Since Wu Zichen and others couldn't put forward any constructive suggestions, Jiang Shuiyuan didn't bother himself, and used his knife indiscriminately in his novels. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info just added a title, reprinted a copy, and then sent it to Liu Chenyu to see what she had to say.

Liu Chenyu took Jiang Shuiyuan and handed over a thick pile of printer paper, the first thing he saw was the huge word "love letter" printed on the cover, he immediately panicked, and while looking around, he hurriedly rolled up the printer paper and put it in his schoolbag, and reproached with a red face: "You, what do you want to do? This is at school, teachers and classmates are looking at it!"

Jiang Shuiyuan smiled and said, "What's wrong at school? What happened to the teachers and classmates when they saw it? That's just a novel I wrote, called "Love Letter". ”

Liu Chenyu breathed a sigh of relief, but at the same time he was relaxed, his heart was also filled with a faint sense of loss. She forced a smile and said, "I see. You didn't make it clear, it scared me a lot, and I thought you were going to ask me to help you send a love letter to a beautiful woman!"

Jiang Shuiyuan couldn't help but say: "Even if you want to send it, it's for you!"

"Just know nonsense. Liu Chenyu smacked him angrily.

Jiang Shuiyuan knew that Liu Chenyu was thin-skinned and couldn't joke, so he hurriedly went straight to the point: "I took the time to write a novel a few days ago, and I wanted to ask the squad leader to help me take a look, and by the way, I would like to give some opinions." ”

"Are you going to use it for this year's New Concept Essay Contest preliminaries?"

"No, it was someone else who asked me for a manuscript, and I couldn't refuse, so I randomly pieced together tens of thousands of words to give an account. ”

Liu Chenyu frowned slightly: "Since it was someone else's request, I think you either don't write it, or you can write it well." You're a well-known writer now, and scribbling will affect your reputation. ”

Jiang Shuiyuan said confidently: "So I ask you to help take a look, I just want you to check for me!"

Liu Chenyu nodded solemnly: "Okay, I'll take a closer look!"

Jiang Shuiyuan suddenly felt that something was wrong: should this girl be like the elementary school Chinese teacher who changed her composition, from word choice to sentence formation to sentence grammar, word by word button? If she was drawn all over the paper with red circles, would she change it? Or not?

Liu Chenyu said again: "If you don't come to me today, I'm still going to look for you!"

"Oh?" Jiang Shuiyuan couldn't help but be surprised, "Squad leader, what are you looking for me?"

Although your grades have been very good, you can't take it lightly at this critical moment, after all, the final exam is not like the monthly exam, the grades and rankings are to be entered into the file, and the qualification will be determined in the future. You have been taking too long of leave this semester, so everyone thinks this is an opportunity, like Li Zhili in the first class and Huang Ruhui in the fourth class, they are all gearing up and ready to make a comeback!"

Jiang Shuiyuan chuckled a few times: "Then let them let the horses come! I want to see who is in the world today." ”

Liu Chenyu reminded again: "Don't be careless! When it comes to mastering knowledge points, in fact, there is not much difference between everyone, and the key lies in the flexible use of knowledge points. If you say that the test paper is more difficult, you may have an advantage, and you may be able to separate Li Zhili and Huang Ruhui by 230 or 30 points; once the test paper is relatively simple, it is very likely that there will be a difference of only a few or more than a dozen points, and the negligence of a calculation question or a multiple-choice question can determine the ownership of the first grade. Don't be like Guan Yu, and finally come to Jingzhou carelessly!"

Jiang Shuiyuan became serious at this time: "Thank you squad leader for reminding me, I will definitely be careful, and I will never give others a chance to defeat because of my own negligence!"

"In short, going to the examination room is the old saying, people are difficult for me, I am not embarrassed, people are easy for me, I am not careless!" When he said this, Liu Chenyu's squad leader showed his full face, "By the way, I heard that you are going to participate in the selection competition of the Quanfu Physics Olympiad recently?"

Jiang Shuiyuan said: "I should go, right? After all, I have participated in the Olympiad training for so long, and I always have to try my luck." ”

Liu Chenyu pondered for a moment and said, "It's okay to participate, it's an opportunity to show yourself after all." In addition to the Student Council, you have also participated in the New Concept Essay Competition, the Chinese Studies Debate, the Biology Olympiad, the Mathematics Olympiad, the Chemistry Olympiad, and the upcoming Physics Olympiad. Although you have achieved good results in every competition, I always feel that a person's energy is limited, and instead of being proficient in everything, it is better to concentrate on one or two things to the extreme, such as winning the first prize in the New Concept Essay Contest again, or winning the first prize in the National Biology Olympiad? Isn't that better than winning the first prize in the whole house four or five times?"

Speaking of this, Liu Chenyu suddenly smiled heartily: "Of course, these are all my own nonsense, just like the old farmers in Sanjia Village thought that the emperor used a golden hoe and the queen ate persimmons every day. If you think it's all useless nonsense, you can simply ignore it. ”

Jiang Shuiyuan replied: "Squad leader, your suggestion is very good, I will take it seriously." ”

Liu Chenyu waved his hand at Jiang Shuiyuan: "Then you should go back and review quickly." As for that novel, I'll pay you back as soon as I can. ”

"Then thank you in advance! When the time comes, in the afterword of the novel, I will definitely mention the squad leader, and you will help with your sword. ”

Liu Chenyu said "as soon as possible", and it was really as soon as possible. The manuscript given by the source of the river in the afternoon was returned early the next morning. Jiang Shuiyuan roughly flipped through the pages and found that almost every page had traces outlined in red pen. When he saw Liu Chenyu's rabbit-like red eyes again, he was inexplicably moved in his heart: "You have worked hard, squad leader!"

Liu Chenyu rubbed his eyes: "What's the hard work? Your novel is very good! After reading it, I cried a lot, you see, my eyes are swollen from crying!"

"Why do I feel accomplished when I hear you say that?"

"Because you know how to bully girls!" Liu Chenyu snorted angrily, "Look at the novel you wrote, you are definitely not as honest as you seem, and secretly you don't know how many pure little girls you have deceived!"

If the things in the novel are the author's own life, then wouldn't Aoyama Gomasa (the author of "Detective Conan") have to encounter murders every day? And Jin Yong, do you think his old man will descend the dragon with eighteen palms or the nine swords of Dugu?"

"Sophistry!"

Jiang Shuiyuan is afraid that the more he describes, the more he argues, the more he can't tell, after all, Pu Xiaoxiang is sitting in front of him now, and there is no shortage of himself in the campus gossip, so he can only change the topic: "Class leader, do you have any suggestions for revision after reading it?"

Liu Chenyu said carefully: "I have read relatively few literary works, and I really can't put forward the criticism and revision opinions in the hole, but as an ordinary reader, I think your story is still very, very good, and it is very touching after reading it." In this sense, the novel is very successful. If you really want to talk about the problem, I think it lies in the language. ”

"I want to hear the high opinions!"

"The storyline of your novel is fresh and touching, and the emotions described are delicate and beautiful, so it is best to complement it in language, the cleaner and purer, the more delicate and timeless, the better. But you often can't help but quote scriptures in your writing, and the character dialogues often have a slippery and playful tone, which will seriously affect the reader's feelings when reading. I've sketched out all the things that I don't think are appropriate, can you change it a little?"

"High! It's really high!" Jiang Shuiyuan couldn't help but give a thumbs up, "You still say that you can't put forward any point-to-the-point criticism, and this opinion is completely to the point and to the point!" -- What other opinions do you have?" )