Review from Book City

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The writing is good! Like Liang Yusheng's martial arts, in addition to memories or memories. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 info hope to improve, ask for updates!

Answer:

Friend, thank you for your praise, but we deserve it, even if it is an encouragement to us.

Because of the recollection, I would like to make a special explanation.

In fact, many friends have mentioned this incident and expressed their dissatisfaction. The basis for these friends is probably the "crested, pork belly, unicorn tail" writing model advocated by the editor, or "we are here to see rebirth, why are you writing so many things in the past", and some people even think that it is very "strange" for us to write 200,000 words for five yuan. There are even people who say, "Who doesn't know who, don't write until you're reborn." ”

I feel very ashamed of this, and I guess it is also a big luck to be able to mix in the contract. Still, I say, "You really don't know me." "Because when I first wrote this book, my original intention was that because of the book shortage, I really couldn't stand the rebirth of the regular class.

Those books, all of them are worn at the beginning, and then they continue to rely on "golden fingers" to earn every penny around them, covering every beauty they see, and everyone they know sees the protagonist and worships upside down, and then is willing to be a parasite and hug his thighs.

As everyone knows, it is refreshing to write it like this, but if it is flooded, it will become the "new eight shares" model.

I think these articles often have a few shortcomings:

1, the antecedents of everything are very weak, even if there is a deep hatred in the sea of blood in the past, it is thousands of words, and it seems that it has never left traces in the bottom of my heart. There is no trace of hatred, there is no trace of grace, family, friendship, love, it seems that money can make up for it.

2. Seriously detached from the historical environment, all kinds of dog blood mistakes are full of mistakes, for example, I have seen a person who went back to the early 80s and used a computer.

3. There is no cause and effect in doing things, and human feelings are false. Women are either jealous of the protagonist.,Or love to death.,Relatives and friends will always worship the hero.,At most, it's a little selfish.。 There is no foundation for emotion, there is no reason for love, and there is no reason for hate. Especially after being reborn, the enemies you encounter can often get to the point of life and death for a little thing. (If anyone has to ask - does love need a reason?

And my purpose in writing this article is to eliminate these unbearable problems first. I don't know if I can do it, but I'm still working on it. So the article I wrote was naturally very "wonderful".

In fact, I think most people are anxious to watch the plot behind Rebirth, just thinking that everything in front of them doesn't need to exist. It's like the process from question to answer, if the questions come after rebirth, then the previous memories are not necessary. But I want to reiterate that my protagonist is reborn because the questions he wants to answer have already been predestined in the past, so why don't I even write down the questions and answer them directly? But what if the question I'm going to ask is complex, tangled, and special?

My idea is also very simple, the essence of rebirth is to make up for regrets, so it is also doomed, the more mistakes and omissions in the past life are distorted, the more necessary it is to be reborn. Naturally, I put a lot of effort into my previous life, because there are many things that are caused by a specific history, and in my opinion, they are very important, and they cannot be mentioned in a word, or they cannot be caught on the spot.

For example, the description of the character of the head teacher actually hints at the value standard of Hong Yanwu's true emotional belonging in the future. is laying the foundation for the appearance of the heroine and the germination of feelings in the future.

In addition, Chang Xianzhang is also an extremely important character in the future, and there are many plots involved.

Of course, this is still a small place, and the main point of the current memories is actually to explain the emotional entanglement between the Hong family and the Chen family, because what happened to Hong Yanwu and Chen Liquan in the future will never be so simple, and there are many details that must be introduced clearly. In the future, when you see the choices made by the protagonist, you won't feel abrupt.

As for Yoon-tae...... Well, without going too much of the spoilers, I'll reiterate here that I'm never writing memories for the sake of memories.

I remember that many people mentioned that the opening chapter of the first eleven chapters described Lawyer Wu too much, and I would also like to say that if this character is also an important character after being reborn, and his behavior will echo some kind of past life, then would it be too much? I think it will be more interesting.

Finally, thank you for your concern about this article, and I hope you will correct it in the future. I will seriously consider the opinions of every friend.

I also told all the friends who were slandered:

In fact, reading is the same as eating, you can't eat the same every day, and restaurants can't only cook the same every day, some people love braised pork, and some people love vegetarian. You think I'm not good at writing, and I don't dare to argue how well I write.

But is there a possibility that you like to eat big meat and greasy dishes, and you are not used to our warm soup? I'm going to reluctantly change it according to the meat dish, and maybe I'll lose the flavor completely. When the time comes, it may really become a pot of glutinous rice.

To put it bluntly, I really just want to write a novel that is logical, reasonable, and well-founded. If you eat too much chicken, duck and fish, you have to have something light and mild? You can't always scold people for not being able to cook because the chefs of Huaiyang cuisine or Cantonese cuisine can't make spicy fragrant pots

Even if you really don't like it, there are so many regular books that meet your requirements, you don't have to compete with me.

Thinking about it from another angle, it's not too difficult to accept if I have an unconventional book, right?

Novels, that is, to have fun, you say?