Volume 1 Section 71 I know what I'm doing
When Sha Zhengyang returned home, it was almost ten o'clock.
Seeing that there was still a little time, Sha Zhengyang simply went to Feng Zicai.
Feng Zicai's family lives in Qingyun Lane, his family is from the old Chengguan Town, and the family has a private house, but his father is from the county tax bureau, and the family lives in the dormitory of the tax bureau, so he gave the old house to this only son.
Walking into Feng Zicai's study, the electric fan was whining, and Feng Zicai, who was naked, was only wearing a pair of sports shorts and was reading at the desk, and when he heard the sound of footsteps, he turned his head and saw that it was Sha Zhengyang, and suddenly came to his senses: "You kid, are you really going to the countryside to do work without sleeping and eating?"
"Since it's handed over to you, of course it's to trust you, not to mention that this follow-up thing is originally your task, let's talk about it, I'll just write the framework and the beginning, and you will complete the rest. Sha Zhengyang didn't give him any politeness, and handed him an ice cream he bought outside the door, "How?"
"Let's take a look. Feng Zicai seems to be a little thinner than when I saw it before, and it may be because he stayed up late, but now it is summer, and Feng Zicai also has plenty of time to write, "I was a little annoyed when I first picked you up, I always felt that the taste was not the same as yours, but it was much better later, and I wrote much faster." ”
"How many thousands of words have you written now?" Sha Zhengyang took over a thick stack of manuscripts, Feng Zicai's words were no worse than his own, but this guy liked regular script, and he also practiced with Pang Zhonghua's pen calligraphy.
"It's almost 120,000 words. Feng Zicai said proudly: "In the first three days, I wrote less than 10,000 words, and then I entered the state, I could write 10,000 words in a day, and then I revised while writing, otherwise I could write at least 150,000 words." ”
Sha Zhengyang sat on the old-fashioned sofa next to him and looked at it at a glance.
I have to admit that Feng Zicai's writing is really good, except for a little trace when connecting with the thousands of words written in front of him, he basically writes in his own style in the back.
However, the big framework is still carried out according to its own settings, and the details are completely Feng Zicai's own creativity, which is not in vain after reading the novels of Xue Milly, Haruhiko Oyasu and Nishimura Toshiyuki for so many years, and occasionally you can see some shadows of reference, but after Feng Zicai's processing, it also has a little more of his own characteristics.
The story is actually not complicated, that is, around the key core drawings and instructions of RB Toshiba's "five-axis linkage CNC machine tool" exported to Sweden, Soviet spies and RB terrorist organization Red Army caught up on the line and prepared to deliver goods in Hong Kong, and the RB Metropolitan Police Department and the CIA and the Delta Special Forces stationed abroad launched a desperate tracking in Hong Kong, and a mainland public security officer who happened to go to Hong Kong to contact the Hong Kong police happened to be involved, and then there were various battles of wits and courage.
Sha Zhengyang took a cursory look at it, and felt that Feng Zicai had also put a lot of thought into the plot design, especially when the Hong Kong police and the mainland public security were involved and couldn't get out, and the various coincidences mixed in were also very brilliant, Sha Zhengyang thought that he couldn't do a better job in these details.
"Talent, worthy of being a talent, I was thrilled to see it, and I wondered if this thing might be published in Hong Kong, and maybe someone could watch it be adapted into a movie. Finally finished reading it, Sha Zhengyang smacked his lips and handed the manuscript back to Feng Zicai, "Look at you like this, about 300,000 words are about the same, and now I've written about half of them." ”
"Well, almost, I'm going to finish it in the summer, and then spend ten days revising it, but like you said, this kind of pastime novel is mainly about being done in one go, and it has to make the reader feel refreshed, so it doesn't take a few days to revise, and the rest is to find someone. Feng Zicai threw the ice cream stick out of the window, "My second uncle and I both mentioned it, but he didn't believe it." ”
"It's okay, you get it out, and then talk to your second uncle, let's not let him use his power for personal gain, just let him help show the way, and let's talk about the rest by ourselves, whether it works out or not, it's our own business." ”
Sha Zhengyang felt a lot more at ease after reading the content of these 100,000 words.
