"Old Li, thank you. ”

Unexpectedly, Li Debing actually helped, and Mo Bai sent a message to Li Lao on TT.

"Thank you, thank you, we called you sir, these guys really have no vision, and they can't even see the work you wrote, sir. ”

"Anyway, thank you very much. But, Elder Li, do you really think the one I wrote before is a classic?"

"Well...... this"

Li Debing suddenly hesitated.

"Ah, Old Li, you didn't see it. ”

"I really didn't see it. ”

Li Debing said with some embarrassment.

"I'll go, and you'll say those things. What one, two, three, four, five, and what conquers the world......"

Gee.

Mo Bai secretly smacked his tongue, such a level of talking nonsense with his eyes open is definitely not below him.

"Hi...... Mr. Mo Bai, you are our husband. Whether we see your work or not, we know it's well written. Even if it's not well written, we've got your back to the end. ”

"I ......"

Mo Bai couldn't cry or laugh.

This also made Mo Bai a little lucky, fortunately, he didn't fight with these older generation artists before.

If you really fight them to the end, with their personality, then you have to fight with yourself.

"Okay, very good, thank you Mr. Li. ”

Mo Bai thanked him again.

With these old artists here, Mo Bai is relieved.

Then go ahead and write one.

The Education Newspaper is an issue a day, and just published an issue yesterday, and Mo Bai wrote today's issue.

"On the Playground".

is still the same as "In the Vegetable Garden", Mo Bai wrote another article.

[The bell rings, class is over.]

Operationally, it's really lively.

High jump tug-of-war to shoot the ball, exercise every day ......]

Let's be honest.

What's so good about this article, Mo Bai doesn't know.

However, what Mo Bai knows is that this is in the Chinese textbook of the previous world's teaching version.

Anyway, since it's in a textbook, it should be good.

Without thinking about it, Mo Bai sent the written article to the Education Newspaper again.

Of course, I also sent a copy to Zheng Lian, deputy director of the Art Department.

"Mr. Mo Bai, what is your article?"

Zheng Lian, who had just received the email, immediately replied to Mo Bai with a message.

"What's wrong?"

"I didn't ...... It's nothing. ”

Zheng Lian's head is big.

In yesterday's article, Zheng Lian wanted to ask what it was about.

Unexpectedly, today's article is even more ...... It made Zheng Lian feel that he didn't know what to say.

This is an article written by Mo Bai?

I think this is an article written by an elementary school student.

It's not just Zheng Lian who thinks like this, but so do others.

When the Education Newspaper published Mo Bai's "On the Playground" again, countless onlookers poured up again.

"This is an article written by Mo Bai?"

"Mo Bai asked children to write it. ”

"My God, yesterday's one has some contrast, and there are some neatness, although it is not very well written, but it is still a little artistic, but what is this one today?"

Literature is such a thing, although the discerning eye really can't see anything. But just a glance can make countless people complain, and it is really hard for ordinary people to believe that such an article was written by a great writer like Mo Bai. Moreover, what is even more unpredictable is that the education newspaper even included it and sent it to the newspaper.

"I still can't help it, I want to say a few words, may I ask the editor of the Education Newspaper, did you accept Mo Bai's red envelope. ”

"Although I was educated by Mr. Li yesterday, I have to say it no matter what I want today. What is this article?"

"The bell rings, class is over, high jump and table tennis, and exercise every day...... Me, I...... I finally knew why I didn't have the talent to write. ”

A group of writers who have complained before, at this time, there is another burst of complaints.

"I'll go, these guys, why do you stare at me every day. ”

Mo Bai was also speechless.

Brother just posted a few articles, you don't need to stare at it every day.

Mo Bai secretly hated in his heart, but his glorious image had to be encircled, and he immediately bubbled up in the white jade group and said, "Everyone, something is wrong. ”

"Dabai, don't shout, we know if we have been scolded by others again. ”

"Well, you know. ”

Mo Bai burst into tears: "I know that I haven't made a move, and I still say that I am a brainless fan." ”

"Dabai, we want to do it too. But the problem is, we don't know what to say. ”

Dalong made a crying emoji.

"Why don't I know what to say, just say that the article I wrote is awesome. ”

"Dabai, just spare me, isn't this talking nonsense with your eyes open. ”

"I'll ......"

"Besides, Dabai, we also want to say that your article is very awesome, but where is it, I didn't find it. ”

This said, many hardcores in the group are also a little crazy.

They really carefully read Mo Bai's article dozens of times, but they couldn't find half of the advantages.

Although all the disciples of Bai Yutang are Mo Bai's brainless fans, the disciples of Bai Yutang are also people with conscience.

They really can't do such a conscientious act.

