24. Look at everyone like a traverser

"How did Xia Luo travel back? hiss, it seems that she went to Qiu Ya's wedding to drink, first she was sneered at by Teacher Wang and Yuan Hua, and then she was smashed to pieces by her daughter-in-law Ma Dongmei in public, and finally went to the toilet to wash her face......

Han Fei was writing and drawing on the paper with a pen while muttering,

Although there are few works with the theme of traveling, they are not nothing, such as the "Love Through Time and Space" filmed by the bald Xu in his childhood, and the mediocre Gu Tianle's "Looking for Qin", but people are wearing ancient clothes, and this is now wearing.

Han Fei wrote all the way from the wedding scene to the first conflict with Teacher Wang in the classroom after the crossing, and then described Xia Luo forcing Yuan Hua to change seats, forcibly kissing Qiu Ya, and then Xia Luo walked to the peak of life through the golden finger of the traverser, the plot went according to the direction in his memory, but when Han Fei stopped writing and looked at the finished plot, he only felt as boring as boiled water, and the burden that originally made him laugh in the movie is now not shaking at all.

Thinking of this, Han Fei simply stopped writing and complained to himself: "Damn, it can't go on like this, an excellent comedy work will be ruined in my hands sooner or later, sure enough, the interlacing is like a mountain, and it is better to leave the matter of writing the plot and making up lines to a professional, and I can make up a sketch at this level." ”

Han Fei took out her mobile phone and dialed Sister Fan's number, but she didn't contact Sister Fan much since she called back to school, and she didn't know what she was busy with.

As soon as the phone was connected, Sister Fan asked like a cannon: "Hey, you have a holiday, do you want me to pick you up?"

"There is no holiday, there is no holiday, there is still a week or two missing. Han Fei hurriedly excused himself, as far as his attitude was concerned, Sister Fan's agent didn't have anything to say, and he said, "Sister Fan, what are you busy with these days?"

"What can I be busy with, isn't it all for you, I went to talk about a few endorsement intentions, but people are still waiting for the time being, saying that they will wait for the start of "Meteor Shower" to see the effect. ”

"Ahh ”

"Tell me, what do you want me to solve for you?" Sister Fan didn't procrastinate, and went straight to the point when she spoke.

Han Fei said: "Next semester, major professional colleges and universities are going to hold a drama competition, and I have come up with a creative idea here, but the script is really not well written, so I want to find a professional to help polish and polish it, Sister Fan, you see if there are any channels to meet professional screenwriters." ”

"How professional do you want to be?"

"I can't afford the appearance fee, this is a small comedy, and I don't need to be the top in the industry. ”

Sister Fan paused and replied, "Okay, wait two days, I'll ask a friend." ”

"OK, thank you, Sister Fan. ”

"Thank you for what I do, the agent is a hard worker, hanging. ”

In all fairness, there is a big housekeeper who is much better than opening his eyes and feeling blind, hanging up the phone, Han Fei continued to describe the main plot according to the progress of the plot of the movie, although the details can't stand scrutiny, so the skeleton is erected, as for adding flesh and blood, let the professional come.

……

Sister Fan's reply was very fast, and she asked about it the next day, and it is said that the person is a rising screenwriter star in the industry, whose name is Yan Fei.

The place where the person made an appointment was the Haidian Theater, compared to the teahouse café, it seemed to be particularly non-mainstream, the undercover agent was about on the rooftop, and the screenwriter was about in the theater, well, there seems to be nothing wrong. It just so happened that Nortel was also in Haidian District, Han Fei stepped on the broken motorcycle and went, the sun was a little blazing, fortunately there was a little wind blowing, the speed was forty miles, and his mood was free.

There is no Gaode map or anything in these years, fortunately, there are a lot of signs along the way, Han Fei searched all the way to No. 28 Zhongguancun Street, the huge and magnificent building came into view, and four gilded characters said "Haidian Theater", yes, this is it.

The imperial capital is the imperial capital, with a lot of money, and even the district-level theater is built like a work of art, Han Fei entered the building, searched for the address on the mobile phone message, turned around and didn't figure out the direction, and couldn't help but curse MMP in his heart, forget it, let's find someone to ask.

