While waiting for the reader's book review to come out, Lu Yang thought carefully about the content of the first two chapters of his new book, and thought for a while, estimating that the fast reader might have finished reading these two chapters, Lu Yang suddenly decided to send another chapter.

It's just the first two chapters, which will inevitably make most readers mistakenly think that the hero of this book is Feng Xingyun, and Feng Xingyun's death will most likely be mistaken for him to be reincarnated and reborn, and "The Age of the Master" will be mistaken for a rebirth work.

With a decision in his heart, Lu Yang didn't go to see if there was a book review in the book review area, and immediately passed another chapter.

At the beginning of the third chapter of "The Age of Teachers", the male protagonist of the book finally appears.

In Lu Yang's setting, the male protagonist is a cynical high school student with a good family kung fu, but he has nothing to do all day long, has no goals in life, and usually finds someone to fight and make fun of soaking 'girls'.

At the beginning of the third chapter, it is a calm and peaceful campus, a corner of the campus, the male protagonist Feng Xingyu is sweeping seven martial arts classmates alone, and when he wins a big victory, he is about to leave with his girlfriend and bad friends, and is stopped by a group of three federal soldiers, the leading soldier first saluted him, and then took the relics of Feng Xingyun handed over by a soldier next to him, and told him in a deep voice that his brother Feng Xingyun died heroically for the Federation.

At that moment, Feng Xingyu was like being hit on the head, and the whole person's ears rang together, and he couldn't hear anyone speak for a while.

His brother is his pride and his only relative.

His martial arts were taught by his brother, and when his brother was there, he always rebelled against his brother, and his brother gave him a good life. But it also made him lose his motivation to improve, and now his brother is gone.

Wind and rain is the protagonist of this book set by Lu Yang.

Everyone thought that the Feng family was two brothers. Feng Xingyun is the best, but no one knows that the real most talented is Feng Xingyu. Since birth, he has been far above his brother in terms of memory, analytical ability, and talent for martial arts.

In this world, geniuses have always been different from ordinary people.

The talent of the wind and rain makes him learn everything extremely fast, and the consequence of being too fast is that he can achieve everything he wants to do extremely easily, coupled with the carefree life, he feels that life is boring and he can't find something interesting to do. Over time, it developed a cynical character.

In Lu Yang's setting, Feng Xingyu's cynical personality changed overnight because of his brother's death.

He really wanted to see his brother again, so he went deep into the mecha game "Six Paths", according to military conventions, the souls of military masters who died in battle were included in "Six Paths", and people who were destined to meet the souls of military masters in "Six Paths" were included.

These souls will live forever in the "Six Paths" like living people, and will teach various mecha combat skills to those who are destined to do so. Feng Xingyu went all the way into "Six Paths", saw the souls of one military master after another, learned one combat skill after another, and defeated one master after another. finally swept the entire "Six Paths", but never saw his brother in it.

Until one day, one of his brother's former subordinates approached him. Tell him personally the real cause of his brother's death. The virtual machine armor combat skills are already invincible in the "Six Paths", and they are in the college entrance examination that will come soon. Admitted to the Military Division and Sergeant Academy with high scores, learn real mecha control techniques.

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There are many ways to make a story engaging.

The lowest way should be Xiao Huang's 'text', through guò paragraph after paragraph of erotic descriptions to attract readers, this kind of practice, will always attract many readers, but such an article, can never be on the stage, the person who writes is ashamed to tell others, and the person who reads it is also ashamed to let friends and relatives around him know.

With Lu Yang's current reputation, it is naturally impossible to adopt this method.

A more advanced way can create one or two characters that readers love through guò character building, or you can use guò one refreshing storyline after another to attract readers, and you can also use guò humorous prose to make readers love.

In Lu Yang's view, the best way is to impress readers in the idea of the article.

Specifically, it should be the grasp of grievances and hatreds.

In Lu Yang's view, all stories can't be of any theme or type, whether it's fantasy, Xianxia, urban, history, science fiction, or supernatural, all of these things, the core of all stories is not all kinds of novel settings, magnificent pictures in the book, or bookworm characters.

All of the above is just the shell of a book.

For thousands of years, it has been said that a good article must be written in a word.

In Lu Yang's opinion, this is at all!

From the day it was born, it had only one core -- that is, storytelling!

The story is wonderful and good-looking, which is what all novels should pursue.

The content and form of the novel can have countless faces, but what runs through it must be the common emotions of human beings, such as grievances and hatred, greed and hatred.

These emotional lines are arranged appropriately, so that the reader can completely stand on the side of the protagonist, ideologically substitute for the role of the protagonist, and share joys and sorrows with the protagonist.

