Chapter 633: Waterloo

"Disappointment, disappointment, what the hell is written!"

"Is this a book written by Fuyun?"

"I suspect someone is ghostwriting?"

"That's rubbish. ”

"This can't be a work written by Fuyun at all!"

"How could Fuyun write such a bad work. ”

"This "Zhu Xian" has lowered the bottom line of Fuyun's average works!"

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Many authors have such thoughts in their hearts, they originally thought that Fuyun wrote "Classical Xianxia" this time just to sell dog meat on the head of a sheep, and in the end, he must be innovative, he must "innovate Classical Xianxia" and create a new genre.

Who knows, I didn't see innovation, but I saw retro.

Although I have only read a few chapters, these contents are all routines from more than ten years ago, and except for the good writing, the others can be said to be useless.

Of course, it's not that "Zhu Xian" is bad!

But he Fuyun wrote! Fuyun probably wouldn't have written works of such a low level.

As for the book review section, it's about to be bombed.

Countless negative reviews!

"What's written?"

"I thought that the name of "Zhu Xian" would be a story of a domineering and handsome hanging, but I didn't think that the protagonist would be so wretched?"

"Is this really the floating cloud that wrote "Breaking the Sky"? The gap between the two is too big. ”

"In fact, when I saw the introduction, I knew that it was cool, what are the two ways of good and evil, and what is one of the three righteous sects, this is clearly a routine more than ten years ago!"

"The name "Zhu Xian" is quite explosive, but the content can't bear to look at it directly!"

"I like Fuyun very much, but Fuyun wrote this time to disappoint me very much, this shouldn't be the work he wrote, he could have written better!"

"Fuyun seems to have exhausted Jiang Lang's talent, and his talent has been almost consumed by "Breaking the Sky". ”

"This book is already cold, maybe we have to wait for his next book, no matter what, he is always a generation of grandmasters in the online literature circle, he has created so many excellent and wonderful for us, we are always looking forward to his growth. ”

""Zhu Xian" is set this time!"

"I'm fooled, Fuyun's label for "Zhu Xian" is Shuangwen, pretending to be forced to slap his face, Nima, this is Shuangwen。。。。。。 ”

"Actually, the quality of this book is not bad, I will always support it anyway, who made him a floating cloud?"

"Although this book is a little disappointing, I will still support him, after all, I am used to it, he is my favorite author!"

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It can be said that countless readers have expressed their disappointment with the floating clouds!

Because countless readers want to come and see "Shuangwen"!

I want to watch the type of "Breaking the Sky" that is refreshing to the extreme!

Or a scheming type like "The Legend of Mortal Immortals" Han Ranran.

But although Fuyun's "Zhu Xian" is labeled as a cool article, it is a pretending to be a slap in the face, but the content can't bear to look at it directly.

A typical classical fairy, although the text has a fairy spirit and has made great progress, it makes people can't stand it, so they can only say what they wrote?

And the protagonist is not domineering at all, just an ordinary child!

This is not what they expected.

It can be said that their expectations for floating clouds are too high, and "Zhu Xian" cannot meet their expectations, so they are despised fiercely!

At this time, the famous reader Ten Years Excalibur wrote a comment about "Floating Clouds", which won everyone's admiration.

"Since the release of "Zhu Xian", it has attracted the attention of the entire online literature circle, this kind of grand occasion has never been seen by the ancients, and it is difficult for latecomers to surpass!"

"In my mind, it is because of the special identity of Fuyun, he wrote "The Big Star of Rebirth" to create the entertainment flow, "Confucianism and Taoism to the Holy" to create the Confucianism and Taoism flow, "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" to create a new system of Xianxia to create the mortal flow, "Breaking the Firmament" to create the divorce flow, the grandfather flow, etc., and it has become a template model for fantasy!"

"Many people call Fuyun a generation of grandmasters in the online literature circle, this evaluation is very pertinent, Fuyun continues to inject new vitality into the online literature circle, this merit is unparalleled!"

Coupled with the supreme foundation laid by "Breaking the Sky", his new book attracted huge attention as soon as it was released. ”

"Let's take a look at the other two gods, the world's unequaled and me, they always compare them with floating clouds, but most people think that they are under floating clouds, but in fact, their popularity is not necessarily much inferior to floating clouds, it is because they have not driven the online text, and they have not promoted the progress of the online text, so people feel that they are not as good as the floating clouds!"

"But these two are still worthy of admiration this time, the world's unparalleled gave up the rebirth of the waste that he was good at, and rewrote the rebirth of the strong, this "Rebirth of the Nine Heavens" he gave full play to the rebirth flow of the strong, and on the other hand, I am the same, his "King's Landing" is also a change from the previous image of the protagonist with a mocking aura, and has become scheming!"

"The changes of these two have won the reputation of the audience and the respect of industry insiders, after all, it takes a lot of courage to make changes at their level!"

"Okay, let's talk about Fuyun's new work "Zhu Xian", and when I first saw that the category of "Zhu Xian" was classical Xianxia, I was happy in my heart, because I thought that Fuyun was probably going to create a new genre again!"

"But when I saw the details, I was very disappointed! very disappointed, extremely disappointed!"

"Objectively speaking, "Zhu Xian" is excellent in terms of writing and quality, if a newcomer writes such a beginning, I will think that he has the qualifications to become a god, but it is Fuyun who writes this book, and it is Fuyun who writes "Confucianism and Taoism", "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" and "Breaking the Firmament", this kind of work is completely blasphemy for him, is it really as rumored, Fuyun Jianglang is exhausted?"

"Maybe we're asking too much of him, but who made him a floating cloud?"

"Actually, I can also understand Fuyun's thoughts, he has created one new genre after another, so he is very stressed when he releases a new book, for fear that it will not meet everyone's expectations!"

At the same time, Fuyun probably thinks that he is a hero, probably looking down on the so-called "Xiaobaiwen", and wants to pursue something deep, such as human nature, such as literature and art. ”

"But I want to say to you Fuyun, don't follow the old path of those physical writers, don't raise yourself too high, divorced from reality, and divorced from the people!"

"Don't forget your identity as an online writer, writing, layout is secondary, the important thing is to be reader-centric, write those refreshing articles, these are what you are good at, if you insist on this road of no return, then I believe that your godhead will fall!"

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Ten years of Excalibur's analysis is reasonable, and the analysis is very in place, which has been approved by many people.

"The analysis is very reasonable, I also think that Fuyun has gone astray, so online writers should not brush up on the grid, and write simple and straightforward articles honestly, no shame!"

"The landlord's words have come to my heart, Fuyun is too arrogant, thinking that no matter what he writes, readers will welcome it, which is really ridiculous!"

"Fuyun is really Jiang Lang's end!"

"This book "Zhu Xian" is the beginning of the Waterloo of Fuyun's writing career, this incident tells us a truth, we can't pretend to be forced at any time!"

"You can't be too confident!"

"The supreme god is not infallible, and who still remembers many ancient giant gods?"

"Fuyun, this is a chance for others!!!!!"

"It's also to the point where he has come to the point where writing is just a side hustle for him, just write casually, he has lost the pure !!!! of writing books"

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Everyone thinks that "Zhu Xian" will be the beginning of the floating clouds Waterloo!