Let's quibble
First of all, it's a pity that it's not a body update. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info
One reader said it well, and many people can't read it, that's the author's problem, so I'll try to quibble.
Book friends who think I have a little bit of truth in what I said then understand, and book friends who think I am full of nonsense should turn a blind eye.
This book is written up to now.,Strictly speaking, the male protagonist has only interacted with Lin Yun'er and Xu Xian.,Maybe it's logical to make such progress with Xu Xian, maybe everyone won't be so objectionable, right?Okay.,Please give some face to review the plot of Xu Xian and Lin Yun'er getting along with the male protagonist respectively.,Pay careful attention to the appearance of the two of them in front of the male protagonist.,And the difference between the male protagonist and the male protagonist.γ Big brothers, I deliberately didn't write the psychological description of the male protagonist, but the movements, postures, and language I indirectly express the emotions of the male protagonist.
Didn't find out?
Well, it's because I don't have enough pen power and I don't write clearly enough.
Let's get back to the subject of controversy - Lim Yoon's raid.
There is a premise for normal men and women to have feelings for each other, right? The man in this article is a bit special, and we add the element of letting him open the door of his heart. Therefore, the premise of letting the male protagonist interact with Lin Yuner is threefold. First, the mentality of the male protagonist tends to normalize, second, Lin Yuner has feelings for the male protagonist, and third, the male protagonist has feelings for Lin Yuner.
The first point is that the mentality is normalized, and the vacancy is waiting. I have a chapter on this point that devotes half a chapter to summarizing the changes in the male protagonist's mentality towards the relationship between men and women.,That is, you say it's water.,The chapters where the water has to have a very rhythm.,You can go back and take a look!
The second point is that Lin Yuner's feelings for the male protagonist are not explained, and he has them.
The third point is the male protagonist's feelings for Lin Yun'er.
From the first time they met, the male protagonist remembered Lin Yuner's eyes. And every time they meet, Lin Yuna shows a different charm and beautiful impression in front of him, even a man who is dedicated to Buddha will have a good impression of such a woman. In the article, in the scene where Lin Yuner did not appear, the male protagonist remembered some of Lin Yuner's traits out of thin air five or six times, and careful readers should have found it, which shows that the male protagonist has a deep impression of Lin Yuner. Secondly, the male protagonist's feelings for Lin Yun'er are accumulated little by little, and they are not abrupt, and every time he gets along with Lin Yun'er, you come and go, and he responds. From when SM met, he pretended not to know Lin Yun'er and cooperated, to taking the initiative to find a step for her to add food when he had dinner with Shaoshi, to buying supper for her for the first time, and preventing Lin Yun'er from dying, and then accompanied by the hospital, secretly helping to deal with Lin Yun'er's troubles, etc., and even including the previous reaction of the book friends to why Qi Zimo would comfort her for no reason, that was also his response to Lin Yun'er's good intentions to accompany her in advance.
Don't look at the male protagonist's very cold tone and attitude towards Lin Yuner's black belly, but the body is still very honest, don't you know that a cold and sullen man likes women to pester him, and then pretends not to see the bad habit of actually stealing fun in his heart?
Qi Zimo's response, does Lin Yun'er know? Of course she knows!
In Chapter 130 "Forced Rooming", when Lin Yuner dragged the male protagonist to the hotel room, when the male protagonist pretended to ask what she wanted to do, Lin Yuner thought that Qi Zimo would not know what he was going to do?
These two smart people vaguely felt a hint of each other's thoughts, and tacitly left room for development and contact.
Although everyone thinks that the first female protagonist Xu Xian gets along with the male protagonist the most, the interaction is much less than that of Lin Yuner and the male protagonist, and the overall bias is towards the initiative in the busy, and the male protagonist tends to be passive, which is why Xu Xian's image will be prominent obviously.
After analyzing it here, there is only one question left, why did the male protagonist choose Lin Yuner, who has a good impression of the two women, is it just that Lin Yuner happened to be the first to confess when the male protagonist was vacant?
