The turmoil in the school gradually became a thing of the past, Bi Dongxue became one of the two officers of the Academic Affairs Office, a teacher from the high school was appointed as the director of the school affairs office, and the curriculum of the class led by Wu Yongxiang and Mei Caiping was distributed to the other two teachers.

Lu Yang's life has also returned to calm, taking classes every day, coding words, resting, and occasionally helping Tong Yaqian revise and revise the already started "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" during work hours, I have to say that Tong Yaqian was able to be the president of the school newspaper before, and her writing is really good.

It can be said that online literature is very different from traditional literature, and if you can write traditional literature well, when you write online articles, nine out of ten will have a blue nose and swollen face. In Lu Yang's memory, the starting point held a PK competition for the chairman of the Thirty Provincial Writers' Association at the starting point, and as a result, they were disgraced one by one, and the clicks and recommendations of the whole book were not as good as a fraction of the number of jù a day by the starting point gods.

In Lu Yang's memory, that PK match taught him a sentence - give roses to others and leave fragrance in his hands.

There are often such book reviews in the book review area under the works of the chairmen of the writers' association, and the chairmen of the writers' association still can't touch the threshold of online articles, let alone Tong Yaqian, who was born in writing school newspapers?

Tong Yaqian's "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" written by Meng Jiao's mother, in Lu Yang's opinion, the text is more than beautiful, but the plot development is too procrastinating, and Lu Yang doesn't know such words. Whether female readers will like it or not, he can only guide Tong Yaqian according to his own experience.

The most direct way is to rent a copy of "The Moon Knife at the End of the World" from a bookstore near the school. Gu Long's masterpiece.

A copy of "Tianya Moon Knife" was thrown in front of Tong Yaqian, let her watch it first, Tong Yaqian may have seen a movie or TV series adapted from "Tianya Moon Knife" before, but the novel of "Tianya Moon Knife" is definitely the first time to read it, how famous is Gu Long?

Since Lu Yang rented this book for her to read, presumably this book is an extremely classic. should be able to learn a lot, with a learning attitude, Tong Yaqian opened the book. After watching it little by little, barely holding on for half a morning, she retreated.

Closing the book, Tong Yaqian said in surprise: "Gu Long writes novels like this, how do you boys read it?"

Alone. If you've never seen Gu Long's work. If you look at Gu Long's work for the first time is "The Moon Knife at the End of the World", you may have doubts like Tong Yaqian.

Lu Yang smiled and explained to her: "Gu Long's works are written like this, probably this one, and other works are not written like this." ”

Tong Yaqian: "Then why did you let me read this book? The text of this book is too dry, isn't it? There are no scenes and details at all, and almost all of them are character dialogues? Moreover, there is no description of the characters' expressions, tones, and psychological activities at all! Such a novel can also be published?"

Of course it can be published! Because this is the work of Gu Long.

To be fair, the plot of "The Moon Knife at the End of the World" is excellent. created a classic character familiar to the Chinese - Fu Hongxue.

But the book's writing goes to an extreme.

Lu Yang continued to smile and solve Tong Yaqian's doubts: "Gu Long's works have a great feature! There are very few words in the scene description! It is almost a typical representative of artistic conception flow works! As you said, many times a plot. It's all driven by the characters' dialogues, there are no scene descriptions, no character expressions, no tone of voice, no psychological descriptions, do you know why he did this?"

"Why?" Tong Yaqian has been completely aroused, Gu Long is so famous, "The Moon Knife at the End of the World" is almost well-known, but it was actually written like this, which greatly subverted her imagination.

"Because Gu Long is trying something new! He has written a lot of works in his life, and almost all of the early works are works of playing tickets, and most people can't stand it, but the level of works in the middle and late stages is very different, and in this period, Gu Long feels more and more that the details such as the scenes are too detailed, and they are completely useless words that drag down the progress of the plot"The Moon Knife at the End of the World" is the product of his thinking. ”

Tong Yaqian was stunned when she heard this, there are still people who write novels like this, as long as the branches, not the branches and leaves.

After being stunned for a long time, Tong Yaqian suddenly asked, "Do you want me to write like this?"

Lu Yang nodded, shook his head again, and said with a smile: "I just want to sue you, write an online novel, the plot is king! Don't write too many detailed descriptions! Especially your personal comments as an author, it's best not to mix them in the work, of course, I don't build yì You do it as extreme as Gu Long, it turns out that such an extreme work, Gu Long almost wrote such a book, after the book was written, he himself realized that it was not possible to write like this." ”

As for whether this is the case, Lu Yang actually doesn't know very clearly, Gu Long has dozens of books in his life, and he has only read the most classic ones, such as "Peerless Double Pride", "Xiao Li Flying Knife", "The Legend of Chu Liuxiang", etc., the reason why he feels that "Tianya Mingyue Knife" is the most extreme is probably because he has also read this book, and he is also defeated under Master Gu Long's writing style.