In his opinion, this is definitely not inferior to any Xue Millie's novel, he thinks that it will be printed immediately, and it will be a big hit with Xue Millie's name, and even he, the author of the idea, now feels quite tasteful when he reads it again, and with this, he is confident that it will sell well.
When I conceived the framework of this book, I also drew on the "Super Police" starring Jackie Chan and Michelle Yeoh, which is also a cooperation between the mainland public security and the Hong Kong police, of course, the content of my book is much more complicated, but if it is adapted into a movie script, it can naturally be cut a lot.
The key now is that Feng Zicai is not famous, but everything is difficult at the beginning, and it must be difficult for this first part to start, but as long as it is a hit, the subsequent publication of the novel will be much easier, and it can even be said that before you start writing, maybe a publisher will take the initiative to order it.
Sha Zhengyang is well aware that in this era when entertainment is still quite scarce, this kind of novel should be very much in line with the appetite of many young readers who like to hunt for curiosity, and more importantly, it will be the most popular novel in the rented bookstores that are everywhere in the streets and alleys from the metropolis to the small county town.
The craze for new-school martial arts novels has slowly passed, after all, there are too few works with the level of Jin Yong's works, and Huang Yi's new fantasy novels will not begin to enter the mainland until a few years later.
So novels like the ones I conceived that are similar to FMCG should be very popular now, just like the online articles that suddenly rose after more than a decade.
"Yes, I'm writing faster and faster now, but I'm still a little bottomless in my heart, and I'm very excited to see it myself, but it's hard to say how people feel. ”
Feng Zicai's psychology of suffering from gains and losses is tangled on his face, and Sha Zhengyang is funny, when he asked him to write, he still wanted to welcome and refuse, with a cowardly virtue, but now it is good, I feel good about myself, and I am afraid that I will not be liked by others.
"Okay, why don't I bring these 100,000 words back first, let them taste and taste it, and estimate that the future readers of your book will be college students and young people of their age, anyway, I think it's very good. ”
Listening to Sha Zhengyang's encouragement, Feng Zicai's confidence increased a lot, and his gaze at Sha Zhengyang became much more complicated: "Zhengyang, how did you come up with the idea of getting this? I've been thinking about it, why did you think of getting this? Is it really because you were sent to the countryside and don't want to do it? But you have such a good start, why don't you write it yourself?"
"I told you the reason a long time ago, I have my own business, who said that I went to the countryside to be allocated? Maybe this is still an opportunity for me. Sha Zhengyang didn't bother to talk nonsense with him, "You don't have to guess, it's gold that will shine anywhere, just wait and see." ”
"Okay, looking at your feelings, I don't think you really look like you're being assigned, but it's good to stay in the county, no one wants to go to the countryside, right?"
Feng Zicai is also becoming more and more unable to see through his old classmate, and always feels that he is very different from the original, especially the momentum, with an indescribable sense of calm and leisure, as if everything is under control.
This is completely different from when he met Sha Zhengyang a month or two ago, could it be that the double blow of broken love and distribution made Zhengyang suddenly mature overnight, as if only this explanation can be justified.
"There is a harvest in the countryside, of course, if you just want to relax, it is indeed much easier in the county, many things in the town are not in contact with the county, I think it is very beneficial to get in touch, at least we can know what the people are thinking at the bottom, what they need most. Sha Zhengyang said half-truths and half-truths.
Going to the countryside is not his original intention, but he doesn't care too much about this result, now what he wants to do is to use the opportunity of Hongqi Distillery to start himself, this is the most important and urgent thing for him now, everything else can be put aside, he has to use all resources and efforts to do this well.
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