"I don't know if Qingyu is lucky enough to invite Childe to have tea and discuss literature together. ”

Brother Lin Chao lost money and shouted, and after pestering for a long time, Zhong Wen just casually mentioned a work, and Feng Qingyu actually took the initiative to invite, if he let Lin Sangongzi know, he was afraid that he would vomit blood three liters in anger.

I can't read a word, and I don't know how to "discuss literature" with you?

Zhong Wen was about to excuse himself, when Shangguan Junyi on the side suddenly smiled and said, "It just so happens that we have walked so many ways, and we are a little tired, so it is better to find a place to sit and drink some tea, so that the sister of the Feng family can 'discuss literature' with you." ”

Zhong Wen turned his head to look at her, only to see that this beautiful sister had a hint of cunning in her eyes, and suddenly felt that her head was a little bigger.

Although the nightlife of the imperial capital is rich, most of it has something to do with wine, and there are not many places to drink pure tea.

In the rich area full of green houses and gambling houses, is it drunk and hugging left and right, or a pot of tea listening to the sound of the piano that is not salty or light, and is so refreshed by the tea that you can't sleep in the middle of the night?

This is a very simple multiple-choice question.

Fortunately, the forest is big, and there are all kinds of birds, even in this rich area where people are drunk and gold-obsessed, there are always so many literati and scholars, and they boast of being one of the "gentlemen" in the wind and rain.

Under the leadership of this beautiful writer, Zhong Wen and others soon came to a teahouse with an elegant environment.

At night, the door of the teahouse is full of birds, deserted, except for the two old men in the corner who are playing chess and drinking tea, the rest of the area is empty.

In this prime location, business is so cold, I don't know how the owner of the teahouse can support it.

While thinking wildly, Zhong Wen ordered a pot of tea made from the leaves of "Seven Star Grass", brought it up and took a sip, feeling a little light, knowing that the "Seven Star Grass" used in the tea house was not enough.

"Zhong Gongzi. Feng Qingyu couldn't wait to start the topic, "Qingyu has always wanted to be able to communicate face-to-face with readers, but there are too few opportunities like this, occasionally meet a few people who claim to be readers, once they talk about the work, they are also vague, I didn't expect to have the opportunity to get my wish today." ”

As far as your writing level is concerned, that is, the talent of Lori's age, you can see that most of the so-called "readers" are coming for you, and they may not even have opened the book.

Zhong Wen secretly complained in his heart.

"Zhong Gongzi, since you have read Qingyu's works, don't you know how you feel?" Feng Qingyu went straight to the point, and even took out a pen and paper, "Please also express your heart, Qingyu wants to record it and provide some inspiration for the next novel." ”

As soon as he heard that Feng Qingyu had completed the "domineering trilogy", he didn't stop it, and the corners of Zhong Wen's mouth twitched again: "This ......"

"Little brother, I'd love to hear your thoughts on literature. Shangguan Junyi said with a smile, I don't know why, she always can't get along with Zhong Wen tonight, and she gives him a trick from time to time.

"Where does he know what literature?" Shangguan Mingyue pursed her lips and said disdainfully, but her ears pricked up, and she was faintly curious about what Zhong Wen, who could tell Journey to the West, would say.

Being stared at by the expectant eyes of several beauties, Zhong Wen was embarrassed, he didn't know what to say for a while, an old face was flushed, and for a long time, he suddenly had an idea: "Miss Feng, I have loved literature since I was a child, and I once aspired to write the first novel in the world, but unfortunately later the mundane affairs came into being, but I failed to fulfill my wish." ”

It turns out that Zhong Gongzi is also a fellow believer. When Feng Qingyu heard this, he was even more pleased, his bewitching face was radiant, and he couldn't help but be a little stunned when he saw the three daughters of Shangguan Mingyue.

"Yes, in order to prepare materials, I have studied a lot of works and accumulated some experience, if the wind girl does not dislike it, you can listen to Zhong's shallow opinion. Zhong Wen comes from the 21st century, where the whole people read online texts, and he knows a little bit about the routines of online novels, so he has to move out in a hurry, "In my opinion, although the wind girl's writing is good, the story of the novel is still lacking." ”

"Oh? Feng Qingxue sat upright with a serious face.

"It is important to know that novels are different from serious literature, and readers read novels in pursuit of spiritual pleasure and refreshment. Zhong Wen adjusted his tone and began to talk eloquently, "There are more than 10 million small words in the Great Qian Empire, and readers often choose books just by reading the beginning, and they have already made a conclusion in their hearts, so if you want to stand out among many novels, you must keep in mind the law of 'Lingjing Three Chapters'." ”

"What is the 'Three Chapters of Spirit Crystal'?" Feng Qingyu bit his lip when he heard this, thoughtful.

"'Three Chapters of Spiritual Crystals' means that the first three chapters of the novel are extremely important, as precious as spiritual crystals, and if they are well written, readers will have the desire to continue reading them, and they will spend money to buy them. Zhong Wen took a sip of tea and continued to talk, "In the first three chapters, we must create distinct story characters, build fierce conflicts, highlight cool points and abuse points, and make it ......eye-catching."

"Uh-huh, uh-huh..." The more Feng Qingyu listened, the more he felt reasonable, the pen in his hand shook rapidly, and he remembered very carefully, "Can you be more specific?"

"Take the Wind Girl's book "The Domineering Prince Falls in Love with Me" as an example. Zhong Wen carefully recalled the novel he listened to Xiao Loli recite when he was doing the task, "Although the wind and rain in your pen were born humble, but in addition to living in poverty, there is no other abuse point, and later it was directly photographed by the prince, flying on the branch and becoming a phoenix, such a plot seems a little bland." ”

"What should I do?" Feng Qingyu gradually had the mentality of seeking advice.

