Lin Asakusa is really writing a drama, I don't talk about the specific details, but I can only describe it in a general way, mainly the ups and downs of a few girls in a class. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

There are those who cry and laugh have their youth, but there is only youth. Don't care what happened, don't care how things are reflected in the aftermath, anyway, it ends at the most youthful time.

Speaking of this script alone, a slight modification can be published in magazines such as novel monthly newspapers, but if it is used to make a movie, there is no good chance, and it will definitely sink to the bottom.

More than an hour later, Zhang Wei said: "It's a good story, you can revise and submit, but the film is not conflicting enough and not attractive." ”

"Movies are all about appealing to people. Hayashi's point was a bit surprising.

Zhang Wei said: "After reading your story, I have an idea, but this ...... of yours Still can't shoot it. ”

Lin Asakusa pondered: "Then I'll contribute." ”

Zhang Wei said: "Remember, don't invest in online magazines, you must be physical, and you must be able to publish good magazines." ”

This is Lin Asakusa's business, have a meal together at noon, and go back to their respective homes after the meal. Zhang was afraid to start changing the script.

He must write that story because he wants to remind parents and children to stay away from those men with ulterior motives!

This is the reason why he has always wanted to add funny elements, more laughter and more simplicity, which is easy to attract people to watch.

Now the idea has changed, since the original script is really difficult to modify or add, simply rewrite it according to the original meaning.

The story must have a protagonist, if you don't meet Zhang Xiaobai, that position must be Zhang Zhenzhen. Now Zhang is afraid that he has changed, he doesn't want Zhang Zhenzhen, who met a bad man in reality, to meet him again in the movie, which is unfair to Zhang Zhenzhen. So, the first role was played by Zhang Xiaobai.

Of course, there is a premise for this matter, Zhang Xiaobai must agree to the performance.

However, the optimistic Zhang is afraid that he will not consider those for the time being, and it is the right way to write the work first.

In order to attract people, the story must be happy and hateful, that is, after Zhang Xiaobai's character is treated unfairly, he must face it head-on, and he must clean up the bad guys.

In the story, Zhang Xiaobai met a personal scumbag liar, anyway, he was deceived and lost, and then encountered all kinds of unfair treatment, such as pregnancy, such as being ridiculed, such as whatever...... Later, he rebelled in anger!

In this story, she is not the only one who has been deceived, there are several little girls, who know or don't know, or who are deceived or forced to sell ...... In short, it is still a lot of misfortune in the original story.

Such a story is written, with a main line, a beginning and an end, conflicts, expectations, and cool points, which definitely meets the conditions of a blockbuster film. For the time being, it's just a little bit, there are no stars.

Just like the last time I wrote the story, it was written so fast that the story existed there like flowing water.

It's a pity that I couldn't finish it, there are always many things to be busy, first of all, the learning attitude of these monkeys in the concentration camp, he has to supervise.

When spring is in full bloom, there are always many things going on. Life is a weed in spring, and it must grow unbridled no matter what.

Zhang is afraid that he is watching the students study, and the big dog is barking outside, and he goes out to see, he is the father of a madman. When he saw Zhang, he was afraid and shouted.

Zhang was afraid to walk over and stop, and the madman's father gave up his hands and clenched his fists: "Teacher Zhang, lend me some money." ”

Zhang was afraid to say that he would not borrow. The madman's father is begging again. However, Zhang was afraid that he would not agree. The guy thought for a moment and said, "I'll sell my son to you, just 20,000." ”

Zhang was so angry that he ignored that bastard stuff and went back to the RV.

Zhang was afraid to hurry up and update the article, so he wrote it in the car, and it was lively to write, and the madman's father came again, and there were four young people with him.

This time, not only Zhang was afraid to go out to see, but even the madman brought Lao Pi, and many classmates in the class came out to watch. Madman is so angry, it's all like this, and you still come to school to throw me at the person?

The madman's father begged Zhang to open the door and let him in, but he still borrowed 30,000 yuan, saying that he would work to repay the money.

Zhang was afraid that he didn't believe it at all, but he looked at the maniac's expression and asked the four young people, "How much do you owe?"

A tall man said, "About 20,000."

"So many?" said Zhang Wei, frowning.

"It's not much, it's only 20,000 yuan," the madman's father said, "Just lend me once, and I will definitely pay it back when I have the money."

The young man outside spoke loudly: "It is natural to repay debts, if you are not willing to help, then we can only say sorry." ”

Zhang Wei asked: "Is it to cut off your hands or feet?"

"Chop your hands. The man replied.

Zhang was afraid and said, "Then cut it." The madman gritted his teeth and turned around and went back to the warehouse. Lao Pi hesitated for a moment and ran back.

