Chapter 361: Quatrain

The host Zhang Qihe said with a smile: "I didn't expect Mr. Lin to be a talent, no matter whether the poems he writes are good or bad, I think everyone should applaud and encourage this inferiority child to have some courage." ”

The corners of Miss Miao's mouth twitched: "When I was in college before, there was a man in the class, in front of the history professor, who was very confident, and recited a poem he wrote, but as a result, he was so ashamed that he never dared to come to class again. ”

"That's a good point. People are often limited by their own knowledge, and they feel satisfied when a work is first completed, but they don't know that in the eyes of truly talented people, it is no different from garbage. ”

Yan Yufang sighed: "Just like an American writer a while ago, he confidently wrote a poem of five rules, which was warmly sought after by the people, but when that poem reached China, it was almost sprayed with blood. ”

Song Wen and the others were also very apprehensive.

Especially Lin Jun, he knew that Lin Nan was just an undergraduate graduate from an ordinary university, and he behaved very normally when he was in school, at most he had excellent grades, but he never showed a talent in literature.

Writing poems and lyrics is not achieved overnight, it requires the accumulation of profound skills, and many professors in the Department of Culture dare not claim that they can compose poems.

When everyone was thinking differently, Lin Nan had already picked up the brush.

After a few moments, the majestic regular script leaped onto the whiteboard.

Yan Yufang was surprised. She hasn't read the specific content of the poem yet, but the calligraphy alone is enough to be proud of ordinary people.

At first glance, it looks like a lofty mountain, and a vigorous momentum is blowing in the face, which can be called pleasing to the eye.

As the saying goes, words are like people, Yan Yufang suddenly wondered if her psychological observation was wrong.

Lin Nan's words and strokes are like the shadow of a chivalrous sword, full of killing and majestic, this kind of pen and ink brings people a shock, it is by no means something that can be cultivated overnight, and must be exercised all year round.

Yan Yufang snorted coldly in her heart: "What is the point of winning if you write well, if you can't win the award, it will be the icing on the cake after all, and it depends on the content of the poem." ”

When Yan Yufang looked at the whiteboard, the first pair of poems that caught her eye were,

'Two orioles are singing green willows, and a line of egrets is in the sky. ’

As a top student who graduated from Qinghua University, Yan Yufang couldn't take her eyes off almost instantly, and even her breathing became short.

Yan Yufang took a deep breath, and an unbelievable feeling rose from the bottom of her heart.

Looking at the other female guests, although many people couldn't understand the subtleties, they were also surprised.

Yan Yufang gritted her teeth, just the first two sentences of this poem made her have to admit that this is an absolutely qualified poem.

'With yellow lining green, white lining green, so that the colors in the poem appear brighter, the vigorous breath of spring, a few strokes to describe so expressively...'

Yan Yufang's eyes widened and she gasped.

However, the most important thing is the following, if the following two sentences do not correspond to each other, the 'momentum' that will be created will be perfect, and it will become a donkey's lips against the horse's mouth.

"Hehe, I don't believe that you happened to write the first two sentences, and you can still take shit luck and neatly fix the back. ”

Yan Yufang stabilized her mind and continued to look at the poems on the whiteboard.

The two lines of poetry caught my eye, and in an instant, Yan Yufang stood on the spot, as if she had been hit by a heavy hammer!

"How is this possible? How can a young man write such a poem?"

The next two sentences are.

The window contains a thousand autumn snow in Xiling, and the door is berthed in the Dongwu Wanli ship.

When the complete poem came into Yan Yufang's field of vision, her whole mind shook wildly, like being struck by lightning, and a picture seemed to appear in front of her.

Under the verdant green of spring, the yellow orioles chirp.

A small wooden boat rowed across the lake, and on it, two people were drinking a little wine.

A person with black hair like a waterfall, standing with a sword, and his momentum is monstrous.

The other looked lazy, leaning back on the canopy.

Yan Yufang didn't know why this picture appeared in her mind.

I don't know how she imagined the two people on the boat, and even imagined their faces so clearly.

What frightened her even more was that Yan Yufang found that the black-haired and cold young man on the boat was so similar to Lin Nan in front of her!

Although the body and clothing are very different, the light of the eyes is exactly the same!

Yan Yufang looked at the poems in shock, and her mouth gradually filled with bitterness.

"The snow in the next link corresponds to spring, and the momentum is like standing on the top of the mountain and seeing Kyushu, which may also imply some other artistic conceptions, but I can't understand it. ”

Indeed, as Yan Yufang thought, in the fairy world, the poet is a person from the Tianwu Kingdom, and the last sentence is a metaphor for his hometown.

Looking at everyone in the field, they are all stunned, even if they don't understand the poems, they also show a sigh.

Lin Nan said lightly: "Expert Yan, what do you think of this poem?"

Looking at Lin Nan's face, a strong sense of frustration rose in Yan Yufang's heart, and she suddenly remembered Jiang Shao's entrustment, if Lin Nan was asked to win back a city in poetry, Yan Yufang would not be able to explain it when she went back, and her heart tightened.

As a graduate of a prestigious school, Yan Yufang's eyebrows furrowed, and soon analyzed the inappropriateness in the poem.

She breathed a sigh of relief in her heart, and then sneered: "Your poem looks amazing at first glance, but in fact, there are many inappropriate places. ”

"Oh?" Lin Nan was a little surprised.

Everyone also looked at Yan Yufang curiously.

They think that their knowledge is not as good as that of this talented man who graduated from a prestigious school, and maybe there are really some loopholes and they were caught by experts strict.

Yan Yufang organized her language for a while, and said solemnly: "First of all, your first sentence, two yellow orioles singing green willows. ”

"Can a bird be discussed? One bird, two birds, there is no such usage in the language, it should be changed to 'only'. ”

"Secondly, the word 'shang' on a line of egrets in the blue sky is too direct, and it should be 'in'. ”

"Furthermore, the window contains the snow of Xiling, how can the window contain the snow? This metaphor is too unvivid, outside the window, it is more reasonable. ”

Yan Yufang smiled confidently: "So, the last verse that I revised should be like this." ”

"Two yellow orioles are singing green willows, and a line of egrets is in the blue sky. ”

"Outside the window, Xiling is snowing in the autumn, and the door is berthed in the Dongwu Wanli boat. ”

As soon as this poem came out, everyone was stunned and experienced it carefully.

After a while, Miss Miao clapped her hands and smiled: "Wonderful! is worthy of being a strict expert, it is just right to change it like this, it seems that Mr. Lin's skills are still a little weaker." ”

Everyone also looked confused, and felt that Expert Yan seemed to be very reasonable.

Zhang Qi said with a playful smile: "Sure enough, after expert analysis, the masterpiece brought by Mr. Lin is nothing more than that." ”

"I can't even tell the difference between two orioles and two orioles, I'm afraid that if I didn't do well in elementary school, I came to recite poems and write lyrics? ”

Yan Yufang also sighed: "This is a common problem of young people, they can't even walk, so they have to learn to run." ”