Let's start with the chapter change.

Everything is for the book to be better, this is the big premise.

Secondly, the changes are not too big or too small. There are a few points.

First, the identity of the crossing, whether it is soul wear or flesh wear, has been removed. In the end, only one so-called dream is reserved for interpretation. From then on, Han Wei was completely a person from this alternate world, and he had no connection with reality.

Cause. Since you don't take the road of copying, the identity of crossing seems to be a bit chicken. In addition, there is only a year difference between time and reality in the book. And I don't plan to use too many golden fingers to develop, but rely on variety shows and film and television dramas, it seems that there is no point in crossing.

Second. Just like the beginning of the previous book. The fat man thought that he was burned to death and then broke off the stalk for the tenth anniversary, and he thought it was very good, but the response was average. Many people even criticize that a book is a book, and what to do has to be involved. And this book also has this problem, even if the book friends who support the fat man are helping to explain that the fat man was just 404 at the time, and his mentality is a bit broken, so it seems chaotic.

Thinking about it, the fat man always said that the reason why he suddenly became mature after the beginning of this book is. You can listen to the opinions of book friends more. So on reflection, it may indeed be that the fat man was influenced by the previous book.

Now that this book is also on the shelves, it is equivalent to the dust has settled. Say goodbye to the past.

Since it is completely overhead, then don't drag the mud and water. Keeping the overall style consistent is the attitude that an author should be responsible for book friends.

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Of course, the general direction is to put aside the identity of the crossing and keep only one dream. At most, this dream will serve as a little foreshadowing, nothing more. If you shoot any film and television dramas in the future, you may have a hunch of a whim, and this drama has no prospects.

In fact, it's still not a gold finger because, even if you don't have this hunch. A play and a work, everyone has a judgment. And it's going to be a 50 percent chance.

Here's an example. I heard that "1001 Nights" will be broadcast in July, and the fat man thinks this drama should be very good. So when it comes to the repercussions after the broadcast, there are only two results anyway. It's really good, or it's just so-so.

Since it's 2017, there's nothing to copy. And the style of the fat man's book is not intended to copy a lot of works. It's better to go through the normal steps. On the basis of film and television dramas and variety shows, some original adaptations will be made, and then continue the pink route, sweet to your hen~

Small direction. Deleted some large passages of dialogue or slightly verbose places, as well as places that are not very comfortable to look at.

Some book friends said that the preface doesn't match the afterword, and the plot can't even be matched.

(∩_∩) O

The places that were roughly deleted were a few conversations with the director and a few confrontations with Brother Liu.

There are also some places where there are too many confessions.

Another point is to advance the pilot film. Because many book friends say the so-called golden three chapters. I didn't think about this, but I mentioned that the previous is mainly a place where I can hope that new book friends can see the essence of this book as soon as possible, variety show. When you see it, it's easy to get involved.

Instead of having some mess before the pilot. Foreshadowing may seem too much. This aspect is some of my attempts. I always want to be as reasonable and truthful as possible, but maybe book lovers don't care too much. As long as it's generally passable. Don't be too distorted.

Fat people naturally don't put the cart before the horse. If it is too reasonable, there will definitely be a lot of foreshadowing. Between the trade-offs, the fat man is learning to master this degree.

Anyway, the protagonist is low-key and real enough, and he doesn't have too many gold fingers.

After all, this is, within a certain range, I believe that most relatives should be able to accept it.

After all, the theme is variety shows and pink.

If there are any other inconsistencies with the tone of the previous revisions, you are also welcome to put them forward. (∩_∩) O

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That's it for the question of modifying chapters.

Let's talk about the problem of variety shows.

Variety shows are the characteristics and pride of fat people, but some book friends reacted that it was too long. There are more than ten chapters each time, and maybe this is indeed a problem. The fat man also thinks about how to solve it, as much as possible not to write so much? Just think about the plot for more than an hour, and write it in a few chapters and 10,000 words, the fat man is not that confident.

Energy is conserved.

To be wonderful, you need foreshadowing. If you want to be concise, you are destined to be rough.

I don't know if there exists, anyway, the fat man reads a lot of great gods' books, and each copy has more than a dozen chapters.

Of course, the fat man is not a quibble, and the fat man is not a god. There is no such immunity.

So it is still necessary to solve the problem fundamentally.

How can I make my writing as good as possible, the quality is guaranteed, and it will not make book friends feel too trusted.

I just finished kowtowing to the mirror, because the fat man is still a genius after all, I thought about it.

This issue of longing for life is the last time, and there will definitely be no such situation in the future.

It's the best of both worlds. As for the solution, everyone will know when the time comes.

O(∩_∩)O

Adding more is indeed a solution. But the fat man means that he can do it even without adding more.

I won't write less content, and I won't let everyone look at the way of Taituo.

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As for the dull life these days.

Probably. After all, I don't dare to be as pink as Li Ruobai. There has to be a degree.

But the fat man also thought that maybe there was a little reason, maybe everyone didn't admit it.

The last book has not been updated here, and Bao Qianyu has never appeared from beginning to end.

So even if Li Ruobai's name is very unfamiliar with this book, everyone still likes it and can still devote it to it.

However, Bao Qianyu is unfamiliar with both the previous book and this book.

lacks a sense of substitution, and naturally only based on the description of the fat man, it is difficult for everyone to like her quickly from the heart. Here you can see the importance of real celebrity names, which is why there is a rise and rise of China Entertainment. Everyone loves YY stars who are far away from us and can be seen every day.

Of course, because since I don't like her, I naturally see the variety show plots related to her, so it's better to watch the enjoyment of Li Ruobai.

But it can't be helped. I'm the author, and I'm going to think about it all.

I've been writing for six years, and even if I'm not famous or mixed up, I know you.

You are the most stinky, shameless, and unreasonable.

Many people have said before that they have been writing about Li Ruobai and Han Wei's pink and tired to death. Han Wei has to do something else, don't always write, don't always talk to Li Ruobai, they are aesthetically tired every day.

Then I wrote about him and others to write other variety shows, and you hope to see Li Ruobai soon.

(╥﹏╥)o

Husband and wife, Sun Shao and Chen Yan rarely cooperate in reality. Ever since I was as happy as a flower. At most, it is a film cooperation.

The rest of the time is all about doing things separately.

The careers of the two will intersect, but they must also have their own careers that they cooperate with others.

It's a given.

So I can't be reasonable, I can only grasp it myself. Don't let them be separated for too long, but they can't be together all the time.

Distance produces beauty. If the two of them hadn't separated in their recent chapters, would you think so much about the big white pear?

hen~

In short, the fat man will try his best to satisfy everyone and write happily himself.

Believe in the fat man, everything will get better and better.

O(∩_∩)O