Liang Qichao usually cherishes words like gold, and if he can let him say such a long paragraph at a time, it can indeed be seen that he is very excited.

"It's a writing technique like never before. Ma Yinchu took over the conversation, "Tut, it is said that Zhuang Yan's writing is simple and the narrative calligraphy is straight, but at such a beginning, you can see his skills." ”

After Liang Qichao and Ma Yinchu's joint explanation, Yu Hai and they completely understood the power of this beginning, and the most important thing is that such a beginning is something they have never seen before. To exaggerate a little, this is tantamount to setting a precedent.

"Zijian, you and Ziyan have always been very close, and you don't usually talk about writing?" Liang Qichao suddenly asked.

Wang Lijian was stunned for a moment, then shook his head, "We rarely talk about these things, and he never talks about them. ”

"Then you should take the initiative to talk. Liang Qichao said with a choke of words, "This is a great benefit to you." ”

Wang Lijian didn't know how to answer, and sometimes he did want to discuss literature with Zhuang Yan, but Zhuang Yan didn't seem to like this kind of topic. And when chatting with Zhuang Yan, he always forgets the identity of the other party and treats him as a simple friend.

Ma Yinchu was stunned when he saw Wang Lijian, and said with a smile: "Brother Zhuo Ru is right, you, you should secretly learn from him." But then again, Ziyan this kid really has a deep hidden feeling, when we met before, we chatted and he fooled me that he was not good at writing, and the stories he wrote all relied on imagination. Now it seems that this guy is actually hiding. ”

Liang Qichao nodded: "After all, I am a literature major, how can my basic skills be flawed." ”

Ma Yinchu didn't agree with Liang Qichao's words, he retorted: "This has nothing to do with whether it is a literature major or not, there are more students majoring in literature in our country, not to mention undergraduates, even masters and doctors, but I don't see that there can be another Zhuangziyan." ”

Yu Hai interjected at this time: "I agree with Lao Ma's words, didn't you Yan University have an expert who particularly likes to teach people's skills before, and I haven't seen him have this kind of narrative ability." ”

Ma Yinchu said with a smile: "What you said is not right, people are not Yanda now." ”

Yu Hai also smiled: "I know, that's why I said it was before." ”

"Okay, okay, just a beginning, we've been watching it for ten minutes, if it's all at this speed, we won't want to eat tonight. Come on, let's look at the back first. Wang Lijian took the initiative to say.

When a few people heard it, they also felt that it made sense, and they came back to the computer to look at the following.

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"Zhuang Yan is doing this, I don't tell a story at all, half of this big chapter is written about scenery. He Xiaoya leaned on the back of the chair and complained to Ren Lian.

Ren Lian was lying on the bed frowning and thinking about things, but when she heard He Xiaoya's words, she laughed, "Not really, at least after reading the first chapter, you know that there is such a small place called Chadong, there is an old man on a ferry, with a granddaughter and a big dog." There is also the shipkeeper Shunshun, and he also has two sons, one is called Tianbao and the other is called Susheng. ”

He Xiaoya thought about it and felt that it made sense, but she still felt that something was wrong, "But after saying this in such a large paragraph, we still don't know what the story is going to say." ”

Ren Lian shook her head, He Xiaoya was still a little young after all, and she was a little impatient, how could she smash Huanglong as she read a book. Although Zhuang Yan's new book is completely different from the previous narrative style, it is also a normal way of expression, at least from this first chapter, it can be seen that Zhuang Yan has done a more detailed job in detail.

In particular, the description of the scenery of this small place in Chadong is beautiful and smooth and fluent, which is not seen in his previous books. It's a change, it's not a good thing, it's a different feeling.

In addition, at the beginning of the book, she always felt a little unusual, but she couldn't say the specifics.

"Xiaoya, you usually take Chinese classes, does the teacher have any opening skills for telling you stories?" Ren Lian suddenly asked.

He Xiaoya blinked her eyes and nodded: "Of course, isn't this all necessary to teach, including the three elements of characters, plot, and environment, as well as the four processes of beginning, development, climax, and ending, of course, this opening skill has to be said." ”

"Then what did your teacher say about how to start a story?"

He Xiaoya thought for a while and said: "I said a lot, I can't remember everything, but what I said more is what reveals the beginning of the center and the beginning of the straight point essay title." ”

Ren Lian nodded, and then asked, "Then what kind of technique do you think the beginning of Zhuang Yan's book is?"

"What kind of technique?" He Xiaoya was stunned for a moment, then turned her head to look at the computer screen again, and looked at the beginning again, "A few years later, Cuicui will sit in the newly renovated White Pagoda...... Supposed to be a revealing centric beginning?"

"What center is revealed?"

"......It's revealed," He Xiaoya couldn't continue, "It doesn't seem to reveal anything, but it's not right to point to the title, and I don't know what he wants to talk about." ”

Ren Lian smiled, "yes, I didn't say anything, but do you think this beginning is nonsense?"

"Nonsense?" He Xiaoya shook her head, "It's not nonsense, at least after reading this sentence, I want to know what happened to Cuicui, why did she sit in front of the White Pagoda and think about the Dragon Boat Festival a few years ago, what happened to the Dragon Boat Festival that year." ”

"That's right!" Ren Lian herself seemed to open her mind, "Just such a simple sentence has made you so interested." In fact, he didn't say anything, but it was as if he had already explained what happened a few years ago and a few years later, and we were unconsciously aroused. ”

He Xiaoya nodded as if she didn't understand: "It's a bit of a meaning, although this first chapter didn't say anything, but after reading it, I still want to know what happened to Cuicui during the Dragon Boat Festival two years ago." ”

Ren Lian changed from lying down to sitting up, and said with a smile, "Actually, this first sentence is not just selling Guanzi, at least after reading the first sentence, you also know that Cuicui should be the protagonist." ”

"That's right. He Xiaoya said with a smile, "And the description of the scenery in this first paragraph also made me a little interested in the place of Chadong." The video posted by Zhuang Yan last time, was it taken in this tea mountain?"

"Seems to be. Ren Lian nodded, "It seems that he went to that place last time to write this book." ”

He Xiaoya smiled: "That's not for sure, maybe Zhuang Yan went to that place first before he wanted to write this book." ”

I'm back.,There will be three chapters today.,Thank you for your care and support.,Thank you for the reward from your laughing friends.,I didn't expect there to be a reward without an update.,It can be said that I'm very moved.。