In front of Nanako, Cui Ye was like a Miyoshi elementary school student listening to the teacher's lecture, and listened very carefully to Nanako explain to him one by one the shortcomings in the work and the places that need to be modified. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

"In my conception, the protagonist goes through various hardships and misfortunes, and then slowly changes his mentality during this period, from a kind ordinary person who is a little weak, because of despair and tribulation, and finally his personality changes, and he becomes a warrior-like existence, which is the biggest selling point and core.

Therefore, in the early and middle stages of the work, all the plots and foreshadowing revolve around this aspect.

With this in mind, I am ready to arrange a very important role to witness and even guide the growth of the protagonist along the way, and I already have a clue for this role.

It's the vampire who attacked the protagonist! I think so, first of all, that vampire must be a powerful and special charm character, so the role of this vampire should be a beautiful big sister, with a kind of evil and dangerous royal sister atmosphere.

Then, when she attacks the protagonist, I am going to arrange an accident for her to die, but not really dead, but in another way, merging with the protagonist and surviving in the protagonist's subconscious and soul.

And my arrangement for the protagonist is like this, after he was attacked, he finally survived, and inherited the special power of the royal sister vampire, and became a half-human, half-vampire existence.

In this way, the initial foreshadowing has been completed, and the protagonist has gained power, but because he is a human being, he has no previous combat experience, and he is very resistant to this power in his heart, so the power he gets is not complete, and he will not use it, but it doesn't really matter, because the seeds of power have been planted.

As long as Cui Ye is in the future plot direction, you will think about it well, gradually guide the protagonist to become familiar with this power, and set up a lot of tribulations for him, so that he can sublimate in the extreme in suffering and despair.

At that time, it will be the biggest climax in the early and middle stages of the work, after being tortured, persecuted, and falling into despair, the protagonist and despair explode.

The hardships and misfortunes he has suffered all the way from childhood to adulthood have completely made him collapse and despair, at this time, he is no longer the cowardly and kind ordinary person he was before, he will be crowned king!

The specific plot direction, I can only think of it now, how to do it, it's up to Cui Ye to yourself, when you modify the work to this standard, I will personally handle it to help you complete this climax!"

Nanako only said a few words, and built a complete plot in Cui Ye's heart, although the specific plot, Nanako did not have too many words, but only with the plot of this main line, Cui Ye can see that as long as it is created, it must be a good work above the level line!

And the specific plot, Nanako has no suggestions, and Cui Ye is embarrassed to ask Nanako to help him again, after all, this is his own work, if he even has to ask Nanako to help with this kind of thing, then what else do you want him Cui Ye to do?

"Well, thank you, thank you, Mr. Lin. Cui Ye couldn't stop saying thank you to Nanako, if it weren't for Nanako's guidance and careful guidance, how could he have determined the path of the work so easily.

So don't look at Nanazi's lips and just say a few words, but just a few words, but let a work wash away the lead and sublimate the extreme realm, such kindness, but the grace of enlightenment, Cui Ye He said a few words of thanks, isn't it too deserved!

Nanako nodded and said, "Well, then you can go back and continue to revise, pay attention, in addition to the ones I reminded you, ordinary plots, you also have to design carefully, especially the interaction between the characters, as well as the personalities of the characters, and the plot involved."

These plots and characters, you have to let them play the corresponding role, don't be too superficial, and you don't have to habitually imitate the giants, you haven't modified the work before, the shadow of the giant in it is too heavy, and even the plot characters have some shadows of the characters in the giants, which is not good. ”

Cui Ye replied solemnly: "Okay, I will remember." ”

The reason why Cui Ye unconsciously imitated the giant before was entirely because he had been studying the manuscript of Attack on Titan and wanted to learn some comic knowledge from it, and because when he conceived the plot, Cui Ye felt that it was difficult to think of any useful inspiration.

That's why he thought about using the plot in the giant to modify it to fill in the plot, but now he knows that this approach is not advisable, because in the end, he can only make a nondescript four dislikes.

is not as exciting as the original Giant, and it does not have its own style, and it will lead to many loopholes and deficiencies in the work, and over time, the plot will completely collapse and can no longer be controlled.

With such a lesson from the past, and with Nanako's guidance today and the plot outline that she gave in a single line, Cui Ye feels that there is indeed no need to deliberately imitate and borrow anyone's works.

