Although he had been mentally prepared for a long time and obviously admitted defeat, when he really finalized the script of Su Xiaofan, Dong Jiatong still had a strong sense of loss in his heart.

In this way, her role as a screenwriter in the team is basically zero, let alone writing her name on the signature of the screenwriter of the work......

So what's the point of her participation in this competition?

Thinking of this, she wished she could get out of here immediately, and felt that every second she stayed in was more embarrassing.

"Although the script is out, this is actually just a framework, and we have to add some flesh and blood to it to make the story fuller. Su Xiaofan saw her embarrassment from Dong Jiatong's flickering eyes, so he said,

"I just read your script, I think you are very full of the character, and the psychological activities of the characters are also in place, I want to tell you my general thoughts, and then you will improve the script, the screenwriter will sign the two of us, I am in front and you are behind, how about it?"

After Dong Jiatong heard this, he was a little overjoyed, but soon showed hesitation and whispered: "Won't this be a little ......?"

"It's okay!" Su Xiaofan interrupted her, "We are a team, it's just an extra signature, you can't deny what you just paid because I wrote something more in line with the title of the competition, right?"

"Actually, your script is also quite good, we can use it to shoot homework in the future if you revise it, what do you think?"

Dong Jiatong thought about it for a while, and then nodded.

Ye Yang and Brother Feng couldn't help but look at Su Xiaofan with strange eyes.

Generosity is on the one hand, and on the other hand, because he will take into account the feelings of his team members and do not cross the river and tear down the bridge.

Su Xiaofan said this after some consideration, for him, it is nothing more than adding the name of Dong Jiatong to the screenwriter's signature, and it is behind him.

But Dong Jiatong has proved her strength through the script just now, Su Xiaofan's advantage is the setting and conception of the plot, but the grasp of the character's psychology and personality, Dong Jiatong is definitely above Su Xiaofan,

If you combine the advantages of the two, this script will definitely be able to go to the next level!

And...... The two also agreed before, and the cost of this shooting was all paid by Dong Jiatong.

If this kicks out the owner's father, who will pay for it then?

He only has 10,000 yuan in the card, and he still has to eat and pay the rent......

Regardless, it's a good deal.

Su Xiaofan picked up the script and explained to Dong Jiatong: "I think there are still a few deficiencies in this script. ”

"First of all, the transformation of the male protagonist is a bit blunt, the motivation is not strong enough, and I think there is almost a bit of external stimulation; secondly, in the last scene, the relationship between the characters is a little disjointed; and finally, it is in the difficulty of filming...... There are too many scenes and actors, and I am worried that even if I don't stop for more than two days, I may not be able to ensure that the quality of the filming will be completed. ”

Dong Jiatong nodded, and then began to think about the questions one by one.

"The first question, I think you can quickly explain the protagonist's predicament through narration, and then your protagonist's lines are actually very shocking, I think if you use another person to tell the protagonist, the protagonist will be more touched, so his transformation will be logical. ”

Su Xiaofan heard Dong Jiatong's analysis, and hurriedly nodded approvingly: "Well, it's just a small change, it feels really different, and this point is so decided for the time being." ”

"As for the second and third problems, I think there is a way to solve them - merging characters and scenes!" Dong Jiatong saw that Su Xiaofan approved his first suggestion, and his confidence suddenly increased, "In this way, whether we are preparing or shooting, the pressure will be much less, and I think that dancing girl is a good choice." ”

Su Xiaofan closed his eyes and pondered for a moment, then suddenly patted his thigh: "You reminded me that we can not only do this, but also further enrich this story and characters, do you remember the role played by Best Actress at this year's Oscars? I think it's a good reference!"

"If you continue to enrich the story like this, won't the third question arise again?" Dong Jiatong also understood what Su Xiaofan meant, she was also a little excited, but at the same time a little hesitant.

Su Xiaofan looked at Dong Jiatong, then at Ye Yang, and said in a deep voice, "Do you want to fight?"

The two nodded without hesitation.

"That's still a hair!" Su Xiaofan stretched out his palm, "Then let's fight!"

Dong Jiatong and Ye Yang also hurriedly folded their hands on the back of Su Xiaofan's hand, and even Brother Feng stretched out his hand with a smile, and the four of them shouted loudly:

"Fight!"

The two photographers who witnessed all this were also a little excited at this time,

Finally, they were able to take some interesting pictures......

……

At the same time, in the room separated by only two walls from Su Xiaofan,

The script framework of Chinese opera is almost out.

Unlike Su Xiaofan, the script of Huaju was discussed by the entire team of six people, and then written by the screenwriter.

The advantage of this is that it can brainstorm ideas, but the disadvantage is also obvious, that is, because the screenwriter is interfered with by others, it is easy to write a script that lacks personality.

When the screenwriter finished typing the last line of the script, Cao Xiaoshan, the director of Huaxi, did not watch it first, but turned the screen to Hao Qian somewhat solemnly, and said solemnly:

"You read it first, make sure you can really accept such a script and play it well?"

Haoqian nodded, and then read the script carefully.

After a long time, he took a deep breath and replied earnestly, "I can accept it, and promise to play it well!"

The people around him were suddenly in awe.

Cao Xiaoshan turned the laptop in front of her and read the script carefully......

……

Dong Jiatong locked himself in the room and changed the script for two hours, and entered the script into an electronic version, and then woke up Su Xiaofan and entered the final round of script discussion.

At this point, it's basically a matter of checking the details to see if there's any problem.

This session took another hour, discussing and revising at the same time, and finally briefly corrected the lines to check that there was nothing very awkward or incoherent.

After the script was determined, it was mainly Su Xiaofan and Ye Yang who discussed the script, and Dong Jiatong took the initiative to assume the role of assistant director, and in the process of discussion between the two, they began to draw up the shot list and announcement.

On the other hand, Brother Feng also counted the support that the production needs to provide according to the notice sheet written by Dong Jiatong, including the venue, costumes, props, actors, and crew members who need to be used......

After these desk work were implemented, it was already one o'clock in the morning, and the high-intensity mental activities made Su Xiaofan and Dong Jiatong a little mentally exhausted.

After arranging the next step, the two went back to the room to rest, and Ye Yang followed Brother Feng out of the hotel.

The two of them had to work overnight to secure the filming location, assemble the crew, and prepare for the actor auditions in the morning.