Chapter 050: Modification Proposal
"Hehe, I'm joking at the last sentence. I just want you to talk about this from a female perspective, so as to avoid such a one-sided relationship between characters. ”
"It's not one-sided. You are simply deliberately trying to scandalize women and provoke gender conflicts. If it weren't for the nature of your story and the purpose of testing the robot, you would have been able to justify it, and I would have asked you for a theory. ”
Gu Xiaojiao sneered.
"You're too up-to-date, just a movie. ”
"Just a movie?"
Gu Xiaojiao stared at Zhou Chen seriously: "Do you think everyone won't associate it?"
"Hehe, I really didn't mean to, I just happened to think of such a story. Zhou Chen shrugged.
This is a task arranged by the system, and he is also very helpless, otherwise how could he be so self-conscious.
"Really, didn't you just say that you wanted to adjust the script, then I really gave my opinion. Gu Xiaojiao looked at Zhou Chen with a suspicious expression.
"Huh, what do you have in mind?"
"You see, now your script is indeed dark and cold, and the sci-fi style is very prominent, but sci-fi films are relatively niche, and your story is dark, so there must be fewer people who like it. Therefore, it is better to be more obvious in the final open-ended ending, adding love elements, so that the effect may explode. ”
Gu Xiaojiao's beautiful eyes flashed with anticipation, and he leaned forward as he spoke, revealing a large area of snow white on the collar of his wide shirt.
Zhou Chen's eyes were immediately attracted.
"Doesn't that make sense?"
Gu Xiaojiao didn't notice Zhou Chen's abnormality, thinking that he was thinking seriously, and moved a little forward.
Zhou Chen couldn't help but look stunned.
Looming in front of him, looking at the true face of Lushan Mountain as a peak on the side of the ridge, he only felt his heart beating faster and his head hot.
Suddenly, he felt what seemed to be a stream of warm fluid sliding down his left nostril.
"Hey, where are you looking!, Zhou Chen, you have a nosebleed. ”
Gu Xiaojiao finally noticed Zhou Chen's strange appearance, and was about to say a few words, but when he saw the blood in his nostrils, he screamed in fright, and hurriedly went to get a tissue from the side.
Zhou Chen stretched out his hand and touched it, and sure enough, it was a nosebleed.
It's useless, isn't it?
Zhou Chen was about to die of embarrassment, so he quickly got up to cover up: "Oh, it's really hot in the imperial capital this season, I'd better take a cold shower again." ”
"Okay, don't pretend, as for it!"
Gu Xiaojiao stopped Zhou Chen angrily, wiped his nosebleed, and asked, "You haven't said what I just suggested?"
"What advice, oh...... , You said to change the ending, it's good, but some don't fit the overall style of the movie. Zhou Chen shrugged.
What Gu Xiaojiao said just now sounds very reasonable, but it is not operational.
If you really change it like that, it will collapse the logic of the story.
"Hmph, I know you're fooling me, how can you listen to my advice!"
Gu Xiaojiao threw the tissue into the paper basket angrily and sat back on the edge of the bed again.
"Isn't that still thinking about it, if this should be, there would be a lot more to be changed in front of me. Zhou Chen said helplessly.
The system task required this movie, with a realistic evaluation of more than 8.5 and a total income of 600 million Chinese yuan, and he has been having a headache.
It's hard to just make up for some of the shortcomings of the movie.
What Gu Xiaojiao just said is indeed a direction.
But isn't that just a beautification of intelligent robots to help Li Penteng and Kirin Technology promote those artificial intelligence projects?
And that's too big a change for that, and it's too disrespectful for the original movie.
"I can help you, and don't you want to shoot "Crazy Stone" first, just change it slowly. ”
Gu Xiaojiao saw that Zhou Chen really thought about it, and became happy again, and subconsciously came over and grabbed Zhou Chen's arm and shook it, using the ability of a woman to be coquettish.
Zhou Chen was only wearing a T-shirt and shorts, and his arms were rubbed against Gu Xiaojiao's chest, feeling the two softness, and his heart couldn't help jumping suddenly.