Zhang was afraid to speak to the people outside again: "See, no one really cares who you are, just leave as soon as you know each other." ”

The madman's father shouted, "Son, save my father once, teacher, you save me once, my son gives it to you." ”

Zhang was afraid and said, "I found the wrong person." He said to a few young people outside, "Let's do it, just don't bleed too much." ”

A young man said, "Do you think we don't dare to do it?" ”

Zhang Wei said: "You like to do it or not, what does it matter to me? I don't know him." ”

"Cut!" the young man shouted, and the madman suddenly ran out of the warehouse again, pointed to several young men and said: "He is my father, I don't care if you cut him, I can cut whatever I like, but after I cut him, I will definitely avenge him." ”

This sentence attracted hatred, causing several people outside to laugh, and one guy crouched down and grabbed the madman's right hand and said, "Come here and cut it." ”

Zhang Wei smiled: "You don't believe him, then I'll say it again, you'd better believe him, because I plan to help him." ”

"Don't plan to do it, you come out now. Someone shouted from the other side.

Zhang was afraid and said, "You really don't know how to die? When I go out, do you still have a chance to stand?"

"Don't brag, if you have the ability, come out and fight. The man was frightened by his words.

Zhang Wei smiled: "You are lucky, I am now cultivating myself ......"

The more he did this, the more principals the guys outside, and the madman's father stopped talking. He lives in happiness, of course he knows how good Zhang is to fight, and now at this time, he really needs Zhang to be afraid and take action.

It's a pity that Zhang is afraid that he will not fulfill his wish, he will not go out, nor will he let the madman go out, and he will stand lazily, as if he is watching a play.

In the end, he didn't chop his hands, but he was beaten up and beat his father in front of his son, which made the madman angry and his eyes red.

Zhang was afraid and said: "If you can't see it, go out and fight." ”

The madman shook his head: "If you don't go, then it's not my father." ”

The madman's writing shouted while being beaten: "Turtle son, Lao Tzu gave birth to you in vain, just watching your father being beaten?"

Zhang Wei said: "It seems that the start is not heavy, you still have the energy and ability to speak." ”

Of course not, a few young people started on the side of the street in front of many people, beating the madman's father with a blue nose and swollen face before leaving, saying that next time he can't see the money, he will definitely chop his hands, and if he doesn't chop it, he will take your surname.

Waiting for those people to leave, the madman's father slowed down for more than 20 minutes, and after relieving, he pointed at Zhang Wei and scolded the madman, saying that he was blind and had bad luck in his previous life, so he gave birth to such a bastard son.

Just now, when the madman's father was beaten, the madman was originally a little guilty. Now it's gone, being scolded by this call, the madman just didn't have any ideas, and hung up the phone directly.

Zhang was afraid to watch it for a while, and let the madman go back to study, and he stayed outside to continue watching the excitement.

Naturally, I didn't look at it later, and the debtor scolded wildly, and in the end limped away.

Zhang was afraid that he wanted to say to him: "Go on, continue to scold, and see which of us can't help it first." ”

This night, the madman was affected, and he couldn't read the book even if he held it, so it was best to give up.

Regarding this kind of thing, Zhang was afraid that he would never be able to help, so he could only go back to the car and continue to work.

The next day, Zhang was afraid to take the big dog to the conservatory.

He hasn't taken dance classes since the camp was set up, and today he makes up for it.

As a result, while class was in progress, the madman's bastard dad went to the warehouse again, with a fruit knife in his hand, threatening to borrow money, kill himself if he didn't borrow money, and ask Twelve for his tuition.

This is a big farce, when a person is shameless and invincible, it is normal for anything to happen. For example, the police came, but the madman's father still didn't leave.

The police thought this guy was crazy, but they called the police, saying that Zhang was afraid of illegally imprisoning his son and violating the rules to make up classes during the winter vacation......

Not only the police, but also the journalists.

Zhang was afraid that he had just stayed in the dance academy for a while, and he was called back by phone, so he hurriedly apologized to Liu Xiaomei and chased him back frantically.

As soon as I came back, I was questioned by the police, asking if there was any conflict or anything about the relationship.

Zhang was afraid that it would be good to reply briefly, but he asked after a while, what happened?

The police just said last time, that someone called the police, that you kidnapped his son and didn't let him go home.

Zhang was afraid to say, "Is it useful to say what I say?"

The policeman said: "You have to have a good attitude, we are asking about the case, we are not asking about the criminal, we are actually asking you, you have to help yourself clear the suspicion." ”

Zhang was afraid and said helplessly: "It's just that thing, except for the matter of giving birth to a son, he hasn't done anything good, how can I explain it? His son is there, why don't you want to go home?"

It's a lively world, and don't forget that happiness is in the process of preparing for demolition.

When the crazy father came to Zhang to play scoundrels here, the fat man called: "Guo Gang has just arrested people." ”

"Guo Gang?" Zhang Wei asked.

"It's the police, and the police are starting to arrest people on a large scale. The fat man said.

Zhang was afraid to ask why? Why did he arrest people?

The fat man said, "You're asking me?"

Zhang was afraid to think for a while and said, "What about you?"

"We're okay, it's okay, today is a good luck, everyone is fine, but it's not in happiness, I don't dare to go back." The fat man said.

Zhang Wei asked: "Is it because of demolition?"

The fat man said: "Definitely, there are few good people in our place, and some bad people are, if you want to grasp the handle to check the case, six out of ten can't escape, I think you should also disappear for a while, otherwise it will be very dangerous." (To be continued.) )