Looking at the system in front of him, Meng Ke had a feeling of beeping a dog.

When he knew that he was poisoned milk, his heart was very broken,

Because poisoned milk means to praise people, it's like someone slaps you, and you have to smile and stretch out your right cheek to let people beat you.

It's cheap!

But now this ......

It's just going to die.

I can't say anything well, I will be scared when I come up,

It's okay to have a situation like an online article, after all, no one knows who, and if you are scared, you will be scared.

But what if it's a film and television drama?

Everyone is in the circle, and if you scare others, you may come over and smash the glass and set it on fire one day.

This pit daddy system is completely to play his rhythm!!

"Damn, if I knew this, I would have been a street fighter, and I would never be a coercion anymore. ”

With tears streaming down his face, Meng Ke held his mobile phone,

After waiting for two minutes, Xu Yilan didn't reply,

sighed, he didn't bother to say anything, he quit PP directly, and said silently in his heart, "I'm sorry girl, brother really didn't mean it, for me and for yourself,

Let's just be wronged first. ”

……

Qingxian.

Xu Yilan's house.

In front of the old desktop computer, Xu Yilan looked at the reply given to her by "Meng Gongzi" on the screen with tears in her eyes.

Litter.

Shit.

It was the harshest comment she'd ever heard.

Yesterday she came back and thought about a new book all night, and it wasn't until three o'clock in the morning that she had an idea.

In order not to disturb her grandmother's sleep, she wrote 6,000 words on her mobile phone in the bed, but in exchange for such an evaluation as shit garbage.

This......

This...... It hurts so much!

Let's go it.

The tears in Xu Yilan's eyes fell on the table,

But soon, she wiped away her tears, "Come on Xu Yilan, you will definitely be able to conquer this reader, for the next book, you must sign a contract, and you must get the manuscript fee!"

Delete the document.

Opening the document, Xu Yilan began to organize the outline again.

Even though her heart was very sour, but being scolded by Meng Ke like this, the thoughts in her mind were much clearer.

"This story is a story about a girl with a clairvoyant eye, but I feel that my setting is too complicated, it's martial arts, it's cultivation, yes, you have to cut one!

Well...... Just be simple, don't cultivate the truth,

And my main line, which only started with more than 300 chapters, this one is too slow, it should be advanced. ”

The brain began to ache again,

At this moment, Xu Yilan can finally understand why she watched some interviews with great gods,

When talking about opening a new book, many people are saying that it is so difficult and that they feel a headache to think about.

"It turns out it's true,

When I used to write, I never felt a headache, and I wrote wherever I wanted.

Now that I've been scolded, I'm more willing to think, think about things, think about it, I still can't write, no wonder I wrote millions of words and hit the street. ”

The more she thought about it, the more Xu Yilan felt that the things in her head were about to come out.

At the same time, the stronger her gratitude to Meng Ke in her heart.

In this world of online texts, it's easy to get likes.

Especially the praise and praise from peers, but there are very few people who are really willing to teach, and when you encounter it, you should be grateful!

Therefore, she really doesn't hate Meng Ke for scolding herself now, but is very happy to be instructed by someone like Meng Ke, 300 is ordered, what a dazzling achievement!

Don't say 300 equally, she has 100 equally, and she has to write until the end of the world!

……

Afternoon.

Meng Ke turned on the system again.

[Binding work: daughter smile]

[Original author: Tianxia Guiyuan]

[Binding: Xu Yilan]

[Activation Progress: 21%]

[If it is not activated successfully for 30 days, it will be unbound, the book will be invalidated, and the host will get 10 days of bad luck]

"Huh, there's an improvement, what kind of operation is this?"

From 20% to 21% now, there has been a 1% increase.

"Is there any hidden function?"

Just when Meng Ke hesitated, at this time, PP rang again.

[Xiaolan Yiyi]: "Big, this is the outline I wrote, you can take a look, can you not." ”

After the conversation, a document was sent.

Inside is a very detailed outline, from the plot to the character setting, there is a very detailed description of the hierarchy.

【Scan ......】

[Reviewing document ......]

[Similarity with the original book: 30%]

[Judgment result: garbage!]

"Damn, what is this?"

Seeing the prompt popping up by the system, Meng Ke was really a little panicked,

From yesterday to today, this pit daddy system seems to be very active, and he didn't say a word when he died in the past, but now he even helps scan?

