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Day and night alternate, time flies.

In the blink of an eye, more than a week has passed since Shao Dahai's incident, and there are many unfairness in this world, only time is fair! It will not slow down because you are a big man, nor will it let you spend your life in an instant because you are down on the street. will not speed up the flow rate because Lu Yang has recently completed the book of "The Leader", so that Lu Yang will immediately fight for a new book, nor will it pass slowly because Shao Dahai is ruined and life is worse than death, so that he will always be in the whirlpool of public opinion.

After more than a week, Lu Yang finally felt that he had rested enough, and was ready to put his mind on the new book.

Before each work was born, it changed drafts several times, at least in Lu Yang's case.

The new book was tentatively titled "Shishi" by him, and just now, he has changed the name to "Shishi Era".

If you want to ask why, there is actually no big reason, but he suddenly feels that the name "Shishi Era" looks more pleasing to the eye and feels more than the word "Shishi".

Creation is a process that is completely based on feelings, and what every creator wants to do most in the place of creation is nothing more than to write the story that he feels the most in his mind.

That's what the story is, and so is the name of the story.

Even at the beginning of the manuscript of this book, Lu Yang always feels unsatisfactory when he looks at it today, including the introduction!

Thereupon. He thought about it for a while, and then began to work on it.

Title: The Age of the Master

Genre: Sci-fi mecha

Author: Wen Chou

Introduction: A.D. 8482. The human footprint has spread across seven galaxies, including the Milky Way, long before the 21st century. Many people believe that human beings are a lower race in the universe, and if they encounter alien civilizations, human civilization is likely to be fragmented and wiped out.

And it turns out that the most dangerous race in this universe, at least so far, is the human race!

Before the 21st century, humans designated man-eating beasts as demons, and all races that opposed humans. Condemned as a demon!, but what about the facts?

All animals and plants, whether poisonous or non-toxic, harmful or harmless, are all treated as a meal on a plate, and every human being eats countless lives in his life.

Human beings, who have eaten everything in the world in this way, have a strong sense of crisis early on, and are always worried that one day, they will be wiped out by alien civilizations. As a result, when human beings entered the interstellar age, when they really encountered one alien civilization after another, they found that all alien races were not as ferocious as humans. It's so expansive.

Looking at the seven galaxies, humanity is invincible!

Thus, the militant human regime began to split. Once again, we have entered the era of war and chaos in which the world will be divided for a long time.

The top class that once swept through all alien civilizations, the Master, began to be used in civil wars.

Our story. Beginning in the Battle of Dragonspine Mountain in the Golden Lion Galaxy's Guterrei Star Yanzhou, this is the last battle of the Nine-Star Ace Master! His opponents are Augustus, Ronagar, Bailot, and Haragami Mayi, who are also Nine-Star Ace Masters......

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This is probably the longest introduction to a new book Lu Yang has ever written. Cause?

It's still the same sentence!

Feel!

He felt more comfortable writing like this, so he wrote it like this.

In the manuscript written by Lu Yang before, the opening chapter of "The Master" is less than 100 words, and the protagonist appears, which is completely the way of writing mainstream online texts, as much as possible to lead out the protagonist, and to explain clearly the identity, image, skills and other things that should be explained to the protagonist, in order to let the reader do his best to substitute for the role.

But today, Lu Yang wants to change this beginning.

After squinting his eyes and thinking about it for more than half an hour, Lu Yang decided to write a tragic hero at the beginning of the last battle of the nine-star ace master.

It was also his pinnacle fight.

In this battle, the famous stunt will bloom for the last time, and it will become a masterpiece from now on.

Lu Yang estimates that if he writes like this, the real appearance time should be in the third chapter. If the first two chapters are more than 6,000 words.

If the first two chapters are 3,000 words each, the protagonist's appearance time will be in the fifth chapter.

This kind of writing, if you change the writer to write, except for the top gods at the same level as Lu Yang now, even if it is a first-line god to write, it is likely to hit the street.

But Lu Yang felt that he didn't have to think about it so much now, he remembered that there were several great gods with stable godheads in the Central Plains Time and Space, and the beginning of the new book would not follow the usual path.

But their new book is still very popular, and there are still a lot of readers who follow their new book.

There is only one reason for this - their godhead has been completed, and no matter how their new book begins, there will be no shortage of readers to read.

Most readers believe in their strength and have enough patience with their new book to continue reading even if the first few chapters are awkward, confident that their work will become more and more exciting in the future.

It can be said that such a capricious way of writing is the patent of the top gods!

Some top gods may write like this just to play with personality, but most of them do this for only one purpose - to fully prepare for a new story.

This is an impetuous time!

