Chapter 230: Don't offend women

It's about his comic dream, and Cui Ye doesn't care if others don't want to see him, so he let Jiang Mi, Nanxi and others circulate his works one by one, and then ask them what they think. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

"How is it?Xiaomi?Do you think there is something wrong with my Dark Blood Clan?" Cui Ye asked as he looked at Jiang Mi with a blank look, his face very eager.

Jiang Mi opened her mouth, a little unbearable to hit Cui Ye, she had the same first impression as Nanako, and only read the content of the first sentence, and determined the inappropriateness of Cui Ye's imitation.

Although Cui Ye deliberately modified the world background and deleted and added some new elements, his work of the Forbidden Blood Clan has never gotten rid of the category of giants, and there is a strong giant wind in the content.

What's more, the content of this first episode is exactly the same as the plot of the giant's opening, the similarity of the setting is more than sixty percent, and the plot has not changed significantly in the gods and demons, such a work, how could the audience buy it.

If Cui Ye really published this work and Attack on Titan at the same time, Jiang Mi is sure that in less than three days, Cui Ye will definitely be sprayed with blood!

Two extremely similar works, the first reaction of a normal person must be that one person imitates the trend, or plagiarizes another person's work, and it is easy to distinguish who is the one who follows the trend.

Look at the fame, look at the quality and content of the work! Unfortunately, Cui Ye has no advantage in these two aspects, how can he, a person who has not even reached the level of a formal cartoonist, compare his fame with Nanako, the new rookie master Meow Mei teacher?

What's more, the most important thing about a work is its own content and quality, and in this regard, Cui Ye's Dark Blood Clan was thrown out of several streets by the attacking giants, and there is no comparison at all!

Cui Ye saw that Jiang Mi hadn't spoken for so long, and the eagerness in his heart could be imagined, "What the hell is going on?" Xiaomi, you say something, give me a suggestion, so that I can have a bottom." ”

"Uh...."Jiang Mi's words came to his lips, but in the end he didn't say anything, his childhood sweetheart, although because of Nanazi's Nanazi's affairs, she had some dislike for him, but her previous friendship was still there, and she really didn't want to speak out to hit him.

"Stain, is there anything bad to say, since Jiang Mi doesn't want to say it, then let me tell you. Cheng Yao on the side suddenly said loudly.

She was very uninterested in Cui Ye a long time ago, thinking that at the beginning, when the Eighteen Comics Department was first established, several people met for the first time, and at that time she also felt that Cui Ye's kid was not bad, although he looked a little sickly and feminine, but there was a bit of a creamy taste.

Cheng Yao's first impression of Cui Ye was quite good, but unfortunately Cui Ye didn't take her in his eyes at that time, she was very arrogant, although her face was polite and elegant, but who could he hide from his hidden arrogance?

Good guy, Cui Ye was really the general treatment of the protagonist, his family background is good, he looks like some girls, and he is just a boy in the entire eighteen comics department.

With his childhood sweetheart Jiang Mi by his side, there is also a high-quality legal Lori Nanxi in the eighteen comics department, this unfolds, who dares to say that it is not the treatment of the protagonist?

But he didn't think about it, Nanazi and Cheng Yao, who were ignored by him, these two people are not simple, Nanazi needless to say, just talk about Cheng Yao, although she looks much more ordinary than Nanazi, but it is really not a fuel-efficient lamp!

I already knew Cui Ye's contempt, so the little bit of good impression I had about Cui Ye was thrown away by her in an instant.

Then, it was Cui Ye who accidentally guessed that Nanazi was not simple, and then had a utilitarian mind, and finally was taught to be a person ruthlessly.

Among them, Cheng Yao also found an opportunity to pit Cui Ye fiercely, which can be regarded as relieved, and now Cui Ye took the initiative to put such an opportunity in front of her, how could she let it go?

So when she saw that Jiang Mi was reluctant to speak, she felt that it was time to go on her own, young man, this was your own fault, and she couldn't complain about my sister and me.

Seeing Cheng Yao's appearance, Nan Xi couldn't help but give Cui Ye a pitiful look, this guy is really unlucky, Cheng Yao's mouth can definitely spray you doubt life!

"Ahem..."Cheng Yao cleared her throat and said, "Cui Ye, since you took the initiative to let us help evaluate your work, then I will take it seriously, the friendship between the two of us is one thing, but this is another!"

For comics, we have to treat it with piety and a solemn attitude, although once it comes to this aspect, you can't mix any private friendship in it, public is public, private is private, you have to distinguish it, so you know?