"Sure enough...... Is this the right way to open it......"

was a little broken in his heart, but Meng Ke didn't indulge in the system.

Since it is judged to be garbage, then, he does not need to be polite.

"Is this what you think? can you think about it, spend more time, use your brain, mainly in the gold finger, plot, rhythm control!

Don't indulge in any character setting,

It's like shit, no, it's worse than shit!

I think you should quit this industry, this is not for you at all!

You're not a writer at all, and I didn't find anything cool after reading the whole story!

The heroine is so ugly, what do you want to do?"

Cracking sound.

Meng Ke scolded Xu Yilan again.

However, this time, he still decided to give some opinions outside of the system's judgment, but it was only relative to Shuangwen, and other ...... Let's realize for yourself!

[Xiaolan Yiyi]: "Actually, I think so too. ”

Huh?

I feel that the mood is a little wrong!

After seeing Xu Yilan's reply, Meng Ke stopped the car in time and continued to wait.

Soon, Xu Yilan sent another message.

[Xiaolan Yiyi]: "Seriously, I've been writing for a long time, and for this time, I've been wondering if I'm capable.

Can you eat this bowl of rice,

But now it seems that it really doesn't work.

It's not okay to sign a contract, let alone anything else, you're so right, my brain may not really be suitable for this aspect. ”

“…… Are you trying to make me feel guilty?"

[Xiaolan Yiyi]: "No, no, I'm just telling the truth, I think I'm really bad, my friends around me have started to work and have a stable income,

And I insisted on the so-called dream, and I really felt that it was useless.

Maybe...... I really don't fit. ”

"It's not that it's not suitable, it's that you haven't found the right way,

There is no conflict between writing and work, you can write while looking for a job, but then the progress will be very slow.

But, judging from what you've given me in the past two days, it's a bit of a doorway,

It can be said that you now know how to write routines, but they just can't be coherent, or you can't find a good entry point. ”

[Xiaolan Yiyi]: "???"

"Will you be all the time?"

[Xiao Lan Yiyi]: "...... In fact...... I don't like to read, and I've been obsessed with it for the past two years. ”

Don't like to read?

If you don't like to read, why don't you write a hairy one!

There are a lot of articles in the world, why can't you even write the most basic things?

Die, you are!

Where did you get the confidence to think that you can eat this bowl of rice!

Who gave you courage?

Liang Jingru!!

A mouthful of old blood almost sprayed to death, Meng Ke really wanted to rush over and suck this Xu Yilan to death now,

But in the end, he held back.

For the sake of the face of the system!

"Then why are you lazy?"

Many people write because they are lazy, don't want to find a job, don't want to work overtime and don't want to stay up late,

If Xu Yilan is this kind of person, then he will definitely not help this kind of unmotivated person even if he is desperately punished by the system.

[Xiaolan Yiyi]: "No, I'm not lazy, in fact, I can't say clearly,

Maybe it's because I didn't have friends at school for a while.

Sometimes I was bullied and didn't dare to go home and say it, so I could only write a diary, and for a long, long time, I barely spoke.

Only words accompany me,

Later, slowly, I started to write, and I didn't know what to write, but I just felt like I wanted to write anyway.

From the initial short story to the later long story,

I also submitted articles to magazines, but I didn't have them, and then unconsciously, writing became a part of life.

Until now, I don't know how to give up.

[smile] Isn't it hypocritical for me to say this?"

"Hmm. ”

Pressing his mouth, Meng Ke replied against his will.

No wonder the system chose this girl, it turned out to be a stupid woman who had worked hard for a long time.

[Xiaolan Yiyi]: "Haha, I know, so I never say it, just say that I am a jack pendant." ”

"Actually...... Have you ever thought that the reason why you are not successful is not that you are not suitable, but that you have not thought about it?

More often than not, you don't read it. ”

didn't let Xu Yilan continue, Meng Ke asked rhetorically.

[Xiao Lan Yiyi]: "Well, I think too. ”

"My suggestion is, don't write it for the time being, go and read more about what others have written,

The female frequency focuses on romance, but more importantly, it is the main line,

You have to learn how others can become stronger, so you can copy it, and I don't recommend following the trend, because you have written too much, and you don't need to temper the text. ”

[Xiaolan Yiyi]: "The main line?"