What he needs to do is to try his best to fill in some ordinary and excessive plots, and he doesn't need to rack his brains to conceive such amazing ideas and bridges, he just needs to take one step at a time, steadily, and arrange the foreshadowing proposed by Nanako step by step.

Cui Ye already knows the specific path, in this way, when creating, it will undoubtedly be much simpler, what he has to grasp is only the rationality and stability of the plot, even if the plot is too bland, there is no problem, as long as there are no major problems.

Moreover, Nanako also said that she would personally help herself handle the climax of the protagonist's extreme sublimation, so that Cui Ye was even more happy, you know, for the conception and grasp of this sadistic and tearful plot.

Even in the Dragon Kingdom, and even in the whole world, if Nanako recognizes the second, no one dares to recognize the first!

Because of this kind of abuse plot,The whole world is Nanako who dares to write like this.,Dare to draw like this.,If you don't believe it.,Look at the works on the current market.,Except for Nanako.,Whose works are this kind of abuse?

Now the comic atmosphere of this world is still in the mode where the protagonist is invincible, the protagonist must be lucky, pretending to be forced to slap his face all the way, and embarking on the road of Long Aotian.

Even those well-known cartoonists, their works are just more interesting, and the realm of pretending to be forced to slap their faces is higher, and there is a kind of invisible pretending, which is the most deadly meaning.

They're very good at this kind of model, but if they are asked to draw this kind of plot of abusing the master like Nanako, it will cost them their lives.

Isn't it because people like to read comics and novels because they want to see the passionate careers of the characters in the works, and they will put themselves in the characters and follow the characters all the way to the top, which will bring them a sense of enjoyment and achievement.

But if you abuse the master, try it! Abusing the master is equivalent to abusing those officials and readers, and if someone lets you be beaten, tortured, and persecuted, how will you feel? Both sentences of scolding are light, and your heart will definitely not be happy.

Well, except, of course, those with special hobbies.

So they don't dare, even if it is because of the needs of the plot, the protagonist must be subjected to a little tribulation, but they don't dare to go too far, and after the ordeal, they will immediately let the protagonists get benefits and get new strength, so as to offset the unhappiness of the officials.

And Nanako, but it is a wonderful flower that grows in such an environment, out of the mud and not stained, and likes to abuse the master when it is okay, this is a dead work, and most importantly, Nanako is always a dead man!

Don't you see, in Nanako's works, except for the sadistic tendency in the eyes of the god of death, which of the other works does not have such a bridge?

Baguio, who whispered under the sword of Zhu Xian, 'Just for love, although there is no resentment in death', although there is no specific performance among full-time hunters, Xiaojie will also be angry and blackened in the future, which is distressing!

Attack on Titan, who has not officially met with his friends, let the protagonist Alan watch his mother being brutally eaten by giants in the first episode, and the days to come will be also difficult, and breaking hands and feet is the norm.

In the same way, Sword Art Online, another one that is also prepared for the comic contest, do you dare to say that it has no abusive tendencies at all? What are you kidding, because of the teammate who was wiped out by the group, only he survived, and in the later stage, he was stabbed to the ground by the scum management authority dog, and almost gave himself green.

There is another one, Liu Pleias, the protagonist of the life in a different world from scratch, who can be called the most tragic protagonist in history, good guys, he has to die several times on average in each episode! And in the selection of the evil king, the scene of Liu Pleiasion's desperate death is still unforgettable!

Thinking about it, if he replaced himself with Liu Pleiades, Cui Ye felt that he would have a mental breakdown and be tortured crazy!

But it is such a heartbreaking plot, the effect caused by it, but the unexpected success, officially because of such despair and predicament, led to the great success of the work, and was put on the altar by people!

Of course, in the end, it was inevitable to be condemned by the group and send blades.

And Nanako's statement on this is like this: Everyone misunderstood me, you only saw the despair and predicament they encountered, but ignored what they gained!

The ancients had clouds, and those who achieved great things must first suffer their minds, strain their muscles and bones, starve their bodies and skins, empty their bodies, and act chaotically.

The reason why I want them to go through such tribulations is so that they can have great success and achieve great things!

No matter what you say, this is always love, and I, Teacher Meowmei, am the warrior of love!

And this warrior of love is ready to show her unique love for the characters in her works, such a thing, Cui Ye said, although this may be a little sorry for the characters in his pen, but it is all because of love, I have to do it.

[The protagonist of the work: Cui Ye, I have a sentence that my mother sells batches, I must tell you!]