excessive, I basically don't care about the post.

The feedback from the book circle is actually very important for newcomers, and there are some questions that I can't feel when I write day by day, but it is easier for book friends to read them together.

Because it was the first time I wrote a long story, the rhythm in front was not well controlled, and the plot was laid out, which led to a relatively slow start, including problems such as the rapid transformation of the character design, and the lack of clarity in some backgrounds and settings

These are all from everyone's feedback.,It helped me a lot.,The previous chapters will also modify some details without affecting the plot.,The problems that can be paid attention to are also carefully controlled.,I'm actually very welcome to put forward opinions.。

Mainly...... Some of the posts are really not very kind.

When you feel uncomfortable looking at somewhere, you are expressing your feelings.

By pointing out problems in certain places, you are giving opinions.

But adjectives such as garbage, sow, disgusting, and poisonous, as well as powerful rhetorical questions throughout, are really panicking, and this is venting emotions rather than preparing to communicate......

I especially welcome the first two, and the third will write down the "core idea", and then clean up some of it depending on the degree of rhetoric, mainly because even if the problem is also pointed out, the speech full of negative emotions still makes people panic......

Please also ask the third type of pot friend to distinguish the difference between expressing feelings, putting forward opinions, and venting emotions, and take a few seconds to consider the words and sentence structure.

After all, there are some things that are really unnecessary. Moreover, I am definitely the person who hopes that this book can be written well, as long as it is reasonable opinions and suggestions, I will seriously consider it if I see it, but I may not be able to do it best due to my limited ability, and I hope to bear with me at that time.

Originally, I didn't want to open a single chapter for this matter.,But it's a little long-winded.,It's too long to put this chapter.,And it's not on the shelves yet.,Just a few more words.,Sorry it's not an additional update.,I won't open a single chapter to talk about this problem in the future.,Just sauce.,I'm still looking forward to everyone's feedback in the future~.

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