Chapter 671: Two Scripts
At around 11 o'clock in the morning on August 26, in the study room on the second floor of No. 47 Shimao Binhu Garden, in front of the computer, Lu Yang was thoughtful, and on the computer screen in front of him was a document full of text.
From time to time, his hands tapped a few times on the keyboard, sometimes with a mouse movement, and as he did, some text was deleted from the document, and a sentence or two was added in others.
Occasionally, he would delete entire paragraphs of text.
The title at the top of the document is "Thirty-Three Days of Broken Love".
A few days ago, Lu Yang contacted five well-known female authors in the online literature industry and asked those five people to write a love story script called "Thirty-three Days of Broken Love".
At the same time, there was also Liu Xiahui's "People in Embarrassment".
Compared with Liu Xiahui's quick completion, the female author's speed of writing the story was significantly slower, and it was not until the night before yesterday that the fifth manuscript was handed over to Lu Yang.
The names of the five manuscripts are the same, but the content of the stories is completely different, just like when I was a student, the proposition essay laid out by the teacher, and the stories written by different people are all kinds of general.
Lu Yang read all five manuscripts one or two times.
Judging from the text, the female author's words make him not read too smoothly, perhaps because of the more delicate feelings of women, the female author's words are described in many details, there is a lot of pen and ink, and the habit of choosing words and sentences is also different from that of male authors, in short, if it is just to relax by reading online articles, Lu Yang will not choose the works of these female authors.
But after reading the five manuscripts, from the perspective of storytelling, the quality of these five manuscripts. is worthy of the great fame of those five female authors, and they are indeed outstanding.
The first story. is decent, written about a girl after falling out of love. The different lives in the thirty-three years, the female author of this starting point will write the whole story in a picture style, listing the different pieces of life in the thirty-three days, from the decadence after the loss of love, to the gradual peace of mind, to the restoration of positive sunshine, and finally to regain a beautiful love.
The brilliance of this story. is the ingenuity of regaining love in the last paragraph, Lu Yang doesn't know if the female author intends to write all the previous plots in a decent manner, and then bring out the excitement of the final plot.
In short, the last love story made his eyes shine.
The second story, which uses a lot of interludes and flashbacks, seems to be a recollection of the past, dissecting the love that has just ended, and then realizing that the man who broke up with her is not worthy of her love at all. So as to get out of the haze of past love, at the end of the story, the appearance of a mature man is also arranged, which seems to imply that the heroine walks out of the haze of the previous love. A new and beautiful life is just around the corner.
The third story, without much dissecting the love that has ended, adds some mystery to this story. At the beginning of the story, the heroine leaves her hometown for a summer vacation. Before leaving, the heroine's grandmother scooped her hand. trembling and said a godly chatter, to the effect that the heroine has a catastrophe about 33 this year, and told her not to give up hope no matter what happens, after 33, there will be nothing left.
The heroine laughed it off, and didn't take her grandmother's words to heart, and when she went back, she told her boyfriend about it as a joke.
Unexpectedly, it didn't take long for her boyfriend to break up with her, and the day of the breakup happened to be March 3rd, at 3:03 pm, when she noticed this date and time, the heroine was stunned.
After thinking about it, I finally decided to go back to my hometown and ask my grandmother carefully, but at this time, the news of my grandmother's death came.
The clue seems to have been broken all at once.
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Five scripts, all with different stories.
But every story has a shining point, maybe the five female authors are indeed strong, or it may be that the five female authors, knowing that this story is likely to be put on the big screen by Lu Yang, for them, it is a great opportunity to become famous, so they all put their minds into it.
But no matter what, the quality of these stories is above the standard, which is a good thing for Lu Yang.
Lu Yang thought about it for a long time before he made up his mind how to fuse these five stories together to form a new story.
Before the merger, Lu Yang greeted the five female authors one by one, after all, this involves copyright matters, although he paid honorarium for these five scripts, but to change other people's stories, he still needs to get the consent of the original author.
Fortunately, the five female authors are not difficult to say, maybe for the sake of money, or maybe because of Lu Yang's fame and status in the online literature circle, they all agreed.
And today, after a morning of revisions, a brand new script has almost been revised.
Seeing that the last time I combed it again, it would be finalized, the housekeeper knocked on the door of the study twice, Lu Yang casually said enter, the housekeeper pushed the door in, and said, "Mr. Lu! Miss Yu next door brought her daughter to the door, saying that she was looking for you for something!
"Oh?"
Lu Yang was a little surprised, he had been a neighbor for a few months, this was the first time Sister Yu had come to the door, after thinking about it for a while, Lu Yang nodded, saved the manuscript that had been revised and almost saved, and then got up and went downstairs.
"Sister Yu! What do you want to drink?"
Before he went down the stairs, Lu Yang greeted Sister Yu and Nan Nan with a smile.