There is a little factor that is the first to confess, but the decisive factor is not this, but the male protagonist thinks that he knows Lin Yuner enough, he feels that he has seen Lin Yun'er sad, painful, happy, naughty, difficult, intelligent, intellectual, considerate of various appearances, even if he understands this girl better, and roughly approves of her, so he is willing to get along with her further, this is what Qi Zimo said when he answered why Lin Yuner chose her: "I have seen you not laughing." β
The meaning is to show that he is not superficial in his understanding, but very comprehensive.
Relatively speaking, Xu Xian's appearance in front of the male protagonist is much simpler. Well-behaved, upright, mischievous, studious, kind, mostly tend to the good side, lack overall understanding.
Even if there is no Japanese mistake, Xu Xian and Qi Zimo have made progress after a normal date, and then Xu Xian has said that Qi Zimo will continue to observe until he sees her deeper and more comprehensive side.
This is one of the guidelines for the male protagonist to do things.,Understand it completely before you make an action.,I mentioned it three times when describing the male owner's career.,It's still in the chapter where you say it's very watery.γ
In other words, Xu Xian can't handle Qi Zimo in a short time, and without the help of external forces, Xu Xian, who takes getting along slowly as his core love idea, will not be in a hurry. Then if you think about Lin Yuner's mountain-like offensive, and how well she gets along with the male protagonist, maybe it will be Lin Yuner who takes the lead in winning the male protagonist.
I have already thought of these when I made the outline, Lin Yun'er's sudden appearance is not my temporary forced bloody plot, but to take advantage of the situation to come here, which is also in line with the original setting of the characters.
After writing so much, I hope everyone can understand that I'm not scribbling, just understand what I'm talking about, thank you for listening to the explanation, and if you don't understand, just let me quibble.
As for the shareholders who are busy with domestic stocks, don't be impatient, do you think PetroChina will go bankrupt?
I haven't had time to thank you for your support, I should add more when it is on the shelves, and I should add more when it is rewarded, I didn't express it, and I didn't even have time to reply to many comments, I'm really sorry for everyone.
But it's really helpless, and I'll do my best to compensate everyone for this time.
Here's a word to the book lovers who support the author and feel that this book can barely get into the eye, this book is not too strong.
The author's life in the next half month to one month can only be described as upheaval, time and space conditions do not allow me to focus on writing, and the specific time to settle down needs to be notified by the headquarters. In addition, I want to overhaul the chapters immediately after.,It's convenient for a certain big guy to appear.,So I have to weaken a lot of the plots that have been written before and a certain heroine.,So the update for the next period of time will be very unstable.,One moreγNo more may appear.,But it's still not a good sentence.γ
Of course, you will say that it sounds good, and there is a difference between weekly and monthly shifts, and annual shifts and not being too imprisoned?
Of course not, I'm an anxious person, I'm more anxious than you, I will write whenever I have time, and it is written with strict quality requirements, and everyone spends the last time of Korean entertainment together.
If you can, please read the book slowly, taste the dialogue, and try to think about the heroine's demeanor according to the text, maybe it will feel more, this is a little extravagant hope of the author.
Also, because there are a lot of characters, but there are still roughly time, events, and outline lines, the sentences that I connect the previous and the next in each chapter are rarely placed in the first sentence or the first part, but are shown in different ways. For example, in chapter 173 "Importance is also an attitude, and it is also a reply", why Qi Zimo and Lin Yun'er's sister met in a furniture store, it was mentioned earlier, first, it was mentioned above that the Zheng sisters don't like to pick, and second, it was mentioned earlier that Lin Yun'er's sister wanted to buy a small bookshelf for her child, so they met. For example, in Chapter 174 "A Good Show", why Qi Zimo suddenly went to SM was because he asked Secretary Hua to lift the ban on Zheng Xiuyan at MBC earlier, so he went to SM to solve the problem because SM was deeply rooted and had no obvious effect. There are reasons for this, it's not a blind writing, I just didn't write it clearly in the vernacular, I hope readers pay more attention to it.
What do you want to say in the end?
Everyone should be happy when reading books, novels are novels, personal ideas are strong, don't take reality too seriously. I don't like it, so I give up the book and read it.,Why are you angry as if you have a lot of hatred.γ
Well, it's good for everyone to have fun.