As mentioned above, there must be a selling point that can impress readers within the first 3,000 words of the online article, or even within 1,000 words, or even within 300 words, which is a proof of the impetuousness of the online literature industry.

In the era of online literature, although there are many readers, there are countless works that readers can choose from, and it is impossible for any reader to read all the books in a website library, and hundreds of thousands of authors work hard every day, and the number of words updated every day is far more than the number of books that any reader can read every day.

As a result, most readers have little patience with the new book and read it for just a few minutes. If you don't see something that appeals to you, you will immediately abandon the book. I went to find something else.

In such an environment, more than ninety percent of authors must do their best to get the story to the point. As a result, the law that the first few hundred words must impress the reader is gradually formed.

Such a law never exists in traditional literary works, which is probably one of the reasons why traditional literati despise online literature.

It's just that, in terms of the structure of the story, in fact, at the beginning of the beginning, there is enough foreshadowing of the slow heat text, so it is easier to produce high-quality products!

Because there is enough foreshadowing, the plot later. It's easier to form tension!

What is story tension?

Let's use a popular example!

Cats eat fish, dogs eat meat, and Ultraman fights little monsters, for cats, dogs, and Ultraman, it should all be very happy things, right? This kind of happiness can be compared to the mainstream fast-paced online articles.

So, how can slow-burning works be compared?

A group of cats are eating carrots, and only one cat can eat fish every day, a group of dogs are eating vegetables, and only one dog has meat to eat, and the rest of the Ultraman family can only be good students in peace, and only one Ultraman can do a dozen little monsters every three or five times.

There are contrasts. will look happier!

That's part of the tension of the story!

The fast-paced Shuangwen, to put it simply, is just for the sake of being cool, and it keeps pursuing one cool plot after another. And the slow-burning works, because of a lot of foreshadowing plots, at first glance. It doesn't seem very cool, but savor it carefully. If you are patient, you will find that this refreshing feeling is not bad at all. Even when the plot broke out in the middle and late stages, it was so cool that people couldn't help themselves, and they couldn't wait to dance.

Lu Yang intends to write in this way this time, and it should be said that there are two purposes.

First, it is naturally to pave the way for the plot behind and make the story more exciting.

The second is to test what kind of Godhead he has reached now, and how many readers will patiently follow his new book.

Every writer, in addition to earning more manuscript fees, wants to prove his ability and worth.

And how can you prove your ability and worth?

Manuscript fee is only one aspect, the most important thing is the recognition of book fans!

The boring code word career, accompanied by someone and cheered, the code word career will not seem so boring.

It can be said that this attempt is Lu Yang's whimsical willfulness.

In order to make the story more exciting, but also to test one's godhead.

At the beginning of the manuscript that had already been written, he was stunned to temporarily move it to the back and rewrite the first and second chapters, both of which were more than 6,000 words.

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Chapter 1: Under Siege

This chapter was written by Lu Yang very sadly, and it was not written in the superficial way of the online article.

The shallow surface writing method is defined by Lu Yang himself.

He looked at most of the online articles and found that most of them paid too much attention to the advancement of the plot, and gave up a lot of detailed descriptions and the rendering of the overall atmosphere.

Often simply explain the place and time, and describe the surrounding scenery in a few words, it will enter the plot to advance, obviously it should be a very tragic plot, because the rendering of the atmosphere is not enough, the author writes it in one stroke, and when the reader reads it, there is not much sadness.

Lu Yang wrote the first two chapters as if he were a student this time, no, it was far beyond the state when he wrote essays when he was a student, he spent more than half an hour, half-squinting, allowing himself to substitute into the scene he conceived, and carefully carving every detail of the story in his heart, especially because of personal grievances, the superior commander fell him, the nine-star ace master, into the sorrow of the four local nine-star ace masters.

He puts himself in the shoes of the most popular characters, imagining in his mind all the details of his hundreds of victorious killings, while his superiors ignore his exploits, fornicate with the enemy, and encircle him.

If you want readers to empathize with and be as sad and angry as the prevailing clouds, only as an author can feel that way in the first place!

With such a thought, it took Lu Yang a whole afternoon to write the first chapter of 6,000 words, and after writing it, he leaned back in his chair with his eyes closed, his expression extremely gloomy.

Like an actor who has been too deep in the play, he can't get out of the play for a long time, and he is still immersed in the popular love. (A good activity for pie in the sky, cool mobile phones are waiting for you to take!Follow up ~ point/Chinese network public account (WeChat add friends - add public account - enter ddxiaoshuo), participate immediately! Everyone has a prize, now immediately pay attention to ddxiaoshuo WeChat public account!) (to be continued......)

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