Sister Yu was dressed in plain white home clothes today, and she was also wearing slippers on her feet, and she was holding Nannan's little hand at this time, smiling and looking at the situation in Lu Yang's villa.
Hearing Lu Yang's voice, she smiled, stretched out her hand and patted Nannan's little head, and urged: "Nannan! Don't call uncle quickly! Do you know how to be polite?"
"Hello uncle!"
Nan Nan was very well-behaved, and immediately called Lu Yang sweetly.
"Mr. Lu, I took the liberty to come to the door and disturb you, I'm really sorry!"
After she shouted Lu Yang, Sister Yu opened her mouth to talk to Lu Yang, and she was very polite as soon as she spoke.
Lu Yang waved his hand and said, "Sister Yu is so polite! We are neighbors! They all say that distant relatives are not as good as close neighbors! It is my honor for Sister Yu to be a guest! Please sit down Sister Yu! What do you want to drink?"
"I'm not thirsty, uncle!"
Nan Nan stood beside her mother obediently, looking at Lu Yang with big curious eyes. He looked around the hall again.
……
When the tea was served, Sister Yu took a sip. After saying a few words to Lu Yang, he said what he meant today. It turned out that she wanted to invite Lu Yang to come over as a guest at night, and the reason was very polite, saying that the two neighbors had not officially met for so long, so she invited Lu Yang to have a meal tonight, and by the way, she introduced her husband to Lu Yang, hoping that the two families could take care of each other in the future.
Such a reason was impossible to refuse, and Lu Yang agreed after only thinking about it.
Coincidentally. Sister Yu had just said what she meant here, and the sound of a car came from outside the villa, followed by the doorbell, the housekeeper hurried over to see the situation, and soon, Wang Lin strode into the villa.
Seeing that Lu Yang had guests here, Wang Lin was stunned for a moment, nodded politely to Sister Yu, and just said, "Wenda! There are guests here! You talk about it first!
Sister Yu took the opportunity to leave. Lu Yang stayed out of politeness, she didn't change her mind, nodded to Wang Lin, and took the girl away.
"What's going on? You're not interested in married women now, are you?"
Sister Yu and Nan Nan left. Wang Lin, who was used to talking to Lu Yang, casually joked about Lu Yang, and while talking. He had already sat down opposite Lu Yang, picked up the teacup that Sister Yu had just drunk and poured it. After drinking it, he asked, "No one drank this cup of tea just now, right?"
Lu Yanggang was still thinking in his heart, when did Wang Lin, the son-in-law, become so unruly! was relieved, and said with a light smile: "Sister Yu drank it just now!"
After speaking, Lu Yang smiled and looked at Wang Lin's expression.
Sure enough, the smile on Wang Lin's face instantly froze, and he looked at him blankly.
"Wenda, why didn't you say it earlier? Why didn't you stop me just now? You're too yin!"
"Is it fragrant?"
Lu Yang asked him this question with a smile.
Wang Lin was speechless, then blinked, and suddenly smiled: "It's okay! That young woman just now had a good temperament! Fortunately, it's not a dinosaur! Otherwise, I'm going to vomit now! By the way! Wenda, you said you were going to give me two scripts today, where are you?"
Speaking of business, Lu Yang put away the smile on his face, tilted his head slightly, gestured upstairs, and said, "Come with me! The second script needs to be revised again!
With that, Lu Yang got up and went upstairs, and when Wang Lin heard that he was upstairs, he immediately got up and followed behind.
When he got upstairs, Lu Yang asked Wang Lin to take care of himself, sat back in front of the computer, picked up an electronic cigarette and put it in his mouth, and looked at the script on the computer while looking for the previous feeling, but Wang Lin's interest was on him, looking at him with interest to see how he revised the manuscript.
This is probably the curiosity that all laypeople have, curious about how writers write and revise manuscripts.
Lu Yang didn't care about it, he found a feeling for the script, and began to continue the previous revision, his eyes were always fixed on the computer screen, his hands were placed on the computer keyboard at will, but every time he clicked, it was accurate, and the speed at which the text jumped out was faster than Wang Lin's reading speed, and Wang Lin's eyes blinked.
After a while, Lu Yang finally clicked the space bar, and after saving the script with the mouse, he said, "Okay!"
didn't look back at Wang Lin, opened the desk drawer casually, took out a USB flash drive, copied the script that had just been changed, and handed it to Wang Lin.
"Both scripts are in it! "Thirty-three Days of Broken Love" can be filmed later, and "People in Embarrassment" should be filmed as quickly as possible! By the way! I asked you to contact Xu Zheng and Wang Baoxiang before, have you contacted them over there?"
Wang Lin took the USB flash drive handed by Lu Yang and replied with a smile on his face: "I have already found it! What did I not pay attention to about your boss's explanation? I sent your script! When this script is shown to them, they should be able to sign the contract!" (To be continued......)
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