Shangguan Junyi and the others were quite surprised when they saw what Zhong Wen said.

"To establish abuse points in the early stage, for example, the protagonist Feng Qingyu is an official girl, her biological mother died early, and she was bullied by her stepmother and her daughter-in-law, the more miserable the better, and it is best for the stepmother to force her to marry a sixty-year-old man with a pus-covered face, forcing her to almost kill herself. Zhong Wen took another sip of tea, "After creating the ugly faces of the stepmother and her daughter, which makes the reader hate, it is the turn of the prince to appear, this prince must be the sweetheart of the stepmother's daughter, but in the end he is with the heroine, and the reader will have a happy feeling, which is the so-called cool point." ”

Shangguan's aunt and nephew and Li Yiru listened attentively on the side, the tea in the quilt was not touched much, Feng Qingyu had a suddenly realized expression, and recorded even harder.

In addition, the heroine only has one prince who likes it, so it seems a bit monotonous. Zhong Wen recalled some female frequency online articles in his previous life, and continued, "Even if he finally becomes a family with the prince, in the process of the novel, there are few noisy and joyful ones, and some competitors must be added to the prince, such as the merry talent, the cold prime minister's son, the heroic young general, and even the high-ranking emperor, all have a good impression of the heroine, so that the heroine is charming, and the reader will be more ......happy when he is in it."

"Zhong Gongzi is really every word, every sentence is reasonable. After being stunned for a long time, Feng Qingyu sighed and said, "If I could have met you two years earlier, why would Qingyu have been creating alone for so long, but there are still few readers." ”

"Don't dare, don't dare, I'm just casually talking nonsense, Miss Feng listens to it, don't take it seriously. Zhong Wen was bathed in the adoring eyes of this bewitching beauty, and couldn't help but feel a little fluttery.

"Zhong Wen, I didn't expect you to have such a thorough understanding of Xiao Yanben. Li Yiru woke up from the conversation between the two, and her soft face showed a look of yearning, "Just listening to your description, I really want to read this novel." ”

was praised by the gentle and lovely Princess Izumo, Zhong Wen was even more proud, and he deeply felt the power of the online text routine in his previous life.

"Hmph, study some crooked ways all day long. Shangguan Mingyue said coldly on the side.

"I didn't tell you about it. Zhong Wen felt that this chick had been very unfriendly to him recently, and couldn't help but glare at her.

"You..."Shangguan Mingyue's white and tender face was so angry that she was so cute.

"Alright, alright. Shangguan Junyi had a great headache, and while giving Zhong Wen a blank look, he kept patting his niece's soft twing, whispering comfort.

"Young Master Zhong, Qingyu has a reluctant request. Feng Qingyu hesitated for a while, and asked weakly, "I don't know if what Childe said just now can be written into the next book." ”

"It's just my family's opinion just now, it's worthless, if the girl doesn't dislike it, just use it. Zhong Wen said briskly.

"Thank you, Mr. Zhong. Feng Qingyu stared at him, his cheeks were slightly red, and he got up and saluted heavily, "I wonder if I will be lucky enough to accept Childe's guidance in the future?"

Zhong Wen was stunned for a moment, and before he could answer, he heard Li Yiru beside him chuckle and said: "Sister Feng, he has been living in Princess Izumo Mansion for the past two days, if there is anything that my sister wants to ask, just come over." ”

Feng Qingyu was not surprised when he heard the words "Princess's Mansion", but smiled in his eyes and showed joy on his face, as if he had secretly made up his mind.

Zhong Wen noticed that Shangguan Junyi's slightly reproachful eyes swept over his body, and he couldn't help but tremble.

For the first time, I had a feeling of strict wifeship......

In the early morning, the sky was just slightly bright, and occasionally a few crisp and pleasant bird calls could be heard in the forest.

In the courtyard of the Floating Flower Palace, the sound of dancing swords and swords was already sounding.

It was actually Nangong Ling who was fighting against Liu Qiqi and Zheng Yueting with the strength of one person.

I saw that the figure of Nangong Ling in the center of the courtyard kept flickering, flickering left and right, up and down, and conjuring thousands of clones, both true and false, teaching people to be elusive.

Liu Qiqi and Zheng Yueting have respectively learned the two platinum-grade spiritual skills of "Returning Wind and Falling Goose Sword Technique" and "Eighteen Swords of Breaking Waves", and they are very powerful when they are used to perform them.

However, in the face of Nangong Ling's unpredictable "Senluo Vientiane Divine Skill" and "Nine Palace Ecstasy Steps", the two tried their best, but they couldn't even touch her shadow.

After a while, the two girls, one red and one green, were already panting and sweating, while Nangong Ling on the opposite side was standing with his sword in his hand, his expression was as calm as ever.

"Senior sister, take a break, take a break. Zheng Yueting's chest rose and fell, and her breath was like a pillar, "Your exercise really teaches people to be dizzy." ”

Nangong Ling smiled slightly, and was about to speak, when he suddenly felt an incomparable majestic momentum descending from the top of his head, enveloping the entire compound, his body sank, and his spiritual power could not operate freely.

"Sima Xun, the governor of Southern Xinjiang, is here to visit the palace master of the Floating Flower Palace!"

Looking up, a white figure appeared above the forest outside the courtyard, standing in the air with his hands behind his back.

Lingzun!

Nangong Ling's face changed, and hundreds of thoughts flashed through his mind.