The first question is that I can directly feel that the things I have coded recently are not things at all, and I can't read them at all, so everyone can't read them either. I think it's a big problem. But I don't know what the problem is? Now it's being discussed in the group, and I hope more people can see it and come to me, leave a message directly or join the group.

The second thing is about the style of the book at the beginning and then it suddenly became a dog food text. I remember that I seemed to say it.,Now let's talk about it.,At the earliest, I wanted to have no heroine.,So I took the moving route.,But it was written and I felt wrong.,So I chose Taeyeon as a single heroine.。 And then it's even more wrong, although a large part of the reason is because I don't have an outline, which is just not right anyway.

Now there are several reasons for the discussion and summary of these problems in the group, first, Kim Taeyeon has appeared too much, my ability is poor, there are no other excellent supporting roles, and there is a lack of other interaction points. Second, there is no suspense in my book, there is no long-term plot, and when Yoon Ming catches up with Kim Taeyeon, there is nothing attractive about it. Thirdly, there is nothing better to be third. There are enough questions, just a few more. I mainly come to the water according to Yin Ming's career ideas. I don't know anything about feelings. To put it bluntly, I can't think of any twists and turns next, and there is no suspense.

In addition, a batch of busy people during this time, there was nothing in my mind when I coded words, and I coded 2000 words and then handed over the same thing.

I don't dare to ask for leave, I think if I ask for leave again, I really want to be a eunuch.

Anyway, you tell me what the problem is, the more detailed the better, and then tell me what you want to see and what you want to see. Directly post this chapter here or add a group to tell me.

I don't want my first book to have a good beginning. Even though it sucks, I still want to save it.

Finally, thank you to the book friends who are still reading my books and recommending them to me. Thank you for your support.

ps: Today I also said that I haven't opened a single chapter for a long time, and I slapped me in the face.

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