If the various emotional lines are not properly arranged, the story cannot be truly exciting.

For example, the same protagonist kills people, some books make readers very bored to read, and they feel that the protagonist kills innocents indiscriminately, like a reckless man, and in clever works, the protagonist kills people, killing the reader happily, and he can't replace him with his body.

At the beginning of "The Age of Teachers", what Lu Yang tried his best to do was to make readers recognize and look forward to Feng Xingyu's next powerful and vengeful actions.

Only if this point stands, all the plots that follow will be what readers expect.

This, in Lu Yang's view, is the same as the divorce stream.

When the divorce stream first came out, the reason why it was popular and made readers like that book deeply was because of the divorce plot at the beginning, which made readers recognize and look forward to the outbreak of the protagonist later.

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After sending the third chapter as well, Lu Yang's heart calmed down a lot.

Because he is confident in the plot and quality of the third chapter, as soon as the third chapter comes out, I believe that no matter anyone who sees it, they will no longer mistake Fengxingyun for the protagonist of the book.

The beginning of each book is the most labor-intensive, for this beginning, Lu Yang changed his draft several times, did not take the usual path, and finally made such a satisfactory opening.

In this book, he did not draw on any of the online articles in his memory.

After posting this chapter, Lu Yang did not continue to sit in front of the computer and wait for the book review to come out, and his heart of gains and losses had calmed down.

Every author who has confidence in himself must have confidence in his work before a new book is released, and if he is not confident, it means that he himself does not recognize the quality of his work.

If you don't approve of it, how many people can you expect to approve of it?

Turned off the computer casually, Lu Yang smiled, and came down from downstairs relaxed, the housekeeper and bodyguard He Baiming, who had not slept downstairs, heard the movement and walked out of their respective rooms, Lu Yang smiled and waved his hand to them, and said, "Don't worry about me! I'll go out for a walk alone!

The housekeeper and He Baiming stopped this time.

The night outside was hazy and the sky was full of stars, Lu Yang came out of the villa, and was greeted by a cool breeze with water vapor, and the whole person suddenly became conscious.

Lu Yang didn't drive, and he didn't plan to go far, he just wandered around the villa area on the island, and after being reborn for several years, he still liked the night, every time he walked under the night sky, walked on the uninhabited road, smelled the grass and trees on the roadside, and the smell of earth, his mind would be very relaxed.

The city is too noisy during the day, full of pedestrians, vehicles, and noise, and only at night is it quieter.

The hazy night, the starry sky, the faint smell of grass and earth, can make his mind clear, although he feels a little lonely, but his mind is extraordinarily clear, no matter what he thinks, he can think like a pearl.

Lu Yang walked aimlessly under the dim shade of the street lights, and suddenly heard a lot of voices not far away, his steps subconsciously paused, and his first thought was to change the direction and not continue to move forward, but after hesitating, he still walked forward slowly.

Maybe subconsciously, he also likes to be lively! People are always contradictory.

Not far ahead, after turning a corner, Lu Yang saw a sports field in front of him.

There are two sides around the sports field are steel wire mesh, the other two sides are made of green bamboo fence, green bamboo is planted on the ground, swaying with the wind, there are people playing basketball on the sports field, some people play badminton, and some people sit together in twos and threes to chat, there are some facilities for children to play in the southeast corner, there are more than a dozen adults and children playing together.

Slides, swings, seesaws......

There was a lot of laughter.

As far as the eye can see, there are basically children, girls, and women.

Most of the men play basketball in the other corner, while several couples play badminton.

This is not far from Lu Yang's villa, he rarely comes here on weekday evenings, but it is the first time he knows that it will be so lively at night, with bright lights on the sports field and soothing music.

Seeing such a happy scene, Lu Yang was envious in his heart, smiled, walked inside, and sat down in a no-man's corner, where there was a bench for people to rest.

Suddenly, Lu Yang heard the laughter of a little girl who was somewhat familiar, and his eyes followed the voice, and he saw the little girl from the neighbor's house sliding down the slide with a few children, and the little guy's laughter spread far away, making people feel her happiness at the moment.

Nan Nan is over there, and presumably her neighbor Sister Yu is also over there.

Lu Yang's eyes searched among the adults nearby, and sure enough, he saw Sister Yu, and to Lu Yang's surprise, there was a familiar figure beside Sister Yu.

Dressed in a black tunic dress, a pair of high-heeled sandals, a shawl with black hair, and a pair of delicate black-rimmed glasses on the bridge of his nose.

It turned out to be Feng Lan, who had not been seen for a long time.

How is she with Sister Yu?

Lu Yang was a little puzzled. (To be continued......)

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