Chapter 162: A Work with Full Marks [Four More Requests for Subscription]
"It's only 75 points, which is a bit low for him. ”
Ma Qiwei said regretfully that he had high expectations for Zhang Chu, and such an essay can only be regarded as excellent if it reaches more than 80 points.
For this future student, Ma Qiwei didn't think about helping to intercede and ask for favors.
Chen Yingsong blew his beard and glared and replied: "Cai? This score is not low, mainly because his book is written about the life of Indian teenagers, religion, etc., and the plot entry point is relatively slow, and I am a non-believer, so I can't understand the religious content he described." ”
He waved his hand, "Forget it, you guys continue to talk, I have to hurry up and finish this book, if I don't finish it, I always feel that I owe something to the shortcomings." ”
"You old fellow, go ahead. I waited until after work to ask Director Deng if I could borrow Zhang Chu's book to the hotel. ”
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Back in the judges' room, Chen Yingsong couldn't take a break, I heard that other groups had already read so many works, and he hadn't finished the first part yet, so he had to hurry up.
In the follow-up content, he saw an extremely real survival picture of a shipwrecked teenager, whether it was his face when he saw the stockpiled supplies in the lifeboat after being hungry for a long time, or thank you after frantically stuffing cookies into his mouth.
It all looked very real, especially the supplies on board, as if they had been inspected on the spot, anti-seasickness pills, canned fresh water, compressed biscuits, wool blankets, solar stills, life jackets plus whistles, hand flares......
[The impending death is terrible enough, but worse is that death is still some time away, and during this time, all the joy you once had and all the joy you could have become so precious, and you see very clearly that you are losing everything. 】
The desperation of the Indian teenager is revealed between the lines, and the shadow of death hangs over him.
Thanks to Richard Parker, this tiger is both a threat, a companion, and a spur!
Chen Yingsong didn't expect that the plot of rafting above the Pacific Ocean would be so long, so specific, and said that it was a good fantasy rafting!
It doesn't look fantastical at all, but it looks like a shipwreck survival textbook.
However, this part of the content is narrated by Pie in the first person, without the author's annotations and observations, and it is done in one go, with ups and downs, and very ironed.
This nearly 100,000-word story is filled with all the dangers and obstacles that can be encountered to survive at sea: on a stormy night with thunder and lightning, sharks and whales try to knock over the lifeboat, and the passing giant ship not only misses the signal of the lifeboat, but also sets off waves that almost drown the boat.
In this part of the content, Zhang Chu has no shortage of genius strokes, describing the sea, the sky, the clouds, the underwater world, and those upside-down cities full of various lives, all of which are vividly displayed in his pen.
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Chen Yingsong watched it with relish, he felt that the 75 points he gave at this time were indeed a bit low, and judging from the current content, it should be able to rise to the point of 85 points!
The sounds of the outside world could not affect his reading, but at this time, a magical island made him think deeply.
Although there are many wonders in the world, there is a magical island full of swamps in the vast Pacific Ocean!
The plants on the island fill his belly, and the non-running bogcats are Richard Parker's meal, but every night Richard Parker has to go back to the lifeboat, much to Pie's surprise.
Eventually, when Pie sees a pair of 32 adult teeth wrapped in leaves on top of the tree, he suddenly realizes that this is a cannibal island, and every night, the water on the island digests the animals that come close!
Chen Yingsong suddenly had a feeling that this island should have a different meaning, and it was by no means an ideal paradise.
As Chen Yingsong thought, Pie resolutely escaped from the island, and it was because of this move that Chen Yingsong looked up a few points.
[I climbed down from the side of the boat, not daring to let go like this, I was so close to being rescued, but I was afraid that I would drown in the water two feet deep. I looked up to see how far I was left, and that look up gave me the last glimpse of Richard Parker, because that's when he jumped over me......
At that moment I was sure he would look back, he would lower his ears, he would roar, but he didn't behave at all, his eyes were fixed on the jungle, and then he leapt forward, and just disappeared from my life forever. 】
Finally saved!
Chen Yingsong breathed a sigh of relief, here in the Gulf of Mexico saved and the first hospital people came to visit him before and after, the structure is quite complete.
It's just that there are still several pages of content in the back, which makes him quite curious, what other story can be told after Pak is saved?
Seeing this, Chen Yingsong was completely surprised!
In the last part, in the face of investigator RIMOTO's suspicion and interrogation, Pie tells the story of this fantasy drift on his body, but they don't believe it.
So Pie told another story, and in this story there were no hyenas, no orangutans, no tigers, and no zebras.
When the freighter had just sunk, there were four people on the lifeboat, a Chinese sailor with a broken leg, a French cook cooking on the freighter, and Pie and his mother.
However, the cook kills and eats the sailor in front of Pie, and then kills Pie's mother, and it is Pie who survives in the end, so you can imagine the end of the cook.
This story was told with the frightened expressions of the two RI themselves, and Chen Yingsong couldn't help but feel a chill in his back after reading it!
It wasn't until Pie told the last so-called apocryphal second story that the past plot flashed in Chen Yingsong's mind one by one, and all the previous meaningless jokes became foreshadowing, making the whole story coherently connected.
Breaking the previous fantasy adventure story full of harmony and love, a somewhat cruel and ruthless bloody story is displayed in front of you!
Which story is true?
Chen Yingsong had a vague answer in his heart, no wonder he chose those four animals, it turned out that each of them had its own meaning.
"This Chu is really amazing! 100 points is too little!"
The two stories represent both good and evil aspects of human nature, and although they are cruel facts that are difficult to accept, in the process of telling the first story, we have been hinted countless times that the second story may be true.
But in the end, the two investigators chose to believe the first story.
In everyone's heart, there is a Richard Parker, who will roar out of the cage when he is in danger, but he will depend on people for his life.
There is a tiger in the heart, sniffing the rose.
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