Anyway, this book started to follow very early.,It's about forty or fifty chapters.Although I often read book reviews.,But I've never posted anything.,People are lazy.But these two days when I see the author's words.,I'm also going to complain.

I remember I saw in a previous post that the title of the book was bad, in fact, I was attracted by the title, and the first feeling at the time was that this book might be a little humorous, and the text would be more plain, and indeed the name was also very suitable for the content behind.

But,(Haha,But it's coming.,It's the most annoying thing to say when I was in a meeting.,Because there's always a lot of follow.,I'll try to be as brief as possible),Straight to the point.,This book is of course a good book overall.,But I think it's too long at the beginning.,It's completely like I've written four or five chapters and I don't know what to write.I just read the previous post about Lin Ling's female protagonist or something.,Anyway,After I read a few chapters at the time,I'm skeptical about whether Wu Wending is the male master.,I thought about all possibilities., Even if he's a trick to add a halo to the male protagonist who appeared later, I've thought about it.It wasn't until I entered the temple that I was sure.,Xiao Wu is the male owner.,There's nothing else to do.After all, it's not the time of the country.,There are few novels.,Everyone still has patience.I don't know how others are.,I almost gave up after reading four or five chapters at the beginning.,That is, I think the text is not bad.,I insisted on a few more chapters before I slowly followed.

I think if you want to grab new readers, it is necessary to get off to a good start.Especially like this kind of book,It must be able to attract talents.Otherwise, even if others see this book, turn two or three chapters,Maybe they will give up.Otherwise, in my opinion,No matter what,Such a novel can't only have the current results.I just read it and clicked less than a thousand.Especially a character like Lin Ling,It's basically not much role in the book.So look at it again, Setting such a character just makes the writing more loose.Although everyone knows that there must be such characters in life.,Everyone also thinks that such a girl is cute.But for this article,It's better not to have a supporting character to be plump and brilliant.But the text must be less.Not to mention the important place at the beginning.

Above, the words of a family.

In addition, I hope that this book can have a good ending, and I wish the new book a big hit.

PS: The first time I reviewed the book so many words.I accidentally retreated to other pages in the middle once.Orz~

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