Han Fei circled for a while and then turned into a corridor, and when he saw that a figure finally appeared in front of him, he hurriedly ran over in three steps and two steps.

The man was sitting with his back to Han Fei, wearing a light blue T-shirt, his body was rickety, and he felt very decadent at a glance from a distance.

"Hello, excuse me, may I ask this ......" Han Fei opened his mouth to ask the man for directions, but he got stuck in his throat before he could finish a sentence.

"What, what's wrong?" the man slowly raised his head, his facial features were slightly funny, his bangs were finely slumped on his forehead, and there were already crow's feet at the corners of his eyes when he laughed.

"Shen, Teacher Shen?"

I'll it, is it such a coincidence? Shen Teng, who is in the mature stage, Han Fei rubbed his eyes in disbelief and stammered.

Hearing that someone was called a teacher, Brother Teng showed more or less happiness in his heart, and said with a smile: "Hehe, you young man is quite funny, since I graduated, this is the first time that someone has called me a teacher, by the way, how do you know that my surname is Shen?"

"Ah, that, I saw it on the post bar, and someone said that there were several good young comedians in the theater, and I happened to see it. "The paste bar is a brick, where you need to go to which class, Han Fei made up the vernacular.

"yes, I'm that famous?"

"That is, you will definitely be the leading figure in the Chinese comedy industry in the future. ”

Brother Teng smiled even more on his face after hearing this, his eyes narrowed into a slit, like the funny in the sticker emoji, he waved his hand and said: "What are you carrying, I'm still pulling the curtain now, come on, what did you want to ask just now?"

After almost forgetting his business for a long time, Han Fei hurriedly replied: "Yes, yes, yes, I just wanted to ask for directions, you can show me, how to get to this place?"

Han Fei handed over the phone, Shen Teng glanced at it, pointed to the stairs on the other side and said, "You go up from this staircase, and when you go up to the third floor, you see a red trash can, and you can go two steps forward." ”

"Thank you, Mr. Shen. ”

"Don't, I can't afford it, just call Brother Shen. ”

"Then thank you, Brother Shen, I'll go first. ”

Following Shen Teng's guidance, Han Feima slipped upstairs, and sure enough, there was a red trash can, and he took two steps forward, and a sign was hung on the door, lounge. Han Fei knocked on the door, and a voice came from inside, which was quite heavy.

"Please come in. ”

Han Fei pushed the door in, the lounge space is not large, and the display is also very simple, there is a table and a chair in the middle, a wooden sofa in the middle, and a glass coffee table, and a water dispenser and two pots of green plants are placed in the innermost corner, what kind of variety Han Fei does not know, anyway, this trace of green adds a vitality to this narrow and cramped space.

"Hello, I'm looking for Teacher Yan Fei. ”

"I am, you were introduced by Sister Liu?"

"Ah, you can just call me Xiao Han. ”

"Cheng, don't call me a teacher, call Lao Yan or Brother Yan Ducheng, please take a seat. ”

Meow a mi, what kind of dialogue is this, what is it called Sister Liu's introduction, how does it feel like a big health care pick-up.

Han Fei was not restrained, he sat on the sofa, his eyes had already looked at Yan Fei, thick eyebrows and big eyes, a typical northern man, speaking with full of energy, making people feel comfortable listening to it, he went straight to the point and said: "I'm not polite anymore, I came today mainly to ask Brother Yan to help polish a script, and at present, I have made an outline myself, but my level in the details is not enough, and the burden is not loud." ”

"Cheerful, then please take out the outline and show it to me. ”

Han Fei nodded, took out a printed manuscript from his school bag, after all, it was meant to be shown to outsiders, he had re-entered an outline on the computer before, Yan Fei was also a cool person, took the script, opened it and took a look, his brows were twisted together, hey, it was really just an outline, not even a standard script format.

The name of "Charlotte's Troubles" is quite flattering, and I don't know what the content is, with a bit of skepticism, Yan Fei reviewed the outline of the script, and was originally very disappointed with the format of the script, but after reading the plot synopsis, he was suddenly attracted by this story, and the corners of his mouth and eyebrows couldn't help but smile.