After listening to this, Tong Yaqian thought thoughtfully, then looked at the first three chapters of the manuscript she had written on the manuscript paper, and asked a little hesitantly: "You mean, I can't write like this?"

"No!" Lu Yang announced the verdict cleanly.

"How do you write that?"

"The content of the three chapters is combined into one chapter! You can write the online novel at will in the later stage, because the number of words updated every day is a lot, and it can't be so streamlined, and the plot progress is a little slower, and the reader's opinion will not be very large, but if you write tens of thousands of words like this in the early stage, few people will definitely be able to read it! Everyone who reads the online text is the storyline, and if you want to see the writing and rhetoric, there are a lot of master works on the market. Why should readers read you? Are you confident that you can write better than many masters in ancient and modern times, both in China and abroad?"

Tong Yaqian seemed to understand a little, nodded, and picked up her manuscript. "Okay!"

This is just one of the instructions, two days later, in the morning, it was still work time, Tong Yaqian put the 3,000 words she had written in front of Lu Yang, waiting for Lu Yang's opinion, and her eyes were always paying attention to the door of the office, whether the leader appeared.

Blatantly doing things that are not related to work during working hours. If you are caught by the leader, you will definitely be criticized.

Lu Yang patiently read it word by word, for the author of the online article. In fact, most people are very reluctant to help newcomers read the manuscript, not because they are disdainful, but because they are too painful. This is especially true for manuscripts in the form of receipts or documents. It's hard to watch, if Tong Yaqian and Lu Yang weren't that kind of relationship, he would definitely be able to push this kind of thing.

It took more than ten minutes to read the three thousand words, Lu Yang pursed his lips, sorted out his thoughts, and then gave a bad evaluation again in Tong Yaqian's expectant gaze.

"Not yet? Why?"

Tong Yaqian was a little disappointed.

But in a responsible attitude, Lu Yang still has to tell the truth.

Said: "The plot is not much of a problem! But the choice of words and sentences is too strict! Another feature of online articles. It's colloquial, colloquial! Too strict will make the reader very tired of reading! To put it simply. In your text, there should be a sentence from time to time that will make the reader smile, of course, if you are a god-level author, you don't have to do this, but as a newcomer who has no name, this is especially important!"

"How the hell is that going to be written?"

Tong Yaqian's brows furrowed, she was already about to go crazy.

In the past few days, for the first time, I wrote more than 9,000 words in three chapters, and this time I rewrote it, and it is more than 3,000 words and more than 10,000 words, which is nothing for writers who are used to writing online novels, but for people who are used to writing only a few hundred words or a thousand words in an article, it is definitely a difficult process, racking their brains to write so many words.

"Colloquial! The text is humorous!" Lu Yang smiled and looked at Tong Yaqian's appearance of wanting to scratch her ears and cheeks, and felt very funny.

Tong Yaqian's eyes rolled a few times, and suddenly her brows stretched, pursed her lips and smiled, this expression was very abnormal, when Lu Yang was feeling strange, Tong Yaqian opened her mouth and said, laughing and saying, almost a scoundrel, and said: "Don't just talk about not practicing! You write the first chapter for me! Didn't you say that I can't write it? You write the first chapter for me to see! Give me a demonstration!"

Lu Yang opened his mouth slightly, didn't he just say that he was just giving you comments and helping her revise? Why do you want him to write it for you?

"No! I don't have that much time. ”

After Lu Yang was stunned, he immediately refused, the recent monthly ticket list is in full swing, and he has less time to code words, where can he have time to help Tong Yaqian write an article?

"If it doesn't work, you have to do it! Who told you that I can't write it? Just one chapter! Write it now! I'll help you watch the leader. At this time, there was only another female teacher in the office, and Tong Yaqian's tone was almost coquettish.

Lu Yang had no choice, shook his head with a wry smile, and had to pick up the back of Tong Yaqian's manuscript and rewrite the first chapter for her, the opening chapter name, Lu Yang did not follow Tong Yaqian's chapter name, Lu Yang wrote: Chapter 001, I am the prince? Why is it a daughter.

The plot at the beginning, Lu Yang and Tong Yaqian wrote differently, Tong Yaqian wrote a modern urban female college student, and then traveled to the end of the Han Dynasty when a woman ruled the entire country.

wrote more than 1,000 words about the events before the crossing, but Lu Yang wrote at the beginning that the female college student had crossed into the palace of the Han Dynasty, and she was a daughter, but she was the crown prince Liu Ban who could inherit the throne, and the emperor was actually her mother, and the Manchu Dynasty was all women. (To be continued......)

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