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The two stunned eyes widened, staring straight at the black roof made of thatch and mud, and the old quilt covered with his body was already dark yellow, and he couldn't see his original appearance, and there was a faint musty smell. ”

The other person next to him was the second brother Han Zhu, who was sleeping very sweetly, and from time to time there were bursts of snoring of different degrees from him. ”

About half a zhang away from the bed, there is a mud wall made of yellow mud, because of the time, the wall cracked a few inconspicuous slender holes, from these cracks, faintly heard the nagging and complaining sound of Han's mother, occasionally mixed with Han's father, smoking the "click" and "click" of the dry tobacco stick. ”

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Guo Ming felt a little disappointed after reading the first chapter, because there was really nothing outstanding in the first chapter, in addition to introducing the identity and background of the protagonist Han Li, there was also a mention of the Seven Xuanmen.

Could it be that this is an immortal cultivation sect?

Because at the end of the first chapter, it was written, "Han Li never thought that the amount of money he had lost meaning to him after going out this time, he actually embarked on an immortal path that was different from that of mortals, and walked out of his own path of cultivating immortals. ”

It is precisely because of this sentence that Guo Han has the confidence to continue watching.

He wanted to know what the protagonist's fairy avenue was, and how different it was.

But after reading three chapters, Guo Ming's sense of loss in his heart was even worse, because Qixuanmen was only a martial arts sect, and the protagonist's personality made him dislike it, too wooden.

This is different from the protagonists of the novels he usually reads, the protagonists of ordinary novels are either extremely arrogant, or decisive, or they are wise and close to demons, although these are all the protagonists themselves think, but they are also better than Han Li!

And Han Li doesn't have any special identity at all, his parents are not dead, he doesn't have a childhood sweetheart with a big background, his mother hasn't been arrested, he is not a genius whose dantian has been abolished, he is not a traverser, he has no system, he has no golden finger for the time being, he is just an ordinary mountain village boy who can no longer be ordinary.

This setting made Guo Ming very uncomfortable.

And writing martial arts is too old-fashioned, isn't it, what era is this? You still write martial arts, and you also write martial arts on online websites, your heart is really big!

Anyway, how does Guo Ming think of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals", how unhappy, "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is far lower than his expectations.

In his heart, the plot of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is like this, the protagonist gets the cultivation of the gods, the gods block and kill the gods all the way, the Buddha blocks and kills the Buddha, and there are beauties along the way.

The contrast of reality made him powerless to complain.

When a person is unhappy with a book, he will feel that the book is bad everywhere.

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So he posted a comment.

"I've heard of Fuyun's name for a long time, and today I see that it's a vain name, what is the "Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" written about?The plot is not compact, the writing is very rubbish, it's just useless, I really don't know why so many people praise his stinky feet, it seems that now is really the era of a little white, but in my opinion, Fuyun doesn't even have the level of writing Xiaobaiwen, at most it is the level of primary school students。。。。。。。 ”

sprinkled hundreds of words, Guo Ming criticized Fuyun as worthless, and criticized "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" as incomplete, and in his eyes, Fuyun and "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" are rubbish.

He originally wanted to see "Confucianism and Taoism" written by Fuyun, but now that he saw "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals", he didn't plan to read it, he would definitely stain his eyes, so it was better not to read it.

"Floating clouds and garbage? only at the level of elementary school students... ”

Fueled by some people, the comment immediately went viral.

Because the contrast is too great, in the eyes of many people, Fuyun is a clear stream in the online literature industry, whether it is "The Big Star of Rebirth" or "Confucianism and Taoism", he has always been seeking innovation and change, but now he is said to be only "primary school student level".

Many people find it hilarious.

"How is that possible?"

"Fuyun is only at the level of elementary school students, you tease me... ”

"If even Fuyun is only at the level of primary school students, then aren't we even inferior to primary school students, who said this, why does it sound so funny?"

"That's the biggest joke I've heard this year. ”

"It is estimated that there are too many people who can't eat grapes and say that grapes are sour. ”

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Many people began to watch "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" curiously, wanting to find out the reason from this book, to see what kind of book would make readers make such vicious comments.

Many people are also disappointed after reading the three chapters of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals".

"The level of floating clouds has dropped!"

"What the hell is written?"

"It's really spicy! I can't believe it's written by Fuyun. ”

"Is this really written by Fuyun? It can't be that you are looking for a gunman, many gods are doing this now, but it's easy to smash your own signboard!"

"I can't believe it, this book is actually written by Fuyun, the level has dropped too fast, this book can't be compared with Watermelon's "Xiuzhen" at all, even if it doesn't even deserve to lift shoes. ”

"The floating clouds disappointed me, Bai has been waiting for him for so long, he has been waiting for him in vain. ”

"Watermelon is a big win this time, "Xiuzhen" has already swept "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals", there is simply no suspense at all. ”

"It must be ghostwriting, Fuyun must have found someone else to ghostwrite, this writing is too bad. ”

"Jiang Lang is exhausted! Fuyun, this is Jiang Lang's talent. ”

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Many people began to speak out.

"After the identification, there is no doubt about the Fuyun elementary school students. ”

"Garbage floating clouds, get out of the online literature circle. ”

"It's called a great god like this, I'm bah!"

"It's too rubbish to write, it's still Erlengzi, it's Han Li, it's Qixuanmen, it sounds so earthy, don't treat everything as innovation. ”

"It's really a waste of my tip, and Fuyun compensates me for my tip. ”

"I've never read such a garbage book, Fuyun is a special elementary school student, not even a primary school student. ”

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However, there are also fans of Fuyun who argue for him.

"I think this book is quite good, I like Han Li's character, down-to-earth, step by step. ”

"I think we should believe that Floating Cloud is big, when has he let us down. ”

"This book should be a slow heat, everyone should wait first, in fact, this book is quite interesting, and the Xiuzhen novels I read are different, I'm really curious what kind of world the Floating Cloud Conference will show us?"

"The world hasn't shown the tip of the iceberg yet, and it's too early to tell. ”

"The name of the book is "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals", and it must start from mortals, anyway, I still have a sense of substitution, I don't know why I don't like it so much. ”

"As always, I support Fuyun and I am sure he will not let us down. ”

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But the rhetoric was quickly drowned out in a wave of criticism.

At this time, Watermelon was drinking with several of his friends, looking very happy.

"This time, I let out a bad breath, thank you. ”

Watermelon said to his friend.

This time, the rhythm of "The Legend of Mortal Immortals" is brought up by watermelons.

His friends said, "What are you talking about, we are friends!"

"Haha, nice to work with. ”

"It was a pleasure to work with. ”

Watermelon toasted to his friends, his face flushed and he looked very excited.

A cold light spread in his eyes: "Fuyun, this time I will make you irreversible, and you will never be able to turn over." ”

Few of those who offended him have a good end now, and he wants to make those who offend him pay a heavy price.