The candy this night was very coaxing, I was tired of crying during the day, and I was sad for Tang Xiaohei and Tang Xiaohua in the evening, so the little guy fell asleep quickly.

Tang Shuang can finally come to the study, tonight "Romance of the Dragon and Snake" will start the official serialization, log in to the author's area, Li Haonan's station shorts pop out one after another, the time span is from 9 o'clock in the morning to two minutes ago, there are more than 20.

Tang Shuang took a general look, and he was asking when the manuscript would be uploaded, and if it was divided into time periods, the content in the morning, afternoon and evening was very different, which directly reflected the change in the mentality of Editor Li, how tormented he spent this day~

In the morning, he happily said that the readers were looking forward to it, and the crowd was in high spirits, and told Tang Shuang to upload a few more chapters today and make a good start.

In the afternoon, Tang Shuang didn't reply, he faintly felt bad, and he didn't ask the question of uploading a few chapters, but said that it was good to have a chapter to start with.

In the evening, the editor in charge of Li was already suffering from gains and losses, and he asked in a pitiful manner, do you want to release the pigeons of the readers? If you do this, he, the editor-in-charge, will be laid off!

Tang Shuang opened the folder, he took the time to code ten chapters in the past few days, about 30,000 words, originally wanted to upload three chapters, but the first three chapters have too much introductory content, the plot is relatively bland, and he is worried about disappointing readers, so he decided to upload one more chapter and contribute the fourth chapter "Fighting people with strength is like hanging a painting, and kung fu is not afraid of guns".

In the fourth chapter, there is a description of actual combat for the first time, Wang Dynasty and Tang Zichen encounter an international killer hired by the Federal CIA, Tang Zichen is a pair of three, and the national art is against firearms, and he wins! After this chapter comes out, it can make readers feel at ease.

First, the writing style of "Romance of the Dragon and Snake" is completely different from that of "Hero", there is no Spring and Autumn penmanship, the plot is hot-blooded and compact, the martial arts plot is very meticulous, and various martial arts moves emerge in endlessly.

For example, Tang Zichen solved the evil wolf weighing nearly 200 pounds with one move of "moving and blocking", and one move "turning around" to scrap the violent bear weighing more than 200 pounds, and used snakes to pull weeds, snakes swing their bodies, monkeys steal peaches, and dragons raise their heads when fighting with the fox.

The second is to answer for the reader how the national art and firearms are fought, and whether a person who has practiced the national art for many years will be easily killed by a gun?

Shenhu's marksmanship is superb, and he shoots at ultra-close range, and only one shot is hit in three shots. Moreover, this shot was shrugged by Tang Zichen's shoulder, and he used the strength of his muscles to easily squeeze out the bullet, and the blood stopped, which was just equivalent to an ordinary person peeling a fruit and peeling the skin.

The influence of the dragon snake in the other world is shocking, and its biggest attraction lies in the description of the national arts, and in the bloody battles.

But at the same time, its shortcomings are also obvious, all plots involving life are relatively blunt, and the images of the characters are not three-dimensional and plump enough, lacking the breath of life.

For example, the description of the relationship between Wang Chao and Tang Zichen makes people embarrassed.

For example, in the first three chapters, Tang Zichen and the dynasty met for the first time, and the former appeared at every turn with titles such as "little fool" and "stupid boy".

For example, Chen Bin, the eldest lady of the consortium, "faintly sucking a bottle of Wang Laoji herbal tea", this kind of laughing scene appeared, there is a strange description of Chen Xin's "hideous face, vicious and vicious, worthy of being a returnee who returned from studying abroad", and Liao Junhua "If you can't do this thing within five minutes, the traffic police captain here will not do it" This kind of childish words.

Therefore, Tang Shuang will continue to take its essence and remove its dross in subsequent writing.

After Tang Shuang uploaded these four chapters, he replied to Li Haonan, asking him to put back a nervous heart, don't worry, since Tang Shuang promised something, he will definitely do it, and at the same time, Tang Shuang left his mobile phone number to Li Haonan.

Within a minute, Tang Shuang's mobile phone rang, and when I looked at the caller ID, it was Li Haonan's.

Li Haonan heard Tang Shuang's voice and asked in a uncertain manner, "Teacher Tang?"

The voice was too young, not like Tang Sanjian. He had seen a photo of Tang Sanjian, a person in his 50s, his voice could not be so tender.

Tang Shuang explained, Li Haonan finally understood, no wonder the style of "Hero" changed abruptly, and the style of works such as "Impermanence Sword" was completely different.

It turned out that it was not written by the same person at all, Mr. Tang took a back seat, his son inherited his father's business, and the blue was better than the blue, which made Li Haonan even more happy, a young author is obviously more promising, and he will have more common language and better dealings.

"The Romance of the Dragon and Snake" updated the text, and the fans of Lincheng Bookstore discussed it as soon as possible.

Sure enough, as Tang Shuang expected, after reading the battle plot of the fourth chapter, everyone can finally put their hearts back in their stomachs, the author finally didn't use the Spring and Autumn penmanship, the battle is not only described positively, but also very exciting, the picture is very strong, the emotions are mobilized in place, and the reader can not help but feel a sense of blood boiling while reading.

"I was worried that the hall owner wouldn't be able to write battles, but I didn't expect it to be so old and spicy, Tang Zichen killed three international mercenaries when he appeared, and the people who watched it were very refreshing. ”

"I counted it, Tang Zichen used a total of Tai Chi, Bagua and Xingyi in the course of the battle, and made six moves, one of which is to pursue, and one is to dodge, so in fact, there are only four attack moves, four moves to kill three people, [shocked face] Ten steps to kill one person is not as efficient as this, it's too terrifying, and it makes people completely believe it, the sense of reality is too strong. ”

"The gun is useless! I hit the shoulder and shake it, and it's all right~ It's okay~ It's okay~ It's okay~ [I can't believe it]. ”

"You go and ask those experts who practice martial arts, the real battle is to decide the winner in an instant, there will be no battle for an hour, or even three days and three nights, this is magic, not a real battle. ”

"The level of kung fu seems to have come out.,Divided into bright energy、Dark energy and chemical energy.,The heroine has reached the highest level.,It's very difficult for the dynasty to chase her.,But I like it.,Haha,I like this kind of difficult operation.,There's a sense of conquest.。 ”

"The so-called national art is to call the martial arts of various sects, such as Xingyi, Tai Chi, Bagua, Tongbei, Praying Mantis, Eight Poles, Poke Feet, Hong Boxing, Iron Wire, Splitting and Hanging, Playing Legs, Wrestling and many other martial arts. This is to unify the rivers and lakes and be the leader of the martial arts alliance!"

"The word "national martial arts" is good! Aside from the view of the door, don't cherish yourself, this is the only way to carry forward the Chinese martial arts. ”

""The Romance of the Dragon and Snake" should not be considered martial arts, maybe a new genre can be created, which is called national martial arts!"

"The realism of the battle plot is much stronger than that of martial arts, there is no flying around, there are no tricks to coax the unpredictable, the moves used are all in reality, what to move and block, monkeys steal peaches, everyone has more or less heard of it, but it is infinitely powerful in battle!"

"Upstairs, the monkey stealing peaches is not more or less heard, it is almost everyone who used it when they were children. ”

"You won't feel scary when you watch vampire movies, but watching Chatzhai is a nightmare when I was a child, and it has haunted me for decades. ”

"I think a goddess like Tang Zichen uses an extremely obscene move like a monkey stealing peaches, do you feel very disobedient?"

"The owner of the museum has to update it, I'm already in the pit~"