Chapter 167: They all think that they hit the street

Why chose "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is actually very simple, because "Mortal" is more suitable for creating a system than "Immortal Rebellion". Pen | fun | pavilion www. biquge。 info

In terms of cultivation level, the system of mortals is Qi training, foundation building, Jin Dan, Yuan Ying, God Transformation and so on.

And "Immortal Rebellion" was similar at the beginning, and then it was the first step, the second step, the third step, and so on.

And "Mortal" is almost a very detailed description of the cultivation of the true arts, so "Immortal Rebellion" may surpass "Mortal" in some aspects, but he is still much worse in terms of groundbreaking.

"Mortal" is more suitable than "Immortal Rebellion" to be the nose master of "mortal flow".

From "The Path of the Law to the Immortal" to "Hundred Refinements into Immortals", it can be seen that almost all of them refer to the mortal model.

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And "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is the pinnacle of forgetfulness, and he has not surpassed himself since then.

The results of "Mortal" are also obvious to all, as evidenced by the fact that it ranked first on the recommendation list.

Xu Qian began to write the first sheet of "Mortals" "A small village on the side of the mountain." ”

The two stunned eyes widened, staring straight at the black roof made of thatch and mud, and the old quilt covered with his body was already dark yellow, and he couldn't see his original appearance, and there was a faint musty smell. ”

The other person next to him was the second brother Han Zhu, who was sleeping very sweetly, and from time to time there were bursts of snoring of different degrees from him. ”

About half a zhang away from the bed, there is a mud wall made of yellow mud, because of the time, the wall cracked a few inconspicuous slender holes, from these cracks, faintly heard the nagging and complaining sound of Han's mother, occasionally mixed with Han's father, smoking the "click" and "click" of the dry tobacco stick. ”

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Such a beginning is very different from other novels.,Most of the beginnings of other novels are cross-time.,The protagonist is a soldier or something.,But in fact, IQ is about the same as mentally retarded.。

However, Han Li's start was "Erlengzi", an ordinary mortal, who could have thought that he would become the "Han Old Demon" in the Three Realms in the future.

This is a story of "mortals becoming immortals", and it is also a very down-to-earth story.

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A week later, Xu Qian had accumulated a certain amount of manuscripts, and he was ready to upload "The Legend of Mortal Immortal Cultivation".

But before that, he had to give "Mortal" a bald look at it, and last time "Confucianism and Taoism Most Holy" didn't give him a look, but he buried it for a long time.

He sent a TT message to the big bald head: "Bald boss, my new book has been sent to your mailbox, you have given it a look." ”

The big bald head was overjoyed when he saw this message: "Fuyun is finally going to release a new book." ”

Floating clouds are now his hole cards!

He couldn't wait to open his mailbox, and then he saw a document named "Legend of Mortal Immortal Cultivators".

"Is this the name of the new book? ”

The big bald head complained a little.

In fact, the name "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is earthy enough, and it is often complained about in another world, but this name is also a little mentioned, because this story is about the process of "mortals becoming immortals", what is it called if it is not called "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals"?

Then the bald head read a few chapters of Xu Qianfa, and he thought what to say?

"It seems too ordinary. ”

"Is this really the level of floating clouds?"

"Or has my own level of appreciation declined?"

The big bald head said with some skepticism.

He passed the document of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" to other editors and editors-in-chief to watch, and he thought to himself: "Maybe I didn't see the beauty of "Mortal". ”

When the other editors and editors-in-chief heard that this was Fuyun's new book, they all showed curious expressions.

Because Fuyun can be considered one of the most innovative fiction authors in recent years, it should be a pleasure to look at his new book.

But when they finished reading a few chapters, they all sighed like big bald heads.

"Is this really written by Fuyun?"

"It's too ordinary. ”

"It's not at all in line with the Golden Three Chapters!"

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The editor-in-chief said: "Look at this opening, I am not optimistic about this book. ”

The other editors also sneered: "That floating cloud seems to be Jiang Lang's end." ”

"The pen is still not good in the end, and after writing one or two books, it will wither. ”

"There is still a certain gap between it and the real gods. ”

"Fuyun, he's still a little bit off the fire!"

The other editors were a little gloating, they were still very envious and jealous of the author who had a big bald head and had Fuyun, and now they couldn't help but sneer when they saw Fuyun's "declining talent".

The big bald head is very unpleasant to listen to.

The editor-in-chief also said: "Let Fuyun prepare a new book again, don't smash your own signboard." ”

The editor-in-chief is for the good of Fuyun, it is not easy for an author to establish a godhead, if a book is not well written, it is likely to make the godhead fall, especially for Fuyun, a new god who has no background.

The big bald head nodded, and he also felt that what the editor-in-chief said was very reasonable.

Therefore, the bald head said to Xu Qian euphemistically: "Fuyun, your book is not cool enough, do you want to change it?"

"Huh?"

Xu Qian fell into deep thought.

"Mortal" is not cool enough? This is obviously impossible, if it is not cool enough, how can so many people watch it?

Watching Han Li grow step by step from a simple youth in a mountain village to a powerful Han Old Demon in the Three Realms, how many people brought themselves into it, how could it not be cool enough?

But it's true that the early stage is slow to heat, because the routines of the book "Mortal" are different from the current mainstream routines, so it's awkward to watch, but after dozens of chapters, it's basically getting better.

Therefore, Xu Qian said: "Just choose this book, you have to believe me." ”

The big bald head smiled bitterly: "Okay." ”

But he was still a little disappreciative in his heart: "It's really willful!"

He probably guessed Xu Gan's psychology, probably because Xu Qian became a god too easily, so he didn't cherish it, and after he had eaten enough lessons, he would understand what "golden and jade good words" were.

If Xu Qian knew the idea of the big bald head, he would definitely be very speechless: "What is this?"

"Can you not make up those unwarranted plots?"

The big bald head said to the editor-in-chief: "Fuyun still insists on publishing this book. ”

The editor-in-chief sighed and said, "It's really stubborn!"

"After all, he is a young man, he doesn't hit the south wall and doesn't look back. ”

The other editors secretly sneered in their hearts: "Silly fork." ”

"Stubborn, really stubborn!"

"Deserve to fight the street, this kind of person will definitely fight the street, and he will fight until he is old. ”

"This kind of person will suffer a little loss, otherwise he will not know how high the sky is and how thick the earth is. ”

"I think he's going to cry soon, and he's going to be trembling when he writes a book like this one. ”

"I'm ready to watch the show. ”

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"I still have to give the recommendation that I should have. ”

The editor-in-chief said to the big bald head.

The big bald head nodded: "I hope to save a little face." ”

After having a recommendation, the results of "Mortal" will at least have a certain guarantee.

After that, a banner was pulled on the homepage of the Phantom Sword Network: "Fuyun's new book "The Legend of Mortal Immortal Cultivation" is shocking. ”

Although I am not optimistic about the "Legend of Mortal Immortal Cultivation" written by Fuyun this time, the treatment that should be given is still to be given, after all, Fuyun is a great god, which is also one of the reasons why the Phantom Sword Network can prosper for a long time.