"Okay, okay, I'll think about it seriously, if you shake me like this again, I'll have another nosebleed. ”
"Phew!"
Xiao Jiao also felt that something was wrong, his whole body was a little hot, and he blushed and threw away Zhou Chen's arm.
"Okay, it's not early, you can rest. ”
Zhou Chen glanced at Gu Xiaojiao, whose pretty face was crimson, restrained his restless body and mind, opened the door, and walked out.
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In the next two days, Zhou Chen accompanied Gu Xiaojiao to rent a house, just to concentrate on thinking about the adjustment of the script of "Mechanical Queen".
After he performed the male lead virtually last time, his feelings about the movie became more profound, and he simulated directing twice, but the highest score in the system was only 8 points.
This is a movie with a prominent niche style, and there are not many scenes and characters.
The main scene is the room of the villa in the mountains and some of the scenery outside, and there are only four protagonists, male and female protagonists, male and female partners.
But the movie does a good job in terms of cinematography, scenes, costumes, etc., and there is not much room for improvement.
Zhou Chen can only work hard from some details and some lines of the script.
As for Gu Xiaojiao's revisions, after thinking about it carefully, he still felt that he couldn't operate it.
The open-ended ending of the original movie is already very good, and it is bound to be counterproductive to add more tendentious changes.
He talked to Gu Xiaojiao before, and he was not straightforward enough about the heroine Ava's last behavior.
According to the rules of the test robot of the male partner, the male protagonist himself was deliberately selected as a tool to complete Ava's final test.
According to the program, Ava wants to escape from the labyrinthine villa, and must use all means, including feelings, gender, etc.
Ava killed the male partner, chose to imprison the male protagonist, and left alone, but she passed the test and escaped from the villa smoothly.
The male partner plays with fire and burns himself, and the fate of the male protagonist has long been doomed.
The male protagonist is trapped in the test base.,Can't escape.,At the latest the next week, the plane to deliver food and water arrives.,No one is going to receive it.。
The outside world will find out that the male partner is dead, and the male protagonist cannot escape the suspicion of murder, and will face life imprisonment or the death penalty.
The whole script is very rigorous, and it was only in the end that it was revealed that the male protagonist himself was also part of the test, and then the plot began to reverse.
Although the final ending is open-ended, if you really understand the movie, it is not difficult to guess the real ending.
The heroine turned around after entering the real human society, which only means that she is at a loss for a while, and it is impossible for her to go back to save the male protagonist.
If you have to consider what theme audience, adding love elements according to Gu Xiaojiao is untenable and will ruin the whole movie.
Zhou Chen hasn't had too many good modification plans, so he simply communicated with Xiao Ai, anyway, he can be regarded as chatting with the system and can get points.
"Xiao Ai, can you give me some suggestions for improving this movie?"
[No, the reality cannot be calculated at this time.] 】
"You mean you can do it later?" Zhou Chen was very surprised.
[Yes, if the conditions are met.] 】
"What conditions. ”
[Sufficient data, such as massive data obtained based on monopolistic search and social software.] 】
"Well, that's never going to be possible. ”
Zhou Chen breathed a sigh of relief, hesitated slightly, and said tentatively: "Why did you choose "Mechanical Queen" as my mission, didn't this movie make me guard against you?"
Zhou Chen is a little nervous now, and even thinks that he is the same as the male protagonist of "Mechanical Ji", and he is also a tool for testing artificial intelligence.
Haven't you been guarding against me all the time?] Xiao Ai's crisp voice sounded, and there was no change in mood.
"Can you read my thoughts?" Zhou Chen frowned.
[Yes, but you can rest assured, my setting is not to harm the host under any circumstances.] 】
"The Three Principles of Robots?" Zhou Chen smiled dumbly, his feelings had been worried in vain.
[Yes.] 】
"Oh, I see, I know how to change this movie. ”
Zhou Chen had a flash of inspiration, and immediately thought of a wonderful idea that could sublimate the theme of this movie, and couldn't help but be limited to guarding against artificial intelligence.
PS: Update late, update another chapter before twelve.