I'm a straight-hearted person and don't like to beat around the bush, so if you were to ask me to say what I thought, I'd definitely be outspoken, say whatever I want, and go straight to the point...... So, Cui Ye, are you sure you want to hear what I have to say?"

Except for Cui Ye, Nanako and the others all glanced at Cheng Yao obliquely, and they still had a private relationship? What kind of friendship do you have with Cui Ye?

And your last question? You said so, even if Cui Ye didn't want to listen to your evaluation, he could only agree, right?

Sure enough, the corners of Cui Ye's mouth twitched, and he also realized that things were not simple, but everyone said that directly, what else could you let him do?

And Cui Ye also attaches great importance to his first opening Virgo, although even if he feels that Cheng Yao may have some ill intentions, he still wants to hear it, her evaluation, anyway, has already been hit by Nanazi, and it doesn't matter if she comes again.

Let's just let the storm come more violently! I can stand it! Cui Ye thought to himself.

Then, he found that what he thought was too simple, compared with Cheng Yao's poisonous tongue, Nanazi's level was completely the level of middle school students, and Cheng Yao, she was the boss of doctoral students.

Before Cui Ye could prepare, Cheng Yao spoke directly, "If you want me to evaluate, there are only two words..... Garbage!"

"Poof... cough cough. Nan Xi, who was drinking water, couldn't hold back her breath and squirted out, and the fine water foam refracted a small rainbow in the sun, although she had long thought that Cheng Yao might be a little unkind when she spoke, but she didn't think about it, and she was unkind to this point!

didn't leave any face for Cui Ye, and he didn't say anything about the scene, just started with a garbage sentence, this is to God!

Cui Ye's eyelids jumped wildly, although he had expected it, Cheng Yao's unceremonious evaluation still made him can't help but feel angry.

It's so angry, but you still have to keep a smile on your face, *&%@#T$#$%, secretly scolded in her heart for a while, Cui Ye's heart finally calmed down, but Cheng Yao's next words once again made him lose his mind and have endocrine disorders!

Cheng Yao said lightly: "Well, I'll start from the beginning to talk about the evaluation of Cui Ye's work, the name of the work is called the Dark Blood Clan, the Dark Blood Clan?

Don't you think, this name is very LOW? meaningless font combination, and it sounds like a strong schoolboy flavor, like a super shameful and childish middle school and bullshit move name that is tried to use his poor vocabulary when other elementary school students are fighting. ”

"Ahem, cough, cough..."Nan Xi was choked by Cheng Yao's words again, and she reminded softly, "Pay attention to the words, be elegant, don't be so vulgar." ”

Cheng Yao secretly rolled her eyes, elegant? Hehe, when spraying people, what kind of elegance do you want!

After spraying the name, Cheng Yao began to talk about the plot and plot of Cui Ye's work again, "Also, the plot in your work is completely modified according to the giant, right?

Not only can it not get rid of the influence of giants, but also randomly add some messy plots, messy and boring, and the characters who appear are also applied to the characters in the giants.

You look at the protagonist in your work, you obviously want to portray him as an ordinary person, but after being bitten by a vampire, he gets the power, and he shouts all the vampires all day long, and no one is left, well, did you temporarily load him with an Allen template?

And that powerful vampire hunter captain, forgive my eyes, I looked sideways and vertically, and I didn't notice how much difference he was from Captain Levi in the giants!

So this work of yours is obviously a magic version of Attack on Titan!

And you're a demon, you don't have the bloody and wonderful taste of giants at all, it's all an imitation of the breath, and it's not like it at all, every character and plot looks far-fetched, making people look unusually awkward.

So, I'm giving you this evaluation, it's rubbish! A completely clumsy parody work, a failure!"

Hiss... Nanazi gasped, this Cheng Yao's poisonous tongue level is stronger than the ghost Nanazi! Look at it, after saying a few words, Cui Ye, who is about to squirt, doubts life!

Looking at Cui Ye's stunned appearance, he was obviously shocked by Cheng Yao's words and gave up thinking, in fact, his work, in general, has many shortcomings, but there are still a lot of merits in it.

For example, his revised world view and settings, it can be seen that he is still very attentive, quite rigorous and interesting, and some of the plots are also remarkable, very novel and interesting.

If you can get rid of the plots that are obviously too heavy by the shadow of giants.,If you think about it well.,It's actually a good work above the level.。

It's a pity that Cheng Yao deliberately skimmed over these things and didn't mention them purely to hit him, but just picked on his shortcomings to criticize him.

So, don't be complacent about women like creatures, they are sometimes unreasonable.