"Hey, you guys, dropped the chain at the critical moment. ”

Mo Bai despised a sentence in the group.

It seems that the critical moment can only rely on these old artists and predecessors.

At this time, it was not the time to be reckless with others, Mo Bai immediately made a phone call to Li Debing.

"Elder Li, there is something to trouble you. ”

"Mr. Mo Bai, I know, is someone scolding you again. ”

"It seems that Elder Li is very concerned about me. ”

"You also know that some old bones like us are so old that they don't have much to do, and you Weibo is so lively every day, you can't pay attention to it. ”

"That's okay, don't say much, Old Li, help me destroy those guys. ”

"No problem. ”

Li Debing directly agreed: "But ......"

"Elder Li, but what?"

"Mr. Mo Bai, we can help, but shouldn't you show it? ”

"Tell me?"

Mo Bai was a little confused and asked, "Elder Li, don't you insist on your own principles very much." Also, don't you keep calling me sir...... Now that Mr. is in trouble, as a student, he even wants Mr. to say?"

The last time we had a long chat for a week, Mo Bai also knew Li Debing's personality.

Although the two are not a little different, when they talk, they are like friends of the same generation.

"In that case, forget it, the old man should drink tea with everyone. ”

"Okay...... You're ruthless. ”

Mo Bai said: "Elder Li, what do you want me to express. ”

"Simple, let's make a move, and we will change you for a song. ”

"Deal. ”

"Happy, Mr. Mo Bai, you wait, I'll go. ”

"Good. However, you can bother with dim sum this time, and I really can't comment on this article. ”

"You can put a hundred and twenty hearts, as long as the article you write can be written smoothly, we can help you evaluate the ugly and ugly. ”

After speaking, Li Debing hung up the phone.

"Old guys, let's get to work. ”

Facing the old men in the teahouse, Li Debing said: "Hurry up and read Mr. Mo Bai's latest masterpiece. ”

I have to say that these old art predecessors have a deep foundation, and it only took half an hour for another thousand-word long review to appear.

"Alas, then who is who, isn't it red-eyed again? Why don't you read Mr. Mo Bai's article well, and then comment. In my opinion, "On the Playground", like the previous "In the Vegetable Garden", is a rare classic. No, it even seems to me that this one is even more classic than in the garden. As for where the classics are, let me tell you slowly. ”

"First, as I said before, Mr. Mo Bai's works are not written for adults, nor for high school students, but for first-grade elementary school students. Primary school students are still in the world of understanding, and this article, he pulled this understanding to our campus, our campus playground. ”

Second, from the article, we can see that the article not only mentions various sports on the playground. And, exercise is also mentioned. Moreover, this article will be read and sung in the form of a nursery rhyme, as long as the children continue to read and sing, then. About sports, about exercise, it is naturally integrated into the children's minds. ”

"The third and most important point is this. The sports listed in the article are tug-of-war, high jump, and slapping the ball...... These are some deceptively simple sports. In fact, it can greatly inspire the interests and hobbies of the students, so that the children know that in addition to reading at school, we can also shoot the ball and jump high...... This greatly denies the remark that "reading is a lifelong study". We are a big country in education, but also a big country in sports. Education should start from the baby, and sports should start from the baby...... Moreover, Mr. Mo Bai only exemplified tug-of-war and high jump sports. However, as parents and teachers, don't we diverge our minds to guide our children? In addition to these sports, we can also introduce table tennis, football, skipping rope, swimming, ...... I believe that this doesn't seem to have much effect. But, accidentally, our table tennis world champion, our swimming world champion, and even our World Cup world champion were born in this article. ”

"Fourth, many people may know that Mr. Mo Bai once led the national team to win the football World Cup...... The implication of this article is really profound. He told us that it is not terrible to have a Mr. Mo Bai in China, but it is terrible that there are thousands of Mr. Mo Bai in China. "On the Playground" is a classic work that can give birth to thousands of Mr. Mo Bai in the future. ”

"Fifth, if the previous "In the Vegetable Garden" is about children learning about the world and nature. Then, this "On the Playground" is the beginning of children's conquest of the world and nature......"

What is called an old artist senior.

That's it.

What is called divine commentary.

That's it.

What is called turning the tide?

That's it.

"On the Playground" is only a few dozen words, but Li Debing's divine evaluation is sprinkled, and it takes nearly 1,000 words to evaluate.

Especially in this divine commentary, there are two extremely awesome sentences.

One sentence is that if the previous was only to know the world, then the current is to conquer the world.

The other sentence is that Mo Bai is not terrible, but there are thousands of Mo Bai who are terrible.

Countless viewers who have been complaining all along, when they finished reading this divine commentary, they were instantly silent.