"Yes, it's what you want to write, where are the highlights, around a story, and you have to have a score in your head. ”

[Xiao Lan Yiyi]: "Hmm. ”

"It's really not good, you can write a few chapters first and come to me to see, where are you going to send it?"

[Xiao Lan Yiyi]: "Alley Chinese Network." ”

Alley Chinese Network, which is the largest female frequency website in China in front of you.

"I'll go and see the books over there first, otherwise I'm not very good at guiding you, don't think too much about it today, first take a look at the top ten books on the best-selling list,

But don't look blindly, but grasp the key things to see,

Especially when you look at it, which subject matter is close to yours,

For example, if you are an ancient saying, then specialize in ancient sayings, and think when you look at it,

What is the other party's gold finger and what is the rhythm, before clicking on it, look at the table of contents. ”

For the first time, Meng Ke taught what he knew.

[Xiao Lan Yiyi]: "Well, thank you. ”

"Good. ”

After getting off the PP, Meng Ke turned on the system again.

[Binding work: daughter smile]

[Original author: Tianxia Guiyuan]

[Binding: Xu Yilan]

[Activation Progress: 78%] (Good words are warm in three winters, bad words are hurtful and cold in June, and the coexistence of encouragement and criticism is king)

[If it is not activated successfully for 30 days, it will be unbound, the book will be invalidated, and the host will get 10 days of bad luck]

"I'm rubbing, Lao Tzu scolded people and collapsed before you said that,

Why did you go earlier!

Even if he has already realized the cheats of the system, Meng Ke still has a feeling that he will be played to death sooner or later.

But this feeling is only for a moment,

After talking to Xu Yilan, he now wants to help this girl stand up in this industry more and more.

More than just a system task!

Closing the system, Meng Ke opened the alley Chinese network.

After briefly familiarizing himself with the general layout of the website, he found the best-selling list.

At a glance, the top ten lists are all ancient sayings, there are very few modern romance stations, and all the labels are crossing.

Never mind

Let's take a look first.

One copy.

Two copies.

Three copies.

has been writing online articles for a long time, and his speed of sweeping the list is much faster than others.

Especially after reading Xu Yilan's outline, he didn't bother to read those books that were very different from Xu Yilan's settings, and just wandered around the catalog and withdrew.

An hour passed.

Two hours passed.

Three hours.

Three and a half hours.

Meng Ke dropped the Chinese gateway in the alley.

"Sure enough, although it is a change of time and space, the current routine of the female frequency is still stuck in the male frequency more than ten years ago.

And the pace is generally much slower,

Compared with the past, the female frequency here is too old, if Xu Yilan takes the Shuangwen route, she will definitely succeed. ”

After learning about the website, Meng Ke was more confident.

Open PP again and click on Xu Yilan's dialog box, "I took a general look, your idea is incompatible with this website." ”

Xu Yilan didn't speak,

Meng Ke didn't dare to wait for her to speak,

From the conversation just now, this little girl should have been injured by her own blow, and if she strikes again at this time, maybe she will really have to withdraw from the circle.

Hurriedly, Meng Ke continued, "But this is a good phenomenon,

Because then you can stand out,

I look at yours, you should want to go invincible style, the protagonist has a golden finger, all the way to counterattack,

In this way, you will be able to stand out in the female frequency. ”

[Xiao Lan Yiyi]: "Really?"

"Of course it's fake! Do you think you can get ahead without working hard?

Update 4,000 words a day, and still want to get ahead of this garbage update speed?

Do you know how hard the writers of the female frequency work?

The bigwigs work so hard, what qualifications do you have not to work hard?

If you want to get ahead, you must first make 10,000 a day, and secondly, you must make various settings before opening a new book, and then counterattack all the way according to the settings.

Think about it if you're the main character,

What you'll do. ”

Another scolding, Meng Ke ruthlessly shattered Xu Yilan's daydream.

[Xiaolan Yiyi]: "[Covering your mouth and laughing] [Covering your mouth and laughing], I suddenly found that there is a sentence that I am very useful to you said. ”

"Which one?"

[Xiaolan Yiyi]: "It's that sentence that counterattacks all the way,

Wait, I'll change the outline first, and then you can take a look, hahaha, I suddenly feel like I've found a way! Thank you, Meng Dada, Mo Da. ”

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