Han Fei clasped his hands in front of his chest, watching the expression on Yan Fei's face constantly changing, from disappointment to surprise, like Sichuan Opera changing faces, he couldn't help but breathe a sigh of relief in his heart, sure enough, the book is still a good book, it can be attractive after all, but his own script creation level, alas, don't talk about it.

Yan Fei quickly finished reviewing the outline, and asked with a happy face, "Let me take the liberty of asking, did you come up with this idea yourself?"

If I could have come up with it, I would have gone to heaven a long time ago, Han Fei secretly complained in his heart, but he still had to pretend to be serious on his face, and replied: "Crossing this kind of plot is not my first creation, there are many such plots on the Internet now." ”

Yan Fei waved his hand and said excitedly: "The character of Xia Luo is very interesting, according to your setting, he was originally a timid person, and he suddenly ate the benefits of memory and went to the peak of his life, which is very in line with people's expectations for getting rich overnight, and Yuan Hua, the original pride of the sky, finally fell into the dust because of his father, interesting, the audience loves to see this contrast." ”

"Well, I didn't think that much. "If you say too much, you will lose, Han Fei doesn't know what the original author thinks, so he doesn't know if he says less and shows less.

"Okay, I've taken this script, don't worry, I'll write it for you, it's a great idea. ”

"Thank you so much, you see, how do you talk about this salary?"

Love is love, business belongs to business, Yan Fei likes this work very much, but he has to fight for himself in terms of salary, after all, he is just a small screenwriter in the theater now, what potential newcomers and emerging talents are circulating in the industry, they are all commercial blows, squeezing out the water, and he really didn't get too much salary.

"Well, how much do you think is appropriate?"

"No, this is the first time I've asked the screenwriter for help, you give me a market price, I'm just a student, don't slaughter me as a piglet, this script is very important to me, and the college will hold a competition next semester." ”

Yan Fei clenched his fists, paused and said, "Three thousand." ”

"How much?" Han Fei was shocked when he heard this number, he thought that he would not spend 8100000 before he came, but he didn't expect it to be a friendly price.

Yan Fei spread his hands and said bitterly: "Three thousand, this is the lowest price, no matter how low it is, you can only go to the forum to find the gunman, I see that you are a student, and it has been pressed to the lowest." ”

"Yes, the deal, three thousand is three thousand, cash or card?"

"Cash. ”

"Done. ”

Han Fei took out the money clip from his schoolbag, and clumsily counted thirty Grandpa Mao out, saying that he was a human being in two lives, and Han Fei was stunned that he hadn't learned the job of counting money, he counted money as if he was playing poker and dealing cards, and threw them out one by one, seeing Yan Fei's headache, this child would not be a stupid son of a landlord's family.

Yan Fei accepted the money, and the thumb and index finger of his right hand skillfully cooperated, Han Fei couldn't help but sigh, watching you count the money is really like watching acrobatics.

"By the way, I suddenly had some inspiration. After counting the money, Yan Fei suddenly said to Han Fei.

Han Fei smiled: "Ah, Brother Yan, tell me about it." ”

Yan Fei stood up, took two steps, and said: "Isn't the heroine called Ma Dongmei, I can add a burden to it, what is Ma Dongmei? What is Ma Dongmei? ”

Han Fei sat on the sofa, it was as if he was struck by a thunderbolt, the thunder was scorched on the outside and tender on the inside, buddy, how can I see that you are the traverser, you can make up this kind of stalk casually, I don't believe you if you are not traversal.

"Ahem. Han Fei came back to his senses, coughed, pouted and looked at Yan Fei, feeling that there seemed to be nothing extraordinary, so he asked as if he was a code: "Brother Yan, do you know Trump?"

"What?Mandarin in Sichuan Province?" Yan Fei was confused.

Hey, you don't know Trump, isn't it really crossing, Han Fei decided to ask one last sentence: "Brother Yan, then do you know what the next sentence is?"

"Wishing you prosperity?"

Come on, it's not to eat chicken tonight, it's really not crossing, Han Fei is more and more puzzled, how did you come up with this Ma